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An interesting premise that leaves you with many thoughts after each chapter. Writing - there we're a few grammar mistakes here and there, but can be easily corrected Development - the pace is quite fast Character - katniss is like every other ****, going on through usual **** problems, and her life is messed up. I feel bad for her but I was shocked with the swearing in front of the kid. World - good depiction of the society. This have areas to improve on which I'm sure the author will address soon.
There aren't a lot of chapters yet but so far the plot is pretty fun and the characters are interesting. It's nice to read a more realistic book about teenage life and what it really looks like. I'm looking forward to seeing how the storyline progresses. Keep up the good work and keep working on your craft!