Morning Star LL
The story is focused on the personage of Lu Zhou who is a poor student that thinks about how to earn money much than studying and fails. The narrative style is good. The expressions are meant. The description is rich and there are some lively scenes.It seems credible and reveals a student's university experience. Keep on it!
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