Zehell2218
The story is interesting, the main character is a bug on a normal transmigration novel and the plot becomes tangled and cute. There are some author thoughts in the middle of the chapters which is somewhat fresh. The grammar could improve and sometimes the author gets in to much detail about levels and currency. I really hope the pace increases, we know from chap. 1 the Lead is a translator but it seems it will take a hundred chapters for her to know. So, a good plot and characters, but poor development. Still gonna keep on reading it though.
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The story line so far is very good, but you need to do some editing and rewriting as readers will be turned off your novel if you continue the way you are, yes it will effect you updating but it will be a better experience for the reader in the future which should be the goal of a writer. To create a beautiful fiction world.
It's pretty interesting since this plot is refreshing. Not too heavy, and kinda like "ice bucket in summer"?? Wkwkwkwk π... Well, I like this novel for sure, because the ML is "too slow" and sometimes I just wanna punch him straight in his face... π€£π€£ Well, Chen (I like this name weew π) maybe you should eat some "vinegar" or more before you realize that "feeling"... π Well, Matur Nuhun teteh author for the novel... π
Finally something not so cliche in a cliche background.. I mean transmigation is quite popular now a days, but going for a not so cliche way for doing so is awesome. I loooovvvvveeed the idea, but I can't wait to see the future chapters. That's why I go for completed stories, although there aren't many completed stories here in webnovel. But, common, the theme, storyline and the characters are far too fun to resist enjoying that long.. Update fast.... Waiting waiting.
This story is a fresh spin on the typical transmigration story, but what I find interesting is that the "typical" transmigration story line and it's main character tendencies/op powers in this novel specifically seem to be combinations of other popular light novel story plots/ character developments I have read in the past, which I personally think is genius. The author really knows the tropes and uses it to incorporate new and interesting elements in the story of a character who has a "different perspective and cheats" than the usual main character leads. The fact that I have read a whole ton of typical transmigration stories before reading this novel has given me major Deja vu vibes and to be honest it adds a whole 'nother layer of enjoyment to the story. If anyone has read "Good for nothing Seventh Lady", they may find some scenes similar. Even the name of a certain shop in the story can be associated with "Shen Yi Di Nu", if memory serves me correctly. A whole lot of other novel story plots seem to be present in this novel as well, although I can't list them all at the moment. Anyways, What I love the most is how relatable the mc is in this story. She hits the nail on the head when expressing her emotions about seeing a novel come to life in front of her. Being a third party reader is waaaaay different from being a side character and I can appreciate how she tries her best and how her thought process influences her actions.
After reading works from different authors about transmigration, it is very common to see a MC that is overbearing, heaven defying cultivation and so many cheats. And the plot would always be about revenge and talk about th MC that's a secret agnt or general, doctor etc . So when i saw this work of art, and theirs "translator" in it, somehow gets me curious. So i tried reading it, and BOOM! π₯π₯ I WAS AWED! THIS WORK IS A GEM! i expected the same results and flow from other transmigation stories, but its not. Its actually reversed and the MC is just great! Im thankful that i decided to read this. To the author, editors, translators or anyone thats behind this work of art. Thank you , it was a great work!
If i can sum it really short thn: its a story about a Female Lead stealing the Male Lead's heart from another 'Female Lead'!! LoL dis story have really unique n great plotline not those typical/same plotline repeated with some subtle changes n names=___= there's a bit rapey scene at first which u wont like but later the story is sooooooo goood, dat u wont really mind the rapey scenario~~~
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