Reviews of Marvel Invincible Talisman
Marvel Invincible Talisman
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My second review here. I would like to correct that while this fanfic is indeed just the translation of a chinese fanfic in the beginning, but it gets very different as the story progresses. The original one is very boring as the M.C doesn't have chaos stone. That means he stays stupid and he only have the 12 spells all the way till the end. The author here changed many things and made this fanfic really great.
The grammar is very bad, but this is a very good novel. I don't understand why someone wouldn't translate it. If there is anyone who can speak chinese and have some extra time to kill, I think many people would want to read it. On the other hand, I thank the translator for making the effort. I really appreciate it. Keep it up.
I cant read this no more. The mc is so retarded and brainless. He keeps doing stupid decisions over and over again i just cant take it anymore. And the MC is supposed to be that way. So if you like retarded dumb MC's that keep making stupid decisions that make no sense. Other then maybe to piss off the readers. Then you will like this fanfic. But if you like even some what smart MC's that think before they act then this is not for you. I think this MC has some learning disabilities.
This started out rough for me to read & get into but... I'm glad I stayed with it. It's surprising that its intriguing to me! Acknowledgement of Novel Troupes Systems in the beginning was clever in a way. A very distinct way of showing how unique your novel concept truly is! Bringing two things that usually would never touch. Everyone is So use to Pb& j troupe concepts of novels that a peanut butter and banana sandwhich cought readers by surpise blew minds alittle, aleast from what I see of other reviews of this novel. Might not be for everyone but I like grew to like it! I remember jack adventures on Saturday mornings. I liked it then and never realized how OP those abilities could be in another world background, & in one person! Bravo for taking a chance. Not ignoring every plot hole questions as your story is progressing refreshing. Questions like, duality of heroics : kill or capture or how the mc is more comfortable with women after he wasn't a few chapters before, how he came to power, where that power is and came from. The pondering of such questions maybe too quickly solved almost as soon as they are brought up, but I like it. quickly establishing the MCs beliefs. Also aleast they are answered with a reasonable explanation(as far as reason goes in a novel). I like your Mc, endless potential for his power and character & story development. I Hope this gets better & continues to the natural ending & not another dropped novel on this site, cause for once I'm not entirely sure what that ending of this is!so many possibilities! That some how makes it a more interesting read. I guess I like peanut butter and banana sandwhichs now so...Good stuff. It's earned my power stones!
the question is do i f my mind until the good part comes or just leave the novel and dont f my mind, ´`__``:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::F This Shit
Story has good development but weird English and grammar. Like sometimes the author puts in words that don't fit the context of the sentence or he may make up terms for things in the MCU. Powers are promising and the story has good potential but I'd recommend maybe an editor. Heck, you can ask one of your readers for help with english as well.
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What the fu*k is up with the mc he’s not going to get more power other the 12 spells what the fu* k plus why is he always without a suit plus why not get suit from wukanda I think the mc is slow please make him more aware of the world around him. He’s relaxed and thinks that the spells can face Thanos with the enfinity gountlet what the hell make his when to desire more power in order to protect the ones he loves .thanks for the chapter keep writing ✍️ 💯💯💯💯💯support
Reading through it im just confused about how the mc acts, if he says he needs to be sneaky then he actually has to reflect it, not give away his secret identity in the first encounter. Am I the only one who might actually make a plan before running into the world with powers? Considering how dangerous it is. I don't want to lose brain cells reading this.
I don't write reviews often but Jesus I had to say something. The MC is an utter idiot to the point that when you read it makes you cringe and feel like your IQ is steadily dropping. the actions of the mc just feel like they are made by a 4 year old who has no concept of normalcy. it doesn't help that the grammar and writing quality is atrocious. I had such high hopes for this novel but my god I just couldn't handle the quality.
This Fan-fic does seem to have potential. The protagonist is not smart from the start, but it makes sense considering the fact that he was just a normal civilian that suddenly got Magical Powers. The only issue that this Novel has is the HORRIBLE grammar! I think some mentioned how this is actually translated? (I am not sure.) But the translator could've at least bothered to clean up the chapters....
This novel has shown itself as a really great idea of a Marvel fanfiction and would have been one of the best. Sadly the author is a racist person and does stereotypical situations from an asian point of view. In one chapter, he literally called an African American a "Black People" and used him in a situation where this person robbed a "White-collar person" of her brand-named purse. Then he further goes on to explain that more "White men" chased the "Black People" and beat him for the ladies purse. I thought this was 2019? why is this person allowed to share any of his racist ideas on the web? The author doesn't even try to hid anything and also uses bad grammar. This "novel" or "Fanfiction" is ridiculous and should be reported.
This is definitely not my cup of tea. (I always wanted to say this phrase hahaha). English is not my mother lenguage so please be patient. First of all I must say that the idea of the talismans was original and with a lot of potential. It makes it different from other novels and I like it. I like intelligent characters and considering that it is in the Marvel universe I think you have to have some brain to survive. Our MC is a normal person almost scratching stupidity. I will give some examples. SPOILER ALERT !!! The first time he kills someone to save a girl, he removes the mask to vomit (I understand it and is very realistic considering that in his previous life he was a normal student) but after telling Sofia not to say anything about him he begins to reveal almost all his powers just because she is pretty, he even says that at all times he was with her he was excited (he uses the excuse that he was never close to a woman) and if it were not for a power of his he would have looked like his little brother was getting up (WTF !!) But this does not end there, after he gets his superhero suit and runs with his super speed without activating stealth, in a moment he stops and everyone starts to see him, instead of running away he stands until they start take pictures, etc. Then when he comes back into reason he goes to his house and stops again so that all his neighbors see him, although he makes them faint later, but the damage is already done and he doesn't care. I wouldn't be surprised if Shield came to knock on his door. Another case and the last example is how after losing his job he gets 1 million which he doesn't spend on anything productive (he buys a house nothing more, which I don't complain about). First he wanted to start a business, then he wanted to get a job in which his powers served but he could not think of any (He had studies until secondary level so I can understand that it is difficult to find a job) however instead of using the money he had left over for something he ends up wasting it. BUT!!! I repeat !!! I prefer the intelligent characters or as a normal person, many could find this novel as comic or maybe they don't even agree with my opinion and think they have a normal or ready level of intelligence, I know. I only write my opinion and I only read until chapter 18. I, when deciding to read a novel, always read the comments and never mind these, I always read some chapters before judging it. I do not know if I will continue reading the novel, you can see some spoilers on the titles and I read that he was going to join the avengers and I am interested to know what he is going to do since 90% of shield are from Hydra but this is only for quench my curiosity.