If the language of a novel is not refined enough and is too long-winded, you can refer to the following suggestions:
1. simplify the language: simplify the language as much as possible and use short words and sentences to express the meaning so that the reader can understand it more easily. He could also reduce the long-winded language by cutting out redundant sentences and passages.
2. Focus on the main points: Focus on the main points in the novel by portraying the character's personality and plot twists to make it easier for the reader to remember important information. You can also use titles and paragraph titles to highlight key points.
3. Avoiding Repetition: avoid repeating words, sentences, or plots in the novel. He could reduce the sense of repetition by changing the person and perspective.
4. Increase the logic: Adding logic to the novel makes it easier for the reader to understand the relationship between the plot and the characters. The logic could be improved through reasonable plot arrangements and character conversations.
5. Multiple Revisions: Writing a novel is a job that requires constant revision and improvement. You can modify the novel many times until you are satisfied.
The characters in Love You's three novels over the millennia are:
1 Bai Jingjing: In the novel, The Great Sage of the Chinese Opus Westward Journey Marries, the character was Sun Wukong's junior sister who was brought to the modern world by the Moonlight Box.
2. Sun Wukong: The character in the novel Journey to the West is the senior brother of Tang Sanzang, who was punished by Buddha to descend to the mortal world because of causing trouble in Heaven. He was rescued by Bai Jingjing and became Bai Jingjing's husband.
3 Joker: The protagonist in the novel "Love You for a Thousand Years" traveled to ancient times and fell in love with Bai Jingjing, but for some reason, he could not be with her.
I recommend the Good Wife System to you. This book was about the female protagonist, Helian Yi, who traveled to ancient times and became the "virtuous wife" chosen by the commander of the Jinyiwei, Lu Tian, to monitor Zhu Di. The female lead was a bun in the early stages, but in the later stages, she became arrogant and cool. I hope you like my recommendation. Muah ~
The Beacon Fists was a Chinese web novel, in which the beacon fire referred to war. In the novel, the background was a fictional Warring States period. There were constant wars between various forces, and people constantly clashed for territory and resources. Therefore, the beacon fire in the Beacon Fists refers to the explosions and fires caused by war.
, I recommend the following modern cultivation novels to you, all of which have endings:
1. "The Modern Life of the Little Fairy": The female protagonist transmigrated to the modern world and met the CP man. The two of them cultivated side by side and began a modern cultivation journey.
2. The supporting actress returns to the modern world with a full load of immortal cultivation materials. She finds that the ending has been tampered with, so she begins an adventure story to find the truth.
3. "The Swordsman who signed in from Nalan Yanran's boudoir": The female protagonist transmigrated to the Douluo Continent and was reborn in the body of the legendary swordsman. She began an adventure story that changed her life with a sword.
I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~π
" Love in the Book of Songs " was an essay written by the Tang Dynasty poet Wang Zhihuan. The article used some poems in the Book of Songs as clues to tell the story and philosophy of love.
The beginning described the growth and ripening of peaches as a symbol of the maturity and beauty of love. Then, the story of the man missing the woman from afar appeared in the article, expressing the man's deep feelings for the woman from afar. Then, the woman in the article expressed her longing and love for the man through the way of meeting in her dream. At the end of the article, the sentence "A gentleman is as sharp as a knife, as sharp as sharp as a knife, as
The whole article was full of poetry and philosophy, showing the beauty and preciousness of love, as well as people's continuous efforts and pursuit of love.
"Beautiful Spring" is your best choice! This novel was about the female protagonist, Su Yun Luo, who was killed by a scumbag and reborn. In order to take revenge and reverse her fate, she instigated the scumbag's teammates to defect and take in his underlings. The male protagonist became her key helper. The plot was compact and the characters were vivid. At the same time, it was filled with the complexity and power struggle of the wealthy families. If you like palace novels, this book is definitely not to be missed. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~π
πI recommend the following youth novels suitable for the post-90s generation to you, and resolutely avoid romance:
"The Dream of Youth in the Other World": This was a youth-rebellious growth novel, telling the story of the ugly duckling Zhou Xiaomiao who grew up to become outstanding and beautiful.
"I'm the Youthiest": This book is about the school life of a group of post-90s "slacker" children. It's a youth school novel.
"The Age of Innocence": This novel is a novel about urban life. It is about a bright youth that can finally be properly placed.
I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~π
πI recommend Mr. Bai, Please Marry Me to you. It's a novel about modern aristocratic families. It was about the gentle, virtuous, and understanding wife, Mrs. Bai, who was mistaken for hitting a popular actress. After that, she and her husband, Bai Yixing, were very respectful and close, but they were photographed going out late at night with a popular movie star. This book is full of twists and turns, heart-wrenching and full of whimsical ideas. I believe you will fall in love with it. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~π
I recommend "The Spaceship in the Body" to you. It's a novel about urban superpowers. The story was about an alien spaceship suddenly entering the body of the male protagonist, instantly allowing the male protagonist to obtain all the knowledge of the universe and technology that surpassed Earth. The male protagonist had a shrewd and lucky ability. He had a different identity in both space and Earth. In this novel, the male protagonist not only had the help of a spaceship, but he also had his own powerful supernatural power. He led the readers to experience a true journey to the eternal universe. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~π