I don't usually review this early, but I just want to praise the young author's sense of humor and good grasp of characterization. It's my personal opinion, but that's usually how I judge if a story's going to be worth reading. In terms of writing polish, s/he (I'm gonna go with he) can still improve, especially with the use of punctuations, it's not quite there yet, BUT he has a great attitude towards learning. From what I've seen of him, he's open to growth, and I really think it's people like him who could become better quickly. Keep it up (and sorry if you're actually a "she" -- girls can become knights too!)
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LIKEYou sure this is for me? XD haha. But I took a look anyway, I like the cover, I'm a great fan of the color. The design might be uncommon here in WN, but if you're happy with it, I say keep it. Best of luck!!!
DragonKnight531:Can you let me know how the new cover looks. I made it personally, also I'm done with chapter 2 I'm working on the rest might finish by today. Wish me luck (Ņā£Ģ_ā£Ģ)
WinterBud:You sure this is for me? XD haha. But I took a look anyway, I like the cover, I'm a great fan of the color. The design might be uncommon here in WN, but if you're happy with it, I say keep it. Best of luck!!!