Reviews of Transmigration Service

Do take this with a grain of salt, my dear, as I've only read through the first few chapters. First off is your synopsis. It feels kind of broken to me. It doesn't really explain the whole situation that's going on in your story. A synopsis has to be eye-catching and attention grabbing, which you've failed to do on mine. I was instead filled with questions which I presume would be answered on the novel itself.

Favorite character: CEO Bai please add more scenes for CEO Bai, please I'm begging you, ah! Jokes aside, I enjoy it very much. Writing quality: A few grammar mistakes here and there, nothing too big. I am certain my novels have those little grammar mistakes too. Also, overuse of "ah!", please tone it down a bit. 4/5 Stability of updates: It seems very unstable 4/5 Story development: The pace you set for the novel is dangerously fast. You need to have millions of ideas stockpiled otherwise you're gonna get writer's block pretty quickly. With that said, the fast pace is enjoyable, and the comedy, while sometimes rather silly, makes me chuckle. Also, tsundere is best dere. 5/5 Character design: I don't know much about "character design" and whatnot, so here's a 5/5 World background: This too, I don't know much about it, so a 5/5 as well in total, 4.6/5 ~ 5/5

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.* Constructive Criticism: I honestly have none, except I would have suggested that you remove all chapters and then start anew from this novel here rather than start a new novel. Positive Feedback: I think this novel is very well written, I hope when I finally review the other version, I will think it is the same or better quality.;,;. Personal Feedback: I'm sorry, if the story is the same as it is in this one, I will only read the first 5 chapters of the new novel due to this type of story not really being my cup of tea, I will review that one as #42 in my library.

Forget 140 words. Just gonna give stars 🤪🤪🤪🤫🤫🤫🤫🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻

One word: Impressive! The writing is smooth and shows GREAT promise, and honestly, I'm hooked! Excellent setting, and I can't wait to see what happens next! There are a few very minor grammar mistakes, but I've already seen you getting better...keep at it! Awesome job!

I LOVE THIS BOOKS! From the funny FL and the shameless ML, I love them! Their banter is cute 😆😆😆 I'm so curious about their past Your writing is so good. The sentence structures are well constructed too. I really hope you won't stop writing this book. And from each chapter, I could see how much efforts you've put in it. All the best for the upcoming chapters!

Oh my goodness, I love the female lead! She's so intelligent, firm, and sound very wise! I'm usually not the type to read books about the entertainment industry, especially the ones that goes in depth with writing the steps, but this book has definitely caught my interest! Will definitely read on ^~^

The story is kinda cute. HAHAHAHA! Am I allowed to say that? But really, the story is great and it's unique. Keep it up😊😊 Looking forward for more

I really enjoyed the story. The writing style and the theme reminds of some of my favorite dramas. As early as now, I find the main pairing really cute. It's also good to find a female MC that's actually smart and good at what she does. Huang Liwei is a very likable character. I can't wait to read how the story progresses and read more interactions between the two main characters. I did notice some grammar errors. But still, it was an engaging story which made me smile.

I love the MC ❤️ And i'll be waiting for the next updates!!! The author writes very well, so the story will just get better with the actual development. Because of that, I recommend this lovely novel, even if it doesn't have a lot of chapters!

It is actually too early to comment. But your writing style is good. I didn't find much grammar mistakes. It seems like a reverse harem 😍😍 Is it? Need more chapters😉

This novel is soooo cute! I love the FL and hm.. I'm not sure if that Han guy is the ML but anyway! Imma ship them since they're making me soooooo kilig! (idk what's kilig in english tho sorry but it's um that kind of excited/happy feelings towards a couple) Hahahah! I'm glad to read this novel and and I can't wait for more chapters~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~ (time to go back studying, I'm so inspired by the FL 😍😍)

Your novel's summary really intrigued me and I've added it in my library because it's kinda' different from the novels I've read before and. Thank God it's not like those long chapters that usually bore the fk outta me. You're descriptive in many aspects of the story. The design of characters seems also fine-Keep writing! -Meshal ^^ x

the writing quality is good. Im not fluent myself but i can tell its good. Although limited chapters so far i can say ur novel is promising. I'll keep ur novel in my library to read whenever im free. Keep up the good work. I will cheer for you.

I really liked this novel! Usually, when I start reading those kind of novels, I get bored really quickly and drop them. However, your novel got me really hooked and I was really sad when chapters finished.

The description and the concept was amazing! ^O^V I love ye wanwan too XD Maybe its just a little stiff to read but editing it later would be good just focus on updating and good chapters it'll be fine 😘

As someone who had already seen your outline and story planner, I'd give you a five. Although your only problem is your writing quality. Honestly speaking, you're very good with outlines, but you know yourself that you're sort of awkward in narrations and descriptive paragraphs. Anyways, as someone who hasn't even graduated junior high yet, you're sort of doing good. Eh, not really.

Hi guys, so I hope y'all support my story. It's registered under Writing Prompt Contest #31, so I'd really appreciate if you leave pointers, reactions, ratings, and power stones. After the contest, my update rate will be 3 times a week. Tuesday Thursday, and Saturday. There might be cases that I'd release a bonus chapter. So, that's all. By the way, if my writing is really painful in the eye, offer me pointers. I'd gladly accept it as a newbie. This is actually my first novel. Sorry for writing tons of unnecessary stuffs and thank you! P.S. Uhm.. I feel really shameless for rating a 5.

There's only two chapters, so I can't really rate it precisely. But, I'm really looking forward to the scene in the synopsis. Your paragraphs, there's something repetitive in it but i really can't point out. But as an *******, you've done it nicely.