GloriaG
I'm really lost with this novel. Like it's hard to read with the author kind of going in circles, mentioning different plot points and then abandoning them too quickly that it just hurts my brain. I would have to backtrack and re-read the sentence before I finally understand what's happening. I think if the author took time to elaborate with the details a bit more, it would improve but great effort so far.
The story seems as if it’s just dramas thrown together to create something that hardly explains the scene. There are people brought up that do no make any sense to the current time frame. I can look pass the grammar and punctuation, but I cannot deal with the stupid FL!!!!! She is by far the worst FL lead that I have read and I’m not kidding! Honestly I do not see much in her future when it comes to her development as a character.
Sorry it was hard to understand this storyline from where it started and where it going I was confused and stop reading at some point I really like the plot but how it define the whole the story that depends really I can't understand quite confusing... don't mind author it's my honest review it is not to offend anyone
This fist story I have read where I confuse. I think the flow of the story needs to be better. Also I do think should be that weak. I understand in chapter one because of her being nieave of what he boy friend and her so call best friend did to her with a time jump with a child fl should have mature a lot more. It shame the author is making the daughter smarter that the mother. Also there is no way I would have kept the truth from my dad because he her only parent. I did read a story where the kid was smarter than the mother (She was so dumb) he was consider a genius in story and stated his own company. I drop the story. I am sure if I am going to continue to read. Everyone has their ow flavor in what story the want to write and you have to respect that.🙄