Celestial_Xcaliber
Hello Everyone, finally here to right a self review. So here's what you should expect from the novel- Semi Game System(you will know what i mean after like 10 chaps), Dark Worlds (like don't expect it to be all goody good out their), Comedy, Romance, Monarchy system. As for the MC he is going to be total Bad Boy as we go down XD This is my first novel so please don't at all hesitate to criticize it, i love to learn from my mistakes. Also if you have any doubts please mention them here as it is easy to acknowledge them here. P.S- I am going to increase the chapter release soon. THANKS FOR READING, AUTHOR OUT !
Now, when I started reading this novel, I tried so hard not to complain. It's just feels so rushed. Like the first 5 chaps are like wh-what so he dea- but now he's in the hospi- and eait hes killing people no- and it's yyyyyy. But cough cough, here's how I feel on the novel. MC : it's a better then average MC, like 4 star range. World backgrounds average, but it'd a bit early to say that. But as I know my back, I know NOTHING interesting, or well explained. (Maybe thats my fault as I was confused for info dumps.) STORY : Is again but still to early for reader to get thr juicy bits. And thats a very bad and basic review of mine. (Probably the former) So all I'll say untill a 100 chaps later is, slow down and explain ur stuff, add ways to show the viewers transitions, or just dont make ne miss somebody dead in a line. I look foward to what Mr.Author will bring.
I do not know how to write a review but I just like it :P I have been gone for a lil and I am back since I looked from my history hope more people will read it but this is probably a bad review this is mah first review so don't expect much Gl author and hope you continue I may come back hoping for updates XD
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The Novel is very Interesting and refreshing. The plot is very nice so far, i especially like the way author is dealing with the character development and his ambitions can be seen by just how large the novel universe has been described including galaxies an all. The MC is quiet a charmer so for and unlike other righteous mc's i prefer a more practical and badass like in a real sense 'bad'ass MC like this one. The author has done a pretty good job so for. cant wait to see how things will turn up!
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