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For a while I have read over all the cut and paste concepts on the Pokemon world trying to make the host strong as well as his Pokemon using the gamer system. I understand it's a dangerous world and you want to give the MC extra plot Armour. I thought about this and realized that the host would rarely fight in matters that needed strength except in situations that dealt with Legendaries. If that becomes par for course though in the story. What's the point of making this a long term novel that deals with the growth of a character. I would've set this as a short novel that deals with an overpowered MC that one shots all situations that need it. Also I wish to point out that Pokémon have sentience. The world also has abundant food with berries being around and the things that happen in Pokedex's in the games, I'm gonna try to stay partially away from as this is rated at a rating lower than 18+. (That's mostly because I find cursing unnecessarily to be just plain bad etiquette. I can understand if it happens when something bad occurs and you can't control your mouth. But flippant use of them just to annoy people is just that. Annoying...) The original story is also about friendship, journeying, and finding a purpose in the world they're in with their friends. Sabrina, Dawn, and May deal with contests. While Ash, and Iris love battling. Brock even finds a purpose on his journey as a breeder fully going into the field instead of just pursuing it as a side hobby like before when he had to take care of his brothers. As such I find it, while not useless for writing. A complete disappointment and withdrawal from the nature of what this world represents. What with hope and friendship being these main parts, and if you're fighting every creature you meet into submission. How is it possible for you to truly bond beyond servant and subject. Another thing is inside this story I will not limit the host to having 6 Pokemon on his being. No this would only apply to gyms or competitions as these kinds of things would require a more formal structure. I have decided on a new idea for this system that instead focuses on the Pokemon themselves. This includes knowledge, buffs, items and so on. The system will be less of a RPG stat layout directly as this still exists. But the stats come from training with the other stuff like others would train in a real world. The exception being Buffs. He can also use the system to build a utopia for his Pokemon. He can even slow down the time inside to gain larger training time later on for specific species which grow slower like Ninetails or various Ghost Pokemon. Enough of this Synopsis and rant though and on to the story. Ps. It's obvious, but I don't own this image. So I take no credit for it. And if someone eventually would like to make an image for this story I will thank you. Sincerely. PPS: Comments help me keep my want to write. When I notice there's not a lot of comments. I second guess my writing, like a lot. Probably for a good reason as I know I like to over analyze things, and I KNOW that's gonna influence my writing. I can see it deeply ingrained. So if you guys like my style please comment.
You know I had always wondered about the difference between different professions in the Pokémon world. I pondered on the nature of different jobs and how they would play out. Like fire types heating up your food, or water types brewing tea with scald. Psychics sorting out paperwork or electric types powering the factories. Detective work, breeding, researching, doctors, exorcists, and so on. What nature would all these jobs need of the trainer and his partner to be the best in what they did. A world unlike the one we see now with friends by your side as you explore. It always fascinated my younger mind. It was interesting, you know?
Then onto the nature of trainers. Would they truly be as respected as the shows display? If all people had a supernatural force of nature with them would fighting be the main thing people cared about. The interactions of people would be bigger, and I feel trainers should have a smaller reputation than they do. Then again maybe trainers would be more like athletes we think of now, with only the most physically fit specimens fighting it out for top positions would be on display.
Then doctors, how would they memorize all that information? Would healing affect them somehow to promote it or would psychic types need to implant all that information? The similar nature and looks of so many people like the nurse joys how would it be explained. I wanted to write and explore it from an outside standpoint looking at the adventures of another person in that interesting world, and I feel that some other people also agreed with that sentiment from the views of this story and all the comments. Saying this I would like to welcome you young trainers to the world of Pokémon for what it is. A World!!! Not just fighting scenes one after another.
