The story is interesting, the main character is a bug on a normal transmigration novel and the plot becomes tangled and cute. There are some author thoughts in the middle of the chapters which is somewhat fresh. The grammar could improve and sometimes the author gets in to much detail about levels and currency. I really hope the pace increases, we know from chap. 1 the Lead is a translator but it seems it will take a hundred chapters for her to know. So, a good plot and characters, but poor development. Still gonna keep on reading it though.
Zehell2218
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LIKEAuthor, if you find yourself needing a proofreader or editor my door is wide open! I might not be the best, but I could correct some of the grammatical errors to make the text a bit easier on the eye.
Zehell2218:thank you for your suggestion! It will not be that long for LSY to discover her ability as a translator, i promised that. As for grammar i am writing this novel as a way to improve my grammar đ btw thx u for your review~ keep loving my novel okay?
MoonBerry:Author, if you find yourself needing a proofreader or editor my door is wide open! I might not be the best, but I could correct some of the grammatical errors to make the text a bit easier on the eye.
Zehell2218:thank you for your suggestion! It will not be that long for LSY to discover her ability as a translator, i promised that. As for grammar i am writing this novel as a way to improve my grammar đ btw thx u for your review~ keep loving my novel okay?
Zehell2218:thank you for your suggestion! It will not be that long for LSY to discover her ability as a translator, i promised that. As for grammar i am writing this novel as a way to improve my grammar đ btw thx u for your review~ keep loving my novel okay?
Zehell2218:thank you for your suggestion! It will not be that long for LSY to discover her ability as a translator, i promised that. As for grammar i am writing this novel as a way to improve my grammar đ btw thx u for your review~ keep loving my novel okay?