Another aspect is the writing style. Check for grammar mistakes, repetitive words or phrases, and aim for clear and engaging prose. Also, consider getting feedback from others to get fresh perspectives on what needs fixing.
Example 1: I heard a noise downstairs. When I checked, there was no one there, but the front door was wide open. Example 2: She woke up in the middle of the night. A dark figure was standing at the foot of her bed.
Use vivid and disturbing imagery. For example, instead of just saying 'There was something in the corner', say 'In the corner, a hunched figure with long, gnarled fingers twitched and stared at me with empty eye sockets'.
There might be some specific settings within the story editor or viewer that are causing the zoom. Explore the options menu to see if you can find anything related to zoom or display and adjust it accordingly.
Yes, there are. Some professional editing services or freelance editors offer such assistance. They can analyze your story and provide suggestions for improvement.