Review Detail of 7sins_Lord in The Adventures of the Young Master (Teaser)
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i don't see how people can say this is 5 star and better than number one under the heavens. it almost the same with far less happening. the author is darging arc, no character development little interaction with the world and this sect building thing is just stupid and the way he is going about it could last 100 chapters. please don't sign with QI because this story's fondation are to weak. as popcorn novel it's great but pure writing it has no legs and can't see how you will keep going
The Adventures of the Young Master (Teaser)
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Then I am very sorry if this novel disappointed you. Of course, as a veteran reader yourself (probably), you might find my novel as a trash and I don't care since that is your opinion. But please, don't question my readers who gave this a high rating. Do you think everyone here is the same as you? I already said in below my synopsis, why bothered to read it? But still, sorry if I did not meet your expectations. Thank ank you.
don't blame me for your work. i rated low on the bases that your none of your characters have backstories worth remembering because the arcs you picked them up in had nothing to do with them. they were just there for the ride with the MC. most of the places you been writing about discuss little of the places like the family the culture. you are telling the readers this is a kingdom what else do you need to know. like the first world you made on of is subordinates to kill a kingdom and not judge them himself. it the one place different from the others and has mystery around it an you destroy it off screen. if you what 5 star reviews you should have a perfect story. from how you responded my 2 was justifiable because the perfect review has gotten you thinking you story does need work. lastly bad reviews dont alway mean they don't like something. i just realize how little context is in this story. no cultivation techniques, development has just gone to a multiversal point when we bare know about a single mortal world, dead leading characters no real end goal for this ark beside handing sect to a coward.
Brei:Then I am very sorry if this novel disappointed you. Of course, as a veteran reader yourself (probably), you might find my novel as a trash and I don't care since that is your opinion. But please, don't question my readers who gave this a high rating. Do you think everyone here is the same as you? I already said in below my synopsis, why bothered to read it? But still, sorry if I did not meet your expectations. Thank ank you.
