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There were novels similar to 'Immature Comprehensions': Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha 2:" Spiritual Realm Walker ", Author: Xiao Langjun 3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2 4." King of Familiars ", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village 7:" Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi 8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin 9:" Hidden Dead Corner ", Author: Get Lost Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen " This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter? Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig 17:" Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong? Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism 20:" Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1." Book of Troubled Times ": Holding a sword, drinking in Jianghu, slender waist and light palm. The young man carried a long saber on his shoulder and hung wine on his waist. He strode forward, but the Jianghu in his heart was vaguely difficult to see. Turning a page in the book of troubled times, it would rain for decades in the Jianghu. Suddenly looking back, the world has been split into pieces. 2.<< Spirit Realm Walker >>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a Spirit Realm in the world. Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties. From the Qi Dynasty to the Tang Dynasty, the mountains were desolate, the spiritual realm was lonely, and few people visited. It is difficult to find a ghost in the spiritual realm. 3.<< The Tang's Table >> The people of the world and the affairs of the world are just the dishes on the table of the Tang people. Although the original ingredients had the original flavor of food, Yun Chu still believed that the most delicious food still needed to be divided, cooked, and handled. The food that was finally served on the table was the food that most suited the stomach of the Tang people. Steaming, braising, stir-frying, stewing... There were many cooking methods in the kitchen. Whether it was Goguryeo, the Turks, Tubo, Tuyuhun, Xue Yantuo, Tiele…or even whales, tigers, sharks, and hungry wolves, the Great Tang was a furnace that could cook them all into peerless delicacies… In addition to Li Zhi, Wu Wei, Zhangsun Wuji, Chu Suiliang, Li Ji, Cheng Yaojin, and other peerless seasonings, there would always be one thing that you would never forget, regardless of color, fragrance, or taste. Yun Chu hoped that she would definitely have a seat at such a luxurious banquet! Now, the delicious food had been cooked. Yun Chu laid out the napkin, picked up the deer knife, and closed her eyes. She was ready to enjoy an unprecedented feast to satisfy her hungry stomach. 4." King of Familiar ":" King of Familiar " is a book that makes people's eyes light up. It has no traces of a routine, and the style of writing is relaxed and not oppressive, giving people a pleasant reading experience. This book told the story of a teenager and a husky in a new era. The author's writing was excellent and made people look forward to it. Overall, I give this book a recommendation score of 8.3. The setting of this exquisite book was very outstanding, and there were also many cool points. It allowed people to read many chapters in one breath. It was definitely a book that was highly recommended. 5:" Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation ": 8.7 points Heaven did not give birth to me, Xu Changtian, and the villain's eternal night. Only fake villains relied on their golden fingers to make a fortune. Real villains dared to face their bleak lives! Hmm…this villain was more suited to be a philosopher. 6.< National Forensic Medicine >: It's about forensic medicine. After reading it, I feel that it's very good. 7:" Heroine, Wait ":" Heroine, Wait. Do you know who I am?" "I know. He's the empress's favorite minister, the lover of the rebel leader, and the young master of a famous sect in the pugilistic world. You're the one I'm going to cut!" 8." Mantang Colorful Colors ":" Mantang Colorful Colors " was a fascinating novel. The author used the Tang Dynasty as the background and incorporated suspense elements, which aroused the interest of many readers. The author's description of historical facts was outstanding, making this novel extremely attractive. The plot and the characters in the story were also very impressive, and people couldn't help but want to find out. At the same time, the author's writing style was also likable. It formed a sharp contrast with his previous works, giving people different thoughts and inspiration. Whether it was from the plot or the content of the book, it gave people a lot of enjoyment and happiness. In addition, the author's other works also received high reviews, making people look forward to his new work. All in all, I highly recommend the book, Mantang Colorful Colors. I believe that readers will also be deeply attracted by it. 9:" Hidden Dead Corner ": 100 likes per page, top book list for a week, please support and like it.