Reviews of The Adventures of the Young Master (Teaser)

Okay, let me clear things up. I am NOT Baisiwa. I only got the starting concept from him and the rest was mine. Besides, I am not asking for anything. I just wanted someone to read this novel I made and give it a fair judgement. I'm already happy and contented with that. I am not a professional author so don't expect so much from my novel. If you find some errors (of course, there would be a lot) please bear with this lowly being!

Hmmmmm.. are you so fed up by Shameless Bai that you created your own Number 1 Under Heaven xD SPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACE

First and foremost ..THIS IS AN AMAZING NOVEL !! Why ? Because i just love it !xD . I dont care what the other's bad coments regarding the author 'Baisiswa' . Dont compare it with our author here ! Mr. Brei ! This novel's author are more amazing than Baisiswa.. actually not sure if i spelled his name correctly...anyway this novel is about an innocent boy with OP and GODLY LOOKS . Like a child who doesnt know much about world . So dont say our MC stupid T.T . Hes not a reincarnator nor a transmigrator ! Dont compare him with the other mature MC who had died once twice or thrice ! If u want to judge . See the bigger picture too. Our author here has try his best to write a lively funny and addictive novel . So stop with the pressure to not dropping this novel. Harsh coments will lead him to drop this novel if u keep going (this is especially for the bad comentors) and our main task here is to read and enjoy . Stop being a over-serious . *sigh . Let us enjoy this fantastic novel . Arent u all get tired reading novel with typical MC who reincarnated or transmigrated ? Arrogant .way to clever .Mature beyond belief . Weak to strong MC ? Comeon we all need a new and fresh ideas . Cute MC is fine too ! IM HERE TIRED OF READING THE SAME PLOT WHO COPPIED OVER N OVER AGAIN. ! So let me enjoy this new type of novel T.T . Stop beratting this novel . Stop mentioning Baisiswa. MENTION OUR AUTHOR BREI instead !! For creating this amazing novel />\\</

Saya sangat suka novel ini, jangan sampai berehmti seperti baisiea jancook, semoga penulis sehat selalu dan dapat membuat novel ini sampai akhir, teri.ma kasih banyak bos, telah menulis novel ini Lanjutkan

please do not make a new romance with a ***** person who never deviates! I love your novel, some passage are funny but make evolve your mc, especially a child of 7 years, it is curious and learns quickly, you can also make him undergo misunderstanding, as you evolve for my part I think it will add a soul to your novel.

This is like the combination of library of the heaven's path and Number 1 under heaven. :3 It's pretty good but i hope the update become like 1 chapter a day >3< Well all in all it's a pretty good novel :).

i don't see how people can say this is 5 star and better than number one under the heavens. it almost the same with far less happening. the author is darging arc, no character development little interaction with the world and this sect building thing is just stupid and the way he is going about it could last 100 chapters. please don't sign with QI because this story's fondation are to weak. as popcorn novel it's great but pure writing it has no legs and can't see how you will keep going

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The worst story I’ve found on webnovel so far.............................................................................................................

The main character is the young (teenage?) Celestial Emperor, who escapes from home to explore the lower realms. Having never left home before because of his helicopter parents, he has no idea what life is like for mere mortals. He's OP, having mastered every skill as part of his training for being Celestial Emperor, and has reached what seems to be the peak level of cultivation. The plot of the novel so far is that he comes to the mortal realms and starts trying to travel incognito, but inadvertently shows his OPness, causing shock and awe and slapped faces everywhere he goes. Overall I like the idea of the novel, but the author's insistence on stretching every face slapping event over several chapters killed my enjoyment of the story at round chapter 83. It's really not worth your time to read this until it has been completed, then you can skim the chapters to get the gist without being molested with filler after filler.

I like this novel. The sincerity shown by the author by speaking freely,has added a dash of permanence to the novel. The story development is fluid. Although MC is an omnipotent guy,still the struggle shown by him,the emotions,the sincerity - it all make this nove a refreshing one and hard to put down.

This has potential, I love the plot, the characters, the scenes. I hope there will be more adversary as well as friends who will join the mc on his journey.

The story is very good and it fills the Void the LoTPE has filled in my soul, however it is riddled with grammar errors and I sometimes have to re-read sentences to figure out what you are trying to tell me. Overall it is a good read though- Would be better if you fixed the grammar, or spent 10 more minutes on each chapter just to read it yourself and find errors that way,

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I am huge fan of lor Baisiwa... I remember once he published 2 novels here to win the prize under different pen name.. but I don't mind, because I like his novels

I recommend this novel but too slow on chapters. Zz ................................................................................................

I started reading this with pretty low expectations, having read comments about the character being childlike, and the story consisting of endless faceslapping. To my surprise, I am at chapter 97, and keep reading, because the story has kept me amused and fascinated. It might have all the clichés, but it’s addictive, and somehow, refreshing. Also, it has less creepy/sickening attitudes towards women/girls than many highly rated stories I’ve read, so far, so I’d recommend it to female readers (as of ch 97, that is, and there is one point of ickiness that keeps being brought up, but still. Beggars can’t be choosers.).

If your up to OP MC than you must read this !!! You will understand the different between shameless and confidence. Plus the author will inform reader before MIA 😎😎😎

Good story. I really enjoyed the sequence of events in this book. They are coherent and the author did a good job. The characters have character and personality. The description is very vivid and interesting.