Reviews of The Fan Fiction Life of Kai

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Okay pretty cool idea..... but then I see this "Because you are walking around bare foot only in you boxers…but I am not complaining because I love what I am seeing" replied Strom as she bite her lower lip. UHH? There would never be someone who would say some **** like that to another person 5 seconds after first meeting each other. IT'S SO CRINGEY. Especially NOT storm. I mean seriously.... Think about it, if you see a crazy attractive guy/girl are you gonna immediately start harping about how sexy they are??? You might be nicer to them and try to get to know them but it wouldn't be the first damn thing out of your mouth

Garbage, fucking garbage more garbage fanfic stories coming on this site, just be a self-insert that is reasonable and likable that’s all I’m asking for, read The Spider for a GOOD example

Jesus Christ. That is an awesome novel. Mc is kryptonian without having the weakness of kryptonite. And even more he is in marvel universe. Awesome. Only question is how will he get back his cloths??? Normal clothes will never hold on him.

Loving it so far interesting idea, ideas thought through well, if interested in superhero’s or like fan fiction strongly recommend. Lots of ways to develop excited to see where author takes this.

Super fucking cringe. The characterisation is horrible. If you want to enjoy this AT ALL then don't think that these are your favourite characters, they're not. The writing is bad, repeating things for no reason and they just say everything, no showing at all.

I like op my characters so I am definitely a fan of your novel. One mistake I noticed that people who make op characters do is make the character fight one battle after another after another. The best thing to do with an op character is to make the story plot driven and the fights to showcase the mic. Super man is an op character and in a universe without kryptonite and his weakness to magic gone he is unstoppable. He is everything proof.

started reading it. fell in love with it. Sorry not sorry "I am the Bone of my Sword Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood. I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood Pain to create many Weapons Yet those Hands will never hold Anything. So, as I Pray-- Unlimited Blade Works"

I'm starting to like this casual lifestyle . Let him continue leisurely getting stronger, no need to go on a power crazed journey like most other novels.

In Earth,southeast asia,Burma republic nation,at May Town,normal guy working as a monk for 8 days with a boring life died at night during sleep,painless death.His soul is collected be a only remaining Goddess of moon. MC:where am I? He is currently at a room with ancient decoration. Goddess:hello,Wunna,Im a sole Goddess of All Universe. Wunna:Oh,You are a Goddes?So where are the other Gods?Why am I here? Goddess:You are dead during sleep and I called you because Im a lonely God and bore to dead and I called you because I want you accesend into Godhood.I need a partner or husband for coming eternity.But I cannt make you a God now,I dont have enough power for that.You have to achieve in mortal world,so I will send you to parallel Earth with some Immortal gifts.About other Gods,millions years ago,A war break out and all the gods including Olympians,Asgards and Jade palace died due to supreme destruction wepon and I was lucky due to visiting at mortal realms.So Im the lonly one now.I choose you to be my Husband because you never **** a virgin and only prostitutes and whores.So I pity you and you have good deeds by not committing any crimes.Then Im a Virgin Goddes,I will await you until you become a god.Satisfied now,future hubby? Wunna:wow,thats awesome.Ok,I will become a god,so send me into low realm. Goddess:I can give you ,immortality, not a weapon or thing in that world can bleed you,you will be forever young and Strength of a hundred men,speed of the fallen star,can teleport within a thousand miles and character creation.But you have to become a god before that world aged and destroyed by comprehending laws and emotions,you can do whatever you want in that world.Enjoy the funs,dont forget that Im waiting yiu,love.Now create your body. Wunna:thanks you,honey.I need six ** ab,6 ft 2in tall,white skin,face of Damon of Devil may cry game. Goddess:Granted,I will send you into that world, have funs.bye. Wunna:hahha,thanks sweethear In a forest, suddenly a space rip appear and a man was walking off.He is tall and white skin ,muscular slim body and black short hairs and blue eyes.He is wearing a V shaped neck black T-shirt ,Long cotton black coat,black fit pant,military boots,A sword looks like one in Lord of the rings movie which is mc king's sword.Sword is silver colour similar cross-guard. Wunna:Wow,here Iam with awesome physiqe and powers.hahahha.I need to know where am I and where is nearest town.I will teleport into next 500 miles to the west. Suddenly,3D door appear near a city,a man walk off.Ohh,I see a city now,I will explore and get intel and time to have funs. 4 horse pulling carriage was moving in a road lead to the Paris, and 20 knights are escorting it.In the carriage,a princess was sitting with 2maids. Elena,maid:Princess-sama,we are arriving soon.The king will be very happy to see you.You are the only daughter. Princess Catherine:I really miss my parents. Suddenly the carriage stop,a knight is knotting in the window. Knight:your highness,a man is stopping our carriage looks like a bandid with weired clothes.Should we kill or catch him? Princess:just catch him that stupid peasant.Dont bother with small matter. Knight cap:hey peasant, move away or die. Wunna:I just want to talk and you want me die,you mere mortal,kneel or disperse. kmight cap:just beat him to dead my guys. 2knights with shining silver armor came forward and they punch at him and their hands cracked . 2 knights screamed. Wunna came forward and beat the whole 20 knights like bullying.Wunna came to the carriage and open the door.He see 3 beauties,one of them like a princess. Princess:How dare you insult me in my kingdom,peasant?What do you want?You will not get away,the whole Europe will after you if you do something to me? Wunna:wow.Im scared my love.ah ah.hehe.I laugh.Initially I just want to ride a carriage but your bodyguards are so rude.so things get ugly.So if you dont want to get raped or killed,lead me to your palace now.I will take one of the horses now. Princess:Ok,lets see if you still dare arrogant in front of my father royal knights and mages.Set off. Wunna:oppos,Im scared.Unfortunately for you,nothing in this world harm me.Whatever,go quickly and serve me a cup of wine.I miss the cigrattes. The maids quickly serve him a wine bottle.Wunna quickly drink the wine and feel relax by rising Knight's armored horse.The group move into the palace.

It's really good. I like it. Keep going. Put some more chapters in this one. . . . 140140140140140140140140140140 140140104104104104104104140140

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Really enjoying this Banana a a mwahHhhHahHhhahHhhH

Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."

I like where this is going. Fuck qidan with this 140 ****, if I had a choice I would kill the person that came up with this ****, I always have to write more for it to reach 140 characters.

Writing is stable Updates are more than I can expect from an original story. Story is progressing well so far. Character is fine for the type of story this is. World background is not original obviously, but writer makes unique use of it.

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