🈵 The title of the new book, Get Lost, seemed to have a hidden and grand inner meaning. However, it was indeed a completely different story. This one seemed a little like Inception and was worth reading. Final Divine Duty: Get Out of the Way I heard that it's the avatar of an author who logged into the future ten thousand years ago. Gao Wu's book is pretty good and pretty cool. It's just that he pulled it after he left the planet. This one seems to be doing well at the moment, so I guess it's considered fodder. 11." Beyond Time ": The ears have finally returned to the method of seeking the devil. The main character was decisive in killing and looked like me. This was the best point. " This Game Is Too Real ":" This Game Is Too Real " was a novel about traveling through the wasteland. The author used the players as the main storyline and brought the readers into a wonderful world. The author's knowledge of science, engineering, and finance added a sense of realism to the book, although it might be difficult for readers who did not know the relevant content to understand. The highlight of the book was the description of the war scenes and the fun of clearing the wasteland, especially the author's description of the construction of the fallout shelter, which made people feel the joy of clearing the wasteland. In terms of writing style and logic, the book showed a certain standard, and the story was also very attractive. In terms of character description, the author's description of the protagonist was also quite accurate, especially the emotional sustenance of the middle-aged man and his nostalgia for the old days. It was empathetic. The depth of the book's thinking was also quite good. The hard work and struggle of the male protagonist Chu Guang and the players made people feel the power of hope and unity. Overall," This Game Is Too Real " was a fascinating wasteland novel. The author used the game setting as the main plot and combined the elements of the wasteland to show the readers a grand and real game world. Whether it was the writing style or the plot, it brought great pleasure to reading. I recommend this book to readers who like wasteland novels. I believe you will like this book. " Red Heart Sky Patrol ":" Red Heart Sky Patrol " was a novel about orthodox cultivation. Although it was a little slow, as long as one had patience, they could get through the first few chapters. After that, the plot would start to take off. This book gave people the feeling of a person in their dreams. The author's writing style had the feeling of a martial arts classic, but it also integrated the world view of the immortal cultivation type. The plot foreshadowing, character creation, and character description were all excellent. Even though the author was a newcomer to web novels, this book had already shown great potential, making people look forward to the author becoming a god in one book. Although this book was slow to read, it didn't affect the overall reading experience. Instead, it made people want to finish reading a volume in one go and then savor the plot and foreshadowing in detail. Overall, Red Heart Sky Patrol was a pretty good novel. It was worth reading for readers who were in a book shortage. Ring of Destiny: Ring of Destiny is an incredible work. Squid's second novel continued his usual style and left a deep impression. The main character of the story, Lee, was a provocative person with good looks. He worked hard to survive Chapter 209, but at the same time, he faced an eternal reincarnation and a destined fate. The relationship between dreams and reality was puzzling, and the Ring of Destiny seemed to be an endless cycle, but it finally ushered in its end. The Lord of the Mysteries is my favorite. Every time it updates, I will watch it in time. I don't skip chapters and sentences, and I carefully savor every word. Looking forward to the return of the squid king. The new book had just been released and had not even updated a single chapter, but it had already received the support of the Hundred Alliances. The monthly votes had also reached more than 7,000. This made people full of anticipation for this book. Overall, Ring of Destiny was a good book that made people unable to extricate themselves. It was definitely worth reading. " The Great Ming State Preceptor ":" The Great Ming State Preceptor " is a refreshing historical novel. The main character of the story was Jiang Xinghuo, a transmigrator. He was forced to transmigrate to the Ming Dynasty during the Battle of Jingnan and became the emperor's national teacher. The author had a deep foundation in history, and the whole article was full of practical knowledge. From politics, economics, natural science to the way of governing the country, every class was refreshing. The main character, Jiang Xing Huo, used his mind as