Reviews of My Perverse Equivalent Exchange System in Doomsday

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Hi, author of MPEESD here. This is my first time ever writing a novel so even I am not sure how things will go. Tbh, I hate writing essays for assignments, but writing this story was surprisingly an enjoyable experience for me. Anyway, I hope you readers will enjoy the story and hopefully provide some feedback so I that can improve the novel. -ForbiddenArchive

Yes! Finally found an amazing novel of my favourite apocalypse genre!! Writing quality is excellent and so is the story development. A pity that the updates are slow, but it’s understandable since all authors have their own real lives to deal with. P.s. Just ignore those 1 star haters. In fact, the majority of the novels on Qidian Webnovel do not deserve 1 stars no matter how bad their novels are. Even those readers who have complaints about the stories are respectful enough not to do so. Those haters are just bitter that they can’t write for sh*t, so they try to vent their fustrations on others. How laughable...

one of the stupidest MC. I tried to read more cuz it was a bit unique but the stupidity of the mc prevented me. You can give it a try if you dont mind a stupid mc.

Reading first 20 chapters lowered my intelligence, so i wanted to see how many people sticked to the story till the latest chapter. Not many and can't say i expected anything else. At the start it was all going good, but then that little girl appeared and i kinda knew it would go downhill from now on. It seems to be theme or more like an obsession with little girls that chinese novels have. They are always there to make the plot retarded to force MC into situation he wouldn't be in. It is always goes like this: 1. MC finds a little girl by sheer coincidence and out of all the kids that are dying before him you know he will save her. Not only because in the pandemonium somehow a kid voice was able to reach the MC, but also because the kid was crying while advertising her name which just so happens to MC dead sister name. What a coincidence!! Fuck all the other kids and people now he'll do everything to save her, even though he's out of shape, crippled, below average intelleigence guy with no foresight. 2. That little girl is very special. Apparently this one was 1 of 9 in the whole world, what a coincidence!! that our MC encountered her. 3. Suddenly MC will go to any lengths for that little girl because why the fu*k not, he has already died for her why not 100 times again and she's a kid who he fell in love for after 2-3 dialogues, can't abandon her now. Now this unhealthy nonsensical obsession will drive the future plot. 4. That little girl then will become the weak link/target of people who wants her 1 in a billion physique, or maybe when he's facing a god or some other sh*t, and her power will help him. Thank god he found her by coincidence in the start. 5. Apparently by another innocent coincidence he encountered a zombie way over the starter difficulty and got mortally wounded and infected while protecting the little girl and survived by just a sec again by sheer coincidence of girl having some sort of power and double personality which she conveniently wasn't able to use before, but did so now. All these coincidences in just a few chapters. Now as a seasoned chinese novel reader you already know that MC will spend his time protecting that little girl, wasting resources on her, and maybe eventually getting in relationship with her. What? You though little girls in chinese novels were for some Innocent reason? 9/10 expect it to happen. In the last scenario she was killed. MC is a retard as well. He apparently thought it was enough to prepare for doomsday with just stocking guns and food. Even an idiot would've noticed that they need more than that to survive, especially as a cripple. Was he thinking of just camping in car with limited resources that will eventually run out? Base of operation? Future food procurement? training? A google seach on how to survive apocalypse? Taking measure of system capabilities? A common guy would have searched the whole system store in his free time just out of sheer curiosity, but MC didn't. He only knew enough for plot's sake that he could buy space rings but didn't knew that he could buy skill cards and being a retard that he is, brought a car without ever thinking his retarded ass can't drive cars or even use guns to save his life. All these coincidences, and mc being a retard are just signs of bad writing by author's who can't think of better plot progession devices so they just use what everyone else is using. How is this story better than others infinite stories where Mc is in apocalypse with a little girl and a system? This one has apparently has a perverted system of some sorts for lulz i guess. Totally won't get old in 10 chapters. Good luck with your future works author.

Is a thrilling adventure but focuses more on the amenities the system provides such as food instead of action if you like reading about a man in the apocalypse driving around without problems or the need to procure anything for survival this is for you

This novel is great! It’s not an apocalyptic system novel that’ll put you to sleep haha..updates are reallyyyy slow so just spam the author😈😈😈we will win‼️ anyways I still have stability of updates a 5 since its stable...at like one a month😭🥺

great premisse but the mc its too stupid omg he can't do nothing right its cringe ... i hate this mc soo much i hope he dies <3 love the world and premissse but the mc its just too retard for me

There is a chance you can tell what this story is based on if you don't it doesn't matter, the MC is believable and not too out there considering the events that have taken place. Zombies fill the world Monsters start to run amok Will he survive this

Pretty amazing work seems to have hints of a few other webnovels but at the same time it is its own unique story. Only wish it was updated more often.

Enfin un roman original d'Apocalypse qui en vaux la peine . Je remercie vraiment l'auteur pour les efforts qu'il fait pour nous donner ce contenu de qualité. En tout cas à partir de maintenant, je lui donnerais toutes mes pierres. Et j'encourage mes chers camarades taoïste à essayer ce roman.

IN A NUT: Pathetitic MC gets a SYSTEM when he falls into the depths of despair... And starts preparing for the coming DOOMSDAY ! REVIEW: The summary which caught your attention <above>, has never happened, yet! System requires RMB to work.. personally I wish if the MC was smarter! he buys blades and guns- but donno how ot use them!! he should've concentrated on personal strength, rather than external strength initially!! it is still an awesome novel! thanx for the chapters AND KEEP'EM COMING!!

It's been years since i found this book, now at least a new chapter was posted again... What should I say I'm trilled, This novel Is both mature and thrilling..love the plot and also the character....the way he's prepared and the way he goes about things...also please when are you updating the chapters?

Novel story and char dev and other things are good. I hope this gets updated more regularly. I love this novel.

Make sure you are better and don't risk your health over a few chapters and make sure to make many instead. even if we have to WAIT! Your story are progressing in a direktion that make me believe the story! I live the life of the character when I read the story!

Rating: 3.8 star Writing quality: 5 star Nothing to talk about, very good written, especially the prologue. Stability of updating: 5 star Actually wanted to give 1 star, but since author showed 0 chapter/week means he did what he promised. Story development: 4 star The story is very well developed. We get information about the world slowly, not too much and not too little. It’s just enough making the story easy to follow. Character design: 1 star This is the point which destroyed the whole story. It’s fine to make main character coward, ignorance or pushover etc. But it’s not fine to make main character stupid or a liar. World background: 4 star Very well done on the world building. Very creative and promising.

It is good ignore the haters they always hater for no good reason keep going good job ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

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Finally find it this novel so much frustration trying find this uhhhh... web novel fix the problem bug certain novels not popping up correctly 😭 I could just be me I don’t care but forget lol I read doomsday reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee