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This novel shows a lot of potential! It has a great start! Give it a try and you won't be dissapointed! Vivid descriptions and action packed scenes. Its has drama and fun on equal parts. Writing quality its very good and the character design its well tought. World background is slowly developing and it looks like it is gonna be solid enough in the near future.Story development is good but it could be better if the transitions were done in a smoother manner. Overall , a very good story!