Review Detail of InnerVoice in Immortal in Naruto World - Discontinued

You did a great job on this novel but I’d wish you didn’t let Sato learn every form of energy cause that’s just too OP. I’m fine with him mastering qi and using qi in his elemental techniques like he’s been wanting to do since young. There’s no need for him to learn chi, magic, chakra.(not even possible due to his qi overwhelming his chakra), or bloodline (again impossible cause he can’t use chakra). Sato don’t even need it cause he have him and yang body, allowing him to progress in cultivation at light speed compare to others. He can also most likely able to control powerful flames and sub zero ice. So his bloodline limit is in a sense inferior to his yin qi.