DaoistUltraGamer
I don't know English, I'm using the translator. I almost quit when you ignored ning'er, for me she is the best girl, fighter, in love but nie lie only accepts her out of pity, she deserves more, you can argue that she is a minor, I argue that all fanfic is a wish fulfillment, I almost quit just because of that, but your fic is very good, realistic and intelligent MC without being a damn sociopath. I'll give 3 stars just because of the ning'er but your fic deserves 5, I'm a bit of a hardhead kkkkkkk
The story would have been good if the MC had knowledge but you made MC too beta and just a shadow of Nie li. You were tring to do something about xiao ningr but nothing. All in all you are just trying to write a fanfic about a side character at most since even if he can instantly gain knowledge, he will get none in that place and he doesn't get experiences so its amounts to nothing in comparison to nie li. This is where I stop👌