his main weapon. Through his own modern knowledge and ideas, he brought great changes to the Ming Dynasty. His story filled people with curiosity and anticipation about the history of the Ming Dynasty. At the same time, the author skillfully used all kinds of twists and suspense to keep people interested in the story. The Great Ming State Preceptor was a wonderful historical novel that was worth reading. As a snake hunter, Xu Ying had always been honest and diligent until this day when he caught a different snake... On the first day of the third month, incense was burning everywhere in the Divine Land. The statues that protected the villages, towns, cities, and counties woke up one after another to enjoy the sacrifices of the people. However, from that day onwards, the world was in chaos. This book is also known as "996 Immortal Cultivation","007 also cultivates","Inner Volume","Roll to Death","No F * cking Ascension","Good Pit","Pit Deep Pit","Help Me Up","When I was 35, My Blessing Came" and "The Appearance of Great Demon King Xu"! 17:" Who's in Love After Rebirth ": Big Love Feng Daidai It was a very conventional plot, but the characters were well created, and the emotional lines were very interesting. " Deep Sea Ember ": Woke up in the room, abnormal state, unable to contact the outside world, no water and electricity, the lights are still on, the computer can also be turned on, but the power cord is unplugged. He tried his best to leave no marks on the wall. The absurd story really happened. Although it was creepy, there was really a person named Zhou Ming who was trapped in a crazy and strange space-time phenomenon. He opened the door of the white room and came out on a ship. He had become the captain and had to go out to explore the ship because he was running out of food. He was called Zhou Ming in the room and Duncan Abnomar on the ship. Why was he the only one on the ship? Where was the ship going? What if he didn't know how to sail? Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaos of Demonic Martial Arts: Abandoned Book [Goldfinger: World Travel] Girlfriend: None The protagonist had transmigrated to the bottom of the cultivation world. The golden finger could allow him to transmigrate to a martial arts world and obtain resources from there. Gou dao was the main character, but it was not completely Gou dao. This protagonist was sometimes idle, sometimes ruthless, and sometimes cold. He felt like he was not of a certain character. He didn't like this protagonist. He didn't have any feelings for him, but he couldn't completely forget about him. In order to cultivate, he could watch his friends die and watch his enemies live. Ordinary people who had no grudges against him, he ruthlessly searched their souls and killed them. Those who had a grudge against him couldn't be eradicated. "Who told him to cultivate!" "Who told him to cultivate!" It was a classic Xianxia novel. The author used a relaxed, imaginative, and funny tone to tell a story about the cultivation world. In the story, the protagonist, Lu Yang, joined Dao Seeking Sect as the first place and displayed his extraordinary talent in cultivation. His unique way of thinking and swordsmanship were unique in the cultivation world, and he had become a tofu god who had escaped from the vulgar. The story was full of funny elements, and sometimes it was narrated in the form of news, giving people a novel feeling. The writing style of the entire book was excellent, and the style was relaxed and funny. The characters 'words and deeds matched the character's character, making it very enjoyable to read. Brother Crow's new work continued the style of the previous book," The Counterattack System Only Appears in the Great Vehicle Stage." It was funny, nonsensical, and imaginative. The plot was compact and the setting was interesting. It was very enjoyable to read. In short," Who told him to cultivate!" It was a delightful immortal cultivation novel and was recommended for everyone to read. You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.

A novel that is too small in age may be considered immature, but this is not absolute. Writing novels required creativity, imagination, and perseverance. These qualities had nothing to do with age. The important thing was that the author should have a good story idea and writing skills and be able to put them into practice. Young authors may face some challenges such as lack of life experience and writing experience, but these challenges can be overcome through learning and practice. Many young authors improve their writing skills through reading and learning. Through continuous effort and persistence, they can finally write excellent novels. Writing a novel was not something that required maturity. As long as one had creativity, imagination, and perseverance, one could start writing a novel. The important thing is that the author should keep learning and improving himself in order to write better works.

