Review Detail of mbltango in A Pampered Wife’s Notebook

Item: A Pampered Wife’s Notebook
Rating: 1

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mbltangoLv55yrmbltango

Gave up after Chapter 9. I’m sure Author can try a bit harder. You can do it! It started quite promising but Author leaves her scenes hanging and then jumps to the next one without much continuity.

A Pampered Wife’s Notebook

GloriaG

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Justjoe124Lv6Justjoe124

Would like to know why you gave up on it.

4yr

mbltangoLv5mbltango

The English needs a looooooot of improvement. My brain short-circuited trying to understand the chapters. After a few chapters, I just felt that it wasn’t worth it. Sorry. Maybe Author should re-edit the chapters.

4yr

Ayona_midnightLv11Ayona_midnight

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mbltango:The English needs a looooooot of improvement. My brain short-circuited trying to understand the chapters. After a few chapters, I just felt that it wasn’t worth it. Sorry. Maybe Author should re-edit the chapters.

4yr