The story would have been good if the MC had knowledge but you made MC too beta and just a shadow of Nie li. You were tring to do something about xiao ningr but nothing. All in all you are just trying to write a fanfic about a side character at most since even if he can instantly gain knowledge, he will get none in that place and he doesn't get experiences so its amounts to nothing in comparison to nie li. This is where I stopđ
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