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The 29 words could vary greatly depending on the style and content of the novel. If it's a mystery novel, perhaps words that give away too much too soon in the form of excessive foreshadowing. In a romance novel, overly flowery language that detracts from the emotional core of the relationship. In a thriller, words that slow down the pacing, like long-winded internal monologues of the characters that don't really build tension. It really requires a close reading of the text to determine exactly which 29 words should be cut.

Words that can be cut from your novel include passive voice constructions when possible. For example, instead of 'The ball was thrown by John', you could say 'John threw the ball'. Another type is excessive prepositional phrases. Instead of 'He walked in the direction of the store', it could be 'He walked toward the store'. And words that state the obvious, like 'he sat down' (sitting usually implies down).

Well, common filler words like 'um', 'uh', 'like' in a more informal sense, and overly used adverbs such as 'very' can often be cut. For example, instead of saying 'He was very tired', you could say 'He was tired'. Also, words that don't add much meaning to the sentence, like some redundant prepositional phrases, should be considered for removal. Look at your sentences closely and see if words can be removed without changing the core meaning.

Well, 'just', 'maybe', and 'sort of' are among the filler words to cut. 'Just' is used so often but often doesn't add much. For instance, 'I just wanted to say' could be 'I wanted to say'. 'Maybe' can make a statement seem less certain than it should be in a novel. 'Sort of' is a very weak expression. Instead of 'He was sort of angry', you could be more definitive like 'He was angry'. By removing these filler words, your novel can have a more direct and engaging style.

To identify words to cut from your novel, pay attention to redundancies. If you have two words that mean the same thing, like 'big' and 'large' used close together, one can go. Also, look for words that don't add value to the action or description. For instance, if you say 'She quickly ran' and 'quickly' doesn't really change the impact of 'ran', it could be removed. Additionally, words that are used too frequently can be identified and cut back on.

To cut filler, analyze each chapter or section. If a part doesn't move the story forward, doesn't develop characters, or doesn't add depth or tension, it's likely filler. Be ruthless in eliminating these.

Some common words to cut in a novel might be overly descriptive adverbs like'very', 'extremely', 'incredibly' as they can often be removed without losing much meaning. For example, instead of 'He was very tired', you could just say 'He was tired'. Also, redundant prepositions can be cut. For instance, 'up' in 'pick up' might not be necessary in some cases.

The characters included the protagonist, Young Master Ye, a mysterious and legendary gentleman, and the male protagonist, Xiao Huaiyi. He was an unrestrained and elegant young master from an aristocratic family. He was also a hot-blooded and passionate general. His archery skills were terrifying! The female lead was Su Linsheng, the princess of Dong Lin Country. She was the daughter of a godly doctor, but she was not good at medicine. She was an expert in mechanisms, outstanding, and pure! Although he could not escape his fate, he still had the heart to help the world. The male supporting role was Bai Yu. The young master Mo Shang was as beautiful as jade. His chess skills were exquisite and his mind was exquisite. The male supporting role was Qi Zheng. The male supporting role was the brother of the male protagonist. He was a bandit who had wandered around the border. He was arrogant and aloof. The male supporting role was Meng Tian. He was the unruly son of the Marquis. The memory of a fish covered the scars in his heart under his lively surface. [Deep into the Heart of the Monarch] Author: Lin Shenger. It's an ancient romance novel. You can enjoy it without worry. User recommendation: Su Linsheng didn't know that when she was still in her mother's womb, she was promised to the number one general of Donglin. * The first time they met, it was a misunderstanding. She was on guard. "I can't figure out this person. It's better to stay away from him." * I've heard that his archery skills are superb and can make enemies tremble in fear. "Is this general a monster?" she asked with a smile. A certain wargod general was speechless. * After that, she calculated everything. But I never thought that I would be counted by his side Became his capable military advisor "Military Su has won my heart," he said with a deep smile. * Later on, she realized that wherever she went, he was there. "Are you a fortune-teller?" she asked suspiciously. He didn't know whether to laugh or cry as he knocked on her forehead. "Have you ever thought that I am your husband?" She was speechless. I hope you will like this book.

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There was no trace of a routine, and the style of writing was relaxed and not oppressive. I like this type of book very much. It inspires people and makes me think about life, emotions, psychology, society, history, and so on. The setting of this book was very attractive, and the author's writing was very smooth, giving people a pleasant reading experience. Although there were some minor problems with the plot setting of the previous game, it did not affect the overall reading experience. You can read it when there's a shortage of books. It definitely won't disappoint you. "Spirit Realm Walker" by the newspaper seller was a sci-fi novel about evolution and mutation. It was a fascinating story about the spirit realm from ancient times to the present. Whether it was in terms of ranking, author level, number of guild leaders, number of golden guild leaders, number of fans, total word count, or the end date, this book was very worthy of recommendation. 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After three serious chapters, the style suddenly changed. He laughed until he couldn't stop himself. Finally, he praised the God of Hell. 19."Gou in the Demonic Martial World to Cultivate Immortals": A new book of plagiarism. His book might not be particularly amazing, but the quality was definitely good. Moreover, he avoided poison points +max. "Who told him to cultivate!" The cultivation system was the familiar classic system of Qi Cultivation, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, and Nascent Soul. The cultivation aptitude was also the common five elements spirit root, which could easily understand the realm and environment. However, the author also wrote some of his own things, such as 'fake' single spiritual root 'x' real 'single spiritual root',' pure Yang spiritual root, and the protagonist's sword spirit root, etc. (Although she was a little girl who was afraid of heights and couldn't ride a sword, it was quite common for female channel members to be afraid of heights.) The protagonist went to a cultivation sect near his home to try his luck. On the way, he got a ride on a carriage and met a woman. The three of them discussed how to cheat, but the woman was their invigilator. Fortunately, he bought the wrong answer and did not deal with them. (I think it has something to do with their talent.) Then, they took part in the test and passed the test in an unusual way. The protagonist's journey of cultivation had officially begun. In addition, the author really liked to twist the situation. The effect was always unexpected and interesting. It was easy to read the daily cultivation literature, and it was very enjoyable to read. There were other books with similar styles, such as Pei Bubao's "I Can't Be a Sword God" and "Please Slay the Demon, Young Master." (P.S. There are still a hundred chapters left before "Please Slay the Demon, Young Master" is finished. The book farming and book famine are worth killing.) 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The depth of a love story can vary greatly. It could be measured by the level of sacrifice, understanding, and commitment shown by the characters. Sometimes, it's the small, everyday gestures that make a love story truly deep.