Shikamaru Nara

its a very good idea, the story has good development, and the writing quality is very good. the main complaints however are the fact that all chapters are extremely small, the lack of updates are also a big turn off, likewise the main problem being that if you haven't read or watched naruto in depth it would be impossible to follow as most of the chapters are very very vague. its basically a synopsis of what the author planned on writing. as in each paragraph is the "cut down explanation" of what essentially happened (excluding the minimum conversations). this could only work if the story is constantly updated or developed by longer chapters with more detailed descriptions of how things developed in such a way.

It’s like a robot is writing this... everything is very disconnected and it’s hard to get invested into the story. Would like to see a rewrite when the authors ability improves.