Review Detail of AmberOfLightW in A Pampered Wife’s Notebook

This fist story I have read where I confuse. I think the flow of the story needs to be better. Also I do think should be that weak. I understand in chapter one because of her being nieave of what he boy friend and her so call best friend did to her with a time jump with a child fl should have mature a lot more. It shame the author is making the daughter smarter that the mother. Also there is no way I would have kept the truth from my dad because he her only parent. I did read a story where the kid was smarter than the mother (She was so dumb) he was consider a genius in story and stated his own company. I drop the story. I am sure if I am going to continue to read. Everyone has their ow flavor in what story the want to write and you have to respect that.🙄