So you decided to write a fan fiction about broly and you thought it would be a good idea to completly change his personality? Then, you decided it would be fun to nerf the **** out of the mc? If you didn't want your MC to be anything like broly, why didn't you just use a orginal character with saiyan bloodline? You had to have understood this would leave many people disappointed, right?
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He wrote a story about Broly, someone born with a power level of 10000 and only growing stronger, making him less of a genius than itachi or kakashi. it's just some low-class saiyan with "broly's" named slapped on and a similar personality.
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Nothing much, it's better to read first and if you don't like it then don't read it. also, don't spam 1 star it's better to go away. People try really hard to write a story for everyone to enjoy but it's not easy.
I just finished reading this book in one go and I'm not sure what to say. I'm a fan of Broly and the legendary Super Saiyan being nerfed so much and being compared to the likes of Naruto characters is very upsetting. To much lack of logics. No ki because it is a different energy? What kind of nonsense is that. Every living thing, even plants have ki (AKA life force). It's a universal energy. Why would broly not have life force? It doesn't make sense at all.
Broly is increadibly weak in terms of dragon balls tandards, his super sayian forms are as strong as the regular characters so if you are expecting the mc to be strong then this is not the novel for you. Naruto is stronger or on par with the mc so there is one example, maily the mc is nerfed beyond believe.
if you want your character power with the standard of naruto world, you should just make him some genius from that naruto world .. why make him a super saiyan with incorporating its power .. just pure nonesense
FU*K YOU AUTHOR !!!!!!!! What the fu*k did u do to Broly u tranisht his Name and you literlly SHIT on Sayajin´s FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*K
Story is garbage,broly got nerfed couldn't use ki that all universe use, turn into ss but coldn't even defeat untrained naruto on his genin days, what a trash, typical naruto fanboy,you just ruin Dbz char
Why the hell is legendary syanin is weak as fuq you.he can literally eliminate hokage since birth. You made him simple as a normal human you sh*thead
Don't see my rating. Ratings are low because my review is a little different from what u guys may think. This is a continue review As I will go further in this story . I will write in this same review more information. Or by comment. As for reading to be half of full , is because author have done a pretty good job by writing. So even if I will not like this story later this 1/2 star represent his hard work. Right now I have randomly read chapter. Where he take a slave . And I feel good , well I mean concept is deferent , so I want to read more for now. I have downloaded it and I m going to read from start . I will also give rating next time when I write. So , current rating is just for novel ( minimum ) .
You should right more chapers bro. I like it............................................................................ ......... ............... . .... That's all
I like the story but I don't like how the legendary Super Saiyan is nerfed so much. From the time he was born, broly had enormous levels of power. And.... Why can't he use ki? It's an energy every living beings have. And too much attention to side characters instead of Broly.
The heck do you writing bro making mc a fighting maniac I don't like MC's behaviour . He likes to kill people because they are weak In dbz Vagita was also incredibly prideful and jerk but he still changed but here broly's character is getting bad to worse In a chapter he decided to kill hinata to fight kurenai. And he fought so many jonins and lost but he still don't understand that they can kill him, they are letting him free because he is kid and he still don't understand it. And some people are commenting why broly is so weak. So I want to ask those people what do you want he should as powerful as in dbz and destroy the planet because he got bored and go to another anime do the same until reachr dbz universe agin???because as far as I know dbz universe is pretty overpowered
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