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(I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

Original novel by Demon_Asmodeo (https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4318777614?appId=10) Orignal novels Synopsis: 'Obtain the First Upper Moon Template and reincarnate in the world of Naruto to reach the pinnacle of the sword and rule in the world of Naruto.' I am re-writing someones novel without asking so I'm letting you all know that; I lay claim to no credit for anything but what I changed to order to fix mistakes I had notice while reading the original. After all, I'm only doing this to improve my own proofreading skills and make the original fanfic better as it has a lot of mistakes in its grammar and spelling.

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Chapter 2- Achieving immunity +being found by the Akatsuki.

Naruto kept running until he stopped suddenly, He had found a safe haven. In front of him was a cave, although it was small it was big enough for a person to enter and so he entered without problems and just sat down to rest.

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After an hour, the sun rose. Naruto looked upon the brightness the land outside of the cave was given with curiosity. His instincts had told him to run from the sun and to avoid the light, but he wanted to feel the warmth. He approached the entrance of the cave, Ignoring what his instincts yelled at him to avoid.

Slowly, Naruto put out a finger towards the sunlight. It begin to burn away, seemly catching fire, But he didn't cry. Unconsciously Naruto had known that this pain was nothing when compared to pain would have felt, and so he continued to leave his hand in the sun. Though it wasn't long before a surprise had happen, even seemly to shock his instincts. His finger stopped burning, The sun no longer hurt him.

Although Naruto hadn't known what happen to change this weakness. His body had enough genes to achieve such Azaña. After all, his body is much alike to Kokushibo, so much so that in within his blood ran the same blood as Yorichi. But that wasn't all, Naruto also had the Uzumaki genes. The same genes belonging to a clan of people often called cockroaches due to how difficult it was to kill them as their body a naturally boast, improving their life-force. Not to mention that although the traces was almost nil, Naruto was still exposed to the Kyūbi charka like his brothers. The small mark of the fox, combined with Kokushibu's demon slayer mark had made a frightening warrior.

All of that together achieved something simple, resistance to the sun. So ignorant but happy Naruto left that cave without fear as although he had been burnt, it appeared that the sun wasn't a problem for his body no longer. He became the third demon in their entire existence to be able to enjoy the sun.

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Years later;

Naruto's age: 7 years

Location: Unknown forest

Time: Unkown

Naruto had in the past few years since leaving his safe haven, the cave, made a name for himself throughout the world as 'The swordsman of the moon, or the six-eyed demon.' But he was better known by people and 'The upper moon 1.' Said culprit was currently walking through a forest after completing another self-imposed mission.

You see, In a very short amount time after leaving his cave, Naruto had realised the corruption and hatred of this world, that was so thick that he could even feel it in the air. So Naruto decided that it was his purpose to fix the world by eradicating corruption and bring justice upon this world.

However, something different was happening at the moment. As for the last few days, Naruto noticed he was being stalked and tracked by a group of Shinobi's wearing black cloaks with red clouds. And although he had managed to escape from the group's attempts of approaching him many times, he had grown tired of avoiding them. So finding a clearing ahead of him in the forest, Naruto stopped completely.

Naruto slowly lowed towards the ground and place two fingers on the dirt. Taking in a breath, he started to focus on his surroundings, in order to sense his stalkers.

'Two, no three,...There appears to be four of them.'-Thought Naruto, Still touching the ground. 'But it's not only them is it?'

Moving two pairs of his six eyes towards the sky. 'Is that a bird?...no.....So that means there are five annoyances, I hadn't intended to fight a group like this yet but I guess it would be inevitable.'-Naruto said to himself, sighing as he waited in the forest clearing for them to arrive and revel their intentions for once and for all.

Little by little, the forest around Naruto became occupied by four other people.

Naruto moved his eyes carefully at each of the people present before him: one of them was Itachi Uchiha, someone who has become popular lately. Another was a girl(Konan), who had short, straight blue hair with a bun, grey eyes with lavender eye shadow, and a white labret piercing. Another was a redhead with wide greyish brown eyes, a hazy, dreamy look on his face(Sasori). The last member on the ground was a guy with short orange hair and with some pretty weird eyes. (Deva Path for Nagato's Six Paths. Yahiko)

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