The emotional scene in a novel referred to the plot that described the emotional entanglement between the protagonist and a certain character. In novels, emotional scenes were one of the important means to shape the characters and promote the development of the plot. It was also an important part of the reader's feeling of the emotional atmosphere in the novel.
Different types of novels had different ways of describing emotional scenes. Some novels focused on the protagonist's inner feelings and emotional journey, while others focused more on the interactions between the characters and their emotional entanglements and conflicts.
When writing emotional scenes, the author needed to consider how to make the protagonist's emotions real and delicate, how to make the relationship between the characters and emotional descriptions vivid and fascinating, and also need to balance the relationship between emotional scenes and other plot elements to make the whole novel more complete and smooth.
There were a lot of emotional scenes in " Praying for the Present," especially involving the emotional lines of Shuang Yue, Qing Yan, Huan Qi, and other characters. The relationship between Yue Jin and Yue Qi in the original work was a kind of abnormal symbiotic relationship. Yue Jin's desire to control and Yue Qi's sense of dependence were far stronger than ordinary people. In addition, there were some friendship scenes between other characters and a small number of Han Xiu, Ten Swirls, and sophomore love scenes. These emotional scenes added a certain emotional element to the plot.
First, focus on the characters' inner thoughts and feelings. Make the reader understand why they are experiencing those emotions. Also, use vivid descriptions to set the mood and atmosphere.
Okay, here are some sentences that describe the fighting scene:
The fierce battle seemed to have passed by his ears.
The two sides exchanged blows with fists, feet, knives, swords, spears, and other weapons, creating deafening sounds.
3. The body is as agile as a cat, as swift as a tiger, as fierce as a lion, and the defense is as strong as a fortress.
His eyes flashed with a fierce light as he gritted his teeth. His voice was high and powerful, and his aura was very threatening.
Blood boiling, sweat flowing, breathing rapid, heartbeat accelerated, the whole person was in an extremely nervous state.
The two sides collided fiercely, sparks flew everywhere, the blade flashed, and the gunshot reverberated. The air was filled with a thick smell of gunpowder.
Fists poured down like a storm. His teeth were clenched tightly together, and his body was as tense as a bow, emitting a hair-raising aura.
8 blades, shadows, gunshots, and cannons. Every attack and defense was unusually intense, as if it was a life and death struggle.
9. Agility as a snake, speed as wind, defense as solid as iron. The battle scene was amazing.
Both sides were filled with the courage to fight. Whether they won or lost, they showed great perseverance and determination.
There were a few points to note when writing a fight scene:
1. Action Description: Description of the character's actions, moves, weapons, etc. to show the battle scene. For example, a character could swing a longsword in his hand, and the sword light would flash and create a chill in the air, or a character could raise a gun and shoot, and the sound of a gunshot would whistle through the air, leaving behind an afterimage.
2. Psychological description: By describing the character's inner feelings and nervousness, it can promote the development of the story. For example, the character was shouting in his heart," I won!" A smug smile appeared on their faces, or the character felt extreme fear and the weapon in their hands began to tremble slightly.
3. Description of the environment: By describing the layout and atmosphere of the battle venue, it can increase the tension and excitement of the battle. For example, the battlefield was in chaos, the air was filled with dust and smoke, and the figures of the characters intersected in the darkness.
4. Sound effects description: Create a tense atmosphere by describing the sound effects of the battle scene such as gunshots, swords, footsteps, etc. For example, when a character's sword stabbed into an opponent's chest, a dull "crack" would be heard in the air.
5. Character description: By describing the character's personality, appearance, psychology, etc., it highlights the characteristics of the character to enhance the reader's sense of immersion. For example, there was a tall, muscular man holding a long sword in his hand, his eyes firm and exuding an insufferably arrogant aura.
Writing a fight scene required a comprehensive use of action descriptions, psychological descriptions, environmental descriptions, sound effects descriptions, and character descriptions to make the reader feel the tension and excitement of the battle.
The description of fighting scenes in novels is usually to let the readers better experience the plot and the emotions of the characters, and also to enhance the visual impact and expressiveness of the novel. Here are some common descriptions:
1. Fast paced gunfights and close combat: Create a tense battle scene through fast movements, intense conflicts, and a tense atmosphere.
2. Gorgeous clothing and weapons: The characters in the novel usually wear gorgeous clothing and various weapons to highlight their social status and economic strength.
Duel of more than three characters: In novels, there are usually many characters fighting each other. Each character has their own unique moves and techniques to present a variety of combat styles.
4. Physical contact and action descriptions: Fighting scenes usually involve physical contact and action descriptions such as punching and kicking, kicking, throwing, etc. These descriptions can let the readers better feel the strength and agility of the characters.
5. Sound effects and background music: The battle scenes in the novel are usually accompanied by sound effects and background music, such as the sound of shooting during a gunfight, the sound of collisions during a fight, and music to enhance the visual impact and performance of the battle.
6. Psychological description and emotional expression: In battle, the character's inner activities and emotional expression are also very important. You can express the character's emotions and determination by describing the character's psychological description and expression.
Through the combination of the above descriptions, readers can better immerse themselves in the fighting scenes in the novel and feel the feeling of being there.
The fighting scenes in martial arts novels usually had a lot of details and action descriptions to let the readers feel the tense and exciting atmosphere. Here are some common descriptions:
1. Fast and flexible movements: describe the character's fast and flexible movements, such as turning his head quickly, moving his feet quickly, waving his arms quickly, etc. These movements allow the reader to feel the agility and flexibility of the character in the fight.
2. Gorgeous moves and superb skills: In Wuxia novels, the characters usually use all kinds of gorgeous moves. These moves usually have many changes and combinations, and the skills of the characters will allow them to flexibly respond to various moves to show superb skills and strength.
3. Sound effects, creating a tense atmosphere: In the fighting scene, there will usually be various sound effects such as the sound of wind, footsteps, breathing, etc. These sound effects can enhance the reader's sense of immersion and make the reader feel the tense atmosphere of the battle more realistic.
Strong emotional character portrayals: In martial arts novels, the emotions of the characters are often very strong, such as anger, sadness, excitement, fear, etc. These emotions can enhance the reader's understanding and sympathy for the characters, allowing the readers to understand the characters in the novel more deeply.
The above are some common ways of description. Different authors may have different writing styles and techniques. These ways of description are also very common elements in martial arts novels.
To write a good fight scene in a fantasy novel, one had to consider the following aspects:
1. Design the battle rules: When writing the battle scene in the other world, you need to determine the rules of the battle, such as the magic, weapons, skills, etc. used by both sides. These rules should be clear and understandable to the readers.
2. Description of the battle scene: When describing the battle scene, you can use various rhetorical devices such as describing the actions, postures, and psychology of both sides. At the same time, he could enhance the visual impact of the novel by describing the background music and light effects of the battle scene.
3. Prominent characteristics of the protagonist: The protagonist of a fantasy novel usually has unique skills and characteristics such as powerful magical abilities, extraordinary combat skills, etc. When describing fighting scenes, you can highlight the characteristics of the protagonist and promote the development of the story through the protagonist's fighting performance.
[4. Shaping the image of the villain: The villain is also a very important part of the fighting scene in the other world.] He needed to create the image of the villain and use his actions and lines to push the development of the story.
5. Description of Details: Details are very important when describing fighting scenes. The details of various spells, weapons, and skills could be used to enhance the reading of the novel. At the same time, it could also increase the realism of the novel by describing the expressions and reactions of both parties.
To write a good fight scene in a fantasy novel, one needed to consider many aspects and create a wonderful battle scene through rich imagination and delicate descriptions.
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