Reviews of SuperFail

A little advice from one newbie author to another, the text wall burns my eyes!!!! A lot of people read on their phones so try spacing the paragraphs out more.

The obvious problem is grammar, but I understand the pain of keeping track of all of the rules as a newbie myself. Other than that I actually enjoyed it, it has a nice comedic vibe while having some serious undertones. And the way I see it, when you feel some feelings (like dislike) for some characters then you are doing pretty well. Good novel and i look forward to future chapters! 🍻 cheers!

I like that the author was able to create a beautiful world through the story, the drawback was that the conversation was slightly difficult to follow since it was too close together. Overall, I enjoyed the story.

This story feels like discovering a striking picture done in chalk on a busy sidewalk. The ideas are obviously there, but the presentation is ... rough and even somewhat broken. Still, the ability to polish it into something smooth is no good without that striking base to work with. I hope the effort is continued. Luck.

Why does your novel seems like a fanfic or something and is your main character a guy or girl? Which is it and if it's a guy why is his name may? Make sure you provide answers on a later date. make it like a nickname or something. you have a lot of unnecessary spacing some grammar check is needed try to avoid a couple of slang not everyone can relate to that Anyway you have a good start so keep moving forward

Never read a book like this before, interested to see how it goes. Feels weird reading a book that doesn't start with the character waking up in a new life new body new world. And its funny haha. 85/100

Funny! It surely has potential. Need more chapters. Hunter x Hunter for me! So looking at the writing style it seems good. Engaging. waiting for new chaps. Go for it!

Like I said, anime meets book. Bnha×weak but maybe op mc = good book. Grammar is a bit messy. Seems like a fanfic and feels like it too. I was singing bnha intro out loud. Love it ❤️, update soon.

Your book is pretty awesome if the first thing that came to mind was, where's the rest of it!!!!!! An awesome world with awesome people, MC is pretty cute like a more confident deku This book goes great with nachos!

This has a good start. I wondering how your gonna keep the story going. Also a Friday has passed and you haven't posted. If the book doesn't update on time I'm not going to read on. Please address this. Thank you :) I like the book idea overall. My favorite is Hunter x Hunter.

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Story and plot is there, well thought out. However, like the other comment, the presentation isn't really good to say the least. I can tell you are randomly splitting up the sentences because of your previous big chunks of text, however if you are gonna split it up, do so in a way where it is presentable and not at a random spot. Grammatical Errors are also there but can be fixed with a few proof-reads and edits. Overall, I can see where you are coming from and can be at a level where there is much more potential, it's just whether or not you can incorporate the potential into your novel. I hope as you continue writing, you will continue to improve and grow. Good luck in your future endeavors.

I will delete this afterwards because i just did read the synopsis there are some spelling erors like in too you should write into instead as well as the first sentence was weird to read the story kinda reminds me of boku no hero with villain and heroe's . ... I can't say anything aboit the updates yet because there are just 5 chapters uploaded so i will have to write a new one or 2😂😂😂 later on

good work bro cant wait for the next chapters. i know your working on strictures and grammar so im rooting for you. and im also waiting fro the next chapter just letting you know. fighting!!!!!!!

Hey, this was pretty enjoyable, but the sentences are broken up randomly. Spend a bit of time to clean this up. You stole the setting from an anime so, A+. It, is a bit hard to tell where, you are going with this. I recommend going back, and cleaning these early chapters, as they set the tone for the rest of the novel. It is a bit hard to tell when someone is speaking, or thinking.

I don't usually review this early, but I just want to praise the young author's sense of humor and good grasp of characterization. It's my personal opinion, but that's usually how I judge if a story's going to be worth reading. In terms of writing polish, s/he (I'm gonna go with he) can still improve, especially with the use of punctuations, it's not quite there yet, BUT he has a great attitude towards learning. From what I've seen of him, he's open to growth, and I really think it's people like him who could become better quickly. Keep it up (and sorry if you're actually a "she" -- girls can become knights too!)

Okay now I've read it-it might be a little early to judge but this novel definitely has potential-just needs a little enhancement in writing and grammar Don't forget to break the paragraphs! Otherwise background design is fine-Keep writing! ^^ x

I don't know how to explain it but. It was sweet and short. Nice job! The grammar needs work but I enjoyed the jokes. I would say it really original though

Shamelessly reviewing my own book. I regret nothing 🙅 ಠ_ಠ(⊙_☉)(҂⌣̀_⌣́)(⊙_☉)(⊙_☉)͡° ͜ʖ ͡° if you like My hero academy, Hunter X Hunter or even percy Jackson then you'll enjoy it.