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Sorry my review is late. I have no excuse. I'm slack. I'm glad I was. I've seen this story grow to become a magnificent beast. Still more to come. You want action? You got! Top quality writing and grammar? It's in the bag. Solid characters you'll love, dislike, adore or want to throw a knife at? You got it. It's all here and more. Why this story isn't featured? It needs glory!! I give 5 star glory it deserves. Keep it up.

Well, story written by mu lil sister so ofcourse I would like it and I hope you do as well *glares*. But joking aside, I was pretty intrigued by its title and its cover and decided to read it. I don't want to put in a long analysed review so I will say that its pretty good novel with good writing pattern, alteast readable and easily imaginable.

Action, drama, slapping face, fanatic lovers yup everything is here to make you throw in complex relationships. Female characters are all brave and unstoppable. Male characters are all hot and nobody can leave after contact. This story full of explosions between feelings. Go and read it. You'll understand.

i almost died. deym gurl, you nailed it. *literally was like waht while reading cause wadafa am i doin' with my life.* lemme join their body swap and let them live my boring life and imma live their life 😂😂

Other reviewers have already said all, good writing, the story development is original and we want to know what would happen next, we can sense very well the human side of the characters and their despair and fear. I like it!! I will read it whole.

I read your work and honestly, I feel that I should not judge such a masterpiece.I really liked the fact that both MC's were not submissive.They had their own traits that made them human rather than 2-D characters.The only problem was use of comparatives and superlatives in the beginning .Other than that, your work is perfect.

Very interesting read! I love these types of books! Different worlds and body swapping all rolled into one! Great! I like how the FLs were amazing,and not the stereotypical flimsy girls that we see almost everywhere. Good job!

I like the story so far. It's interesting they need to swap bodies. I like to see more of their interaction with other people from each of their world. For a non-English speaker like me, I could read it easily with no difficulty. Thank you for your story and keep going, author! :)

Readability is superb. So is sentence variety as well as the control of passive voice in the author's work. Author has a tendency to repeat some words (like was) though but nothing deal breaking. Quite a refreshing read.

Really liked this story! It’s written well, and there are only few very minor typos (just added spaces or lack of a space, the was thr in chp 12 iirc). Yi Lan is the bomb. Yi Meng is ok, but I imagine she’ll grow a lot. Still waiting on the clarity of the male MLs in both worlds lol. But I suppose author will make us sigh with more than one potential ML. Since you stuck only to two perspectives, the two FLs, the going back and forth wasn’t hard to follow. You also have a good amount of detail. The best was Yi Lan’s fight before death. The long backstory of Yi Lan’s identity told by Chief was a bit long; however, it was informative and you built a cool hidden organization. Definitely will be following this story! Added~

The author has done a pretty good job in portraying both the female and male MC’s with their confusion when swapping bodies and the various emotions and reactions when it happened. All in all the writing quality is not bad however punctuations can be improved on and sometimes there are lacking comma’s and also some sentences that can be one is split into two with a full stop. Story development is still on going but it looks to be going on a pretty good path. All in all i think the author has done a pretty good job but more effort can be put into world development especially since this is split between two worlds.

Very interesting story concept -- body swapping but the owners are in two different worlds. There are so many things to explore in that, so I hope the author enjoys playing around with the worlds and characters she's built because that would translate to a reader also having fun following the story. Keep at it :)

You write it greatly, even with my ability to focus on something is limited to the point of zero, I managed to finish a chap. Don't get me wrong, I can't really sit still and just read. Applause for the cool author here. (5 stars because, why not?)

Hi author! I love the FL's fighting spirit. The story's flow is good. Writing quality is great. The concept itself is great. We need moooooorrrreeeee!!!!! Keep up the good work. I love it😍

Great work author. great story. I love body swipe type of plots. smooth story development. good writing quality. update more. totally recommend it.

why there are only four review for this great novel. Let me be the fifth. Overall great novel. writing quality is good. world background is forming as it is early chapters. i just hope that we could get more chapters daily!

First things first, writing quality is too good, I am actually a little jealous 😂. The concept, story and character development also improves as the story progresses. Personally I love a reincarnation or body swapping story, so full marks for content & plotting. Hope you continue writing this with more stability in updates.

This novel shows a lot of potential! It has a great start! Give it a try and you won't be dissapointed! Vivid descriptions and action packed scenes. Its has drama and fun on equal parts. Writing quality its very good and the character design its well tought. World background is slowly developing and it looks like it is gonna be solid enough in the near future.Story development is good but it could be better if the transitions were done in a smoother manner. Overall , a very good story!

I really loved the beginning of this novel..It's an attention grabber and i like how Yi Lan is a tough female lead..I stopped at chapt. 4 for now so i'm not sure how she is when she switches body. I'm enjoying it. good job!