Review Detail of Celestial_Xcaliber in Super Farmer
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Hello Everyone, finally here to right a self review. So here's what you should expect from the novel- Semi Game System(you will know what i mean after like 10 chaps), Dark Worlds (like don't expect it to be all goody good out their), Comedy, Romance, Monarchy system. As for the MC he is going to be total Bad Boy as we go down XD This is my first novel so please don't at all hesitate to criticize it, i love to learn from my mistakes. Also if you have any doubts please mention them here as it is easy to acknowledge them here. P.S- I am going to increase the chapter release soon. THANKS FOR READING, AUTHOR OUT !
Super Farmer
Celestial_Xcaliber
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True. But the mc on the cover looks more like he prefers men sooo... hide your butt somebody escaped out of fran.ce >.<
HansTheCool:Well he said that it's gonna be harem on the synopsis, besides, there's nothing wrong with harem
Bierbart:True. But the mc on the cover looks more like he prefers men sooo... hide your butt somebody escaped out of fran.ce >.<
Probably not đ only read a few chapters and in one it mentioned he sees the first female as good looking so yeah. But the coverartwork looks like a major buttseeler who ignores women đ
HansTheCool:Oh no!!! A GAY HAREM???
Bierbart:Probably not đ only read a few chapters and in one it mentioned he sees the first female as good looking so yeah. But the coverartwork looks like a major buttseeler who ignores women đ
Romance/ Harem tag ? here's the ans: I am trying to make women in this novel emotionally stronger so just because she gets flustered wont mean she is in love with MC, Though The MC will be having some FWB stuff but then thats as far as a harem goes, the MC after maturing will finally turn his attention on a single women. Hope this helps
SnagSoup:Harem?
The MC will surely start becoming more and more OP as the story progresses, as for a good MC no he wont be one.
HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
Bierbart:True. But the mc on the cover looks more like he prefers men sooo... hide your butt somebody escaped out of fran.ce >.<
Celestial_Xcaliber:The MC will surely start becoming more and more OP as the story progresses, as for a good MC no he wont be one.
HansTheCool:...thank you for replying, by the way I was referring to you when I said good sir
Celestial_Xcaliber:Romance/ Harem tag ? here's the ans: I am trying to make women in this novel emotionally stronger so just because she gets flustered wont mean she is in love with MC, Though The MC will be having some FWB stuff but then thats as far as a harem goes, the MC after maturing will finally turn his attention on a single women. Hope this helps
I have a little problem with the story : un the first few chapters there is almost no ponctuation... I think it have a hight impact on the number of readers who follow your story... Do you plan to correct thèse chapters anytime soon? Or do you prefer to write more chapters before thinking on working on these chapters again? I think you should do it now that you still haven't made to much readers give up at the start of their reading, but I would understand if you think it's still too soon. Have a good day! ^^
Celestial_Xcaliber:lol my bad
