Reviews of Immortal in Naruto World - Discontinued

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Just wanted to be ur first fan because that would be very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very difficult

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WHY are the Naruto's character behaving like chineses characters? It's allright for the mc but WTF? The other people are mean to behave like japanese character!!! Well it's really good overall.

Garbage novel is a courtesy for this novel it isn't a cuss got it. Mc is stupid he is haku's brother knows plot still gets his mother killed like a true peice of **** then 5 minutes after goes over the plot acting like a smart ass the writer probably was on moon when he wrote this peice of gigantic crap .

Nice story! Looking forward to this awesome fan fic. Keep it up. Its a fresh idea for the MC to be a cultivator in the anime world so it a good idea

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Really bad cultivation novel. Mc is only aloud to use qi, so the story is just a week re-enactment of a cultivation novel with a few naruto fillers.

Going to be shameless and give myself the highest rating I think i deserve haha. Anyways somehow i'm not satisfied with the Novelcover so anyone who wants to do me a solid and propose a badass cover can message me on Discord Ezukejyll#6084

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If MC is an otaku, then why would he not know what happens to haku's family ?. Why are all otakus portrayed as idiots (MC) ?. I could somewhat tolerate the common notion of meeting "gawd" but the omnipotent being saying that MC had an accidental death is ridiculous. While this concept is new, your execution of it needs more work. The MC's method of training seems to be meditation, would it cause any trouble if he does that in home or while asleep ?. I have lots to say, but laziness won. So, i'll leave it at this. The story would be nice if fleshed out logically.

Good fan fiction of naruto world with an mc using QI and not chakra. This is what made him unique compared to all others fanfic of naruto. The mc (for now) learn all by himself. Moreover the world is well depicted : Not with just bad and good guys but people who make their choices and have their own reasons (#fatherofmc)

You did a great job on this novel but I’d wish you didn’t let Sato learn every form of energy cause that’s just too OP. I’m fine with him mastering qi and using qi in his elemental techniques like he’s been wanting to do since young. There’s no need for him to learn chi, magic, chakra.(not even possible due to his qi overwhelming his chakra), or bloodline (again impossible cause he can’t use chakra). Sato don’t even need it cause he have him and yang body, allowing him to progress in cultivation at light speed compare to others. He can also most likely able to control powerful flames and sub zero ice. So his bloodline limit is in a sense inferior to his yin qi.

i like it but too bad it was dropped........................................................................................................