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(I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

Original novel by Demon_Asmodeo (https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4318777614?appId=10) Orignal novels Synopsis: 'Obtain the First Upper Moon Template and reincarnate in the world of Naruto to reach the pinnacle of the sword and rule in the world of Naruto.' I am re-writing someones novel without asking so I'm letting you all know that; I lay claim to no credit for anything but what I changed to order to fix mistakes I had notice while reading the original. After all, I'm only doing this to improve my own proofreading skills and make the original fanfic better as it has a lot of mistakes in its grammar and spelling.

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Chapter 1: Birth of the First upper moon

Within the land of fire, hidden away from prying eyes. There was a cave where there was three children of Minato and Kushina being born. Everyone was impatiently awaiting for the third-born. Though once he had been, no-one knew what to feel seeing his appearance.

Fear, Pain, Anguish, Disgust. It was difficult to know which Minato was feeling looking at his third born son, Naruto as he was named, was different. Not that being different was wrong, in fact everyone has difference so that could be a good thing. But this difference, was not good at all for the fourth Hokage to bear at all. His son, Naruto, literally had six eyes.

Naruto's parents watched as the child turned towards them, looking with at them with six expectant eyes.

They didn't know what to do. It wasn't just his body that wasn't normal but the aura around the new-born itself. Something dark and Malevolent seemed to have corrupted Naruto. But before they could continue this dangerous line of thought, A masked man attacked.

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(Insert nine-tailed attack on Konoha)

{Unlike the original timeline for Naruto. The third-hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi choose to sacrifice himself instead of Minato}

After lord fourth, Minato, battled against that 9-tails, and the third hokage sacrificed himself to preform the reaper-death seal enabling Minato to trap the Kyūbi within his two eldest sons. With battle having ended and there was only one last decision left for Minato to make. What to do about his youngest.

Minato, The fourth hokage, Naruto's father looked at his own child with disgust, not evening considering him as his own. While Naruto's mother, Kushina, could only look at him with pity. Both parents looked at the child one last time before leaving him at the front of a door of an orphanage, where they had decided to abandon him.

Kushina, Naruto's mother, had turned once more to look at her son, who seemed to looked back at her with annoyance with all six eyes. She could only lamented, but although she left him, She could remember one thing about him. The kanji for 'Upper Moon 1' written in his eyes. This was the only thing she would remember of her little child.

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Naruto watched as his parents left. To be honest, He hadn't known what to feel about what had just happened, after all he was only a baby at the moment. But he felt that he couldn't continue here. He had to go. Naruto didn't know why, but he knew he had to run away and fast. So without further ado, his body began to grow. The clothes dressed on him after his birth were destroyed, but new ones had appeared in their place. A purple yukata was now what he had on instead.

What was once an abandoned baby was now changed. Looking more like a child, about the age of a 7 year old. Not quite a perfect body, but it was more then enough for Naruto to escape the village.

The little boy began to run. 'Why?' You might ask. Well Naruto asked this too in his head. His head had sent him a warning and the only thing he knew was that dawn was approaching and when that happened he had to hide from the sun. And so he fled, but that was not the only thing that happened here, that boy had ran in a different way. Unlike any child who looked his age, he ran like an experienced swordsman. Naruto even had a sword that he created from his own flesh and blood unconsciously.

Bam! Chapter one done. Do remember that I don't own this story, I'm only re-writing it as it had alot of mistakes. Maybe I'll change more of it and turn it into my own, but for now this is still techniquely a book from Demon_Asmodeo

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