There were novels similar to I Have an Immature Thought: Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha 2:" Spiritual Realm Walker ", Author: Xiao Langjun 3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2 4." King of Familiars ", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village 7:" Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi 8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin 9:" Hidden Dead Corner ", Author: Get Lost Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen " This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter? Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig 17:" Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong? Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism 20:" Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1." Book of Troubled Times ":" Book of Troubled Times " is Ji Cha's new novel. As the main character of a novel with multiple female leads, the author's performance is still stable. Moreover, his results far exceed other works and are unique. This book was very detailed in its description of emotions, and the plot of this novel had reached a new height. It was especially suitable for a novel with a Wuxia background. The author had spent a lot of effort to write the female protagonist, and she was well-portrayed, making it easy for people to remember her at a glance. The protagonist in the book repeatedly fell into the same strange dream. When he went to a supernatural divination shop to interpret the dream, he wore a different world. At the beginning, he was in a village that was about to be slaughtered. Fortunately, the hero saved him but was entrusted to the murderer. The protagonist could only die and join the demonic sect. The characters felt very good. Whether it was the wise and decisive male lead or the female leads, their personalities were very lively. He was a famous harem writer, and he was naturally very good at describing the interaction with beautiful women. The storyline was also very well paced, and there was no delay in the fight. The cool points in the book were even more unforgettable, allowing the protagonist to walk further in the Jianghu in his heart. in general 2.<< Spiritual Realm Walker >>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a spiritual mirror in the world. Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties. "From Qi to Tang, the mountains are desolate and the spirit realm is lonely. Few people visit." "Spirit Realm is hard to come by, but Ghost Craftsmen are hard to come by." 3.<< The Tang's Table >> The people of the world and the affairs of the world are just the dishes on the table of the Tang people. Although the original ingredients had the original flavor of food, Yun Chu still believed that the most delicious food still needed to be divided, cooked, and handled. The food that was finally served on the table was the food that most suited the stomach of the Tang people. Steaming, braising, stir-frying, stewing... There were many cooking methods in the kitchen. Whether it was Goguryeo, the Turks, Tubo, Tuyuhun, Xue Yantuo, Tiele…or even whales, tigers, sharks, and hungry wolves, the Great Tang was a furnace that could cook them all into peerless delicacies… In addition to Li Zhi, Wu Wei, Zhangsun Wuji, Chu Suiliang, Li Ji, Cheng Yaojin, and other peerless seasonings, there would always be one thing that you would never forget, regardless of color, fragrance, or taste. Yun Chu hoped that she would definitely have a seat at such a luxurious banquet! Now, the delicious food had been cooked. Yun Chu laid out the napkin, picked up the deer knife, and closed her eyes. She was ready to enjoy an unprecedented feast to satisfy her hungry stomach. 4." King of the Familiar ": A New Work by the Great God of the Familiar, Clear Spring The title of the book had the feeling of a third-rate familiar novel from ten years ago. The author had accumulated a lot of experience from writing PM novels to original novels. In the previous game, it was a pity that he could not control his combat power and plot in the later stages. This time, he believed that the author would be more confident in writing an original familiar novel with PM standards. 5." Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation ": The Emperor is critically ill, the Crown Prince is in charge of the country, the local immortal sects are entrenched, and the central power is in chaos. When she woke up, Xu Yuan saw the ruined temple in the mountains on a rainy night. He saw a strange stone Buddha with a broken arm. Also, The woman in black beside the bonfire with a veil over her face. National Forensic: National Forensic is a fascinating novel. The author, Shiniao Village, used his unique writing style to show the forensic profession vividly and interestingly. The main character was a forensic doctor who had just graduated from university. He constantly improved his skills by completing system missions. The author's understanding of the forensic science industry and humorous writing style made people have a strong interest in this industry. In addition, the book also incorporated some professional science knowledge, allowing people to have a deeper understanding of forensic work. The author's literary skills were interesting, and the image of the protagonist was also very likable. In short, this book was a daily novel about professional growth. Through the efforts of the second generation, he gradually became an excellent forensic doctor. Reading National Forensic Medicine not only allowed one to understand the forensic profession, but also inspired them to think about life, emotions, psychology, society, history, and other aspects. All in all, this was a very good book and I strongly recommend it to everyone. 7:" Heroine, Wait ":" Heroine, Wait. Do you know who I am?" "I know. He's the empress's favorite minister, the lover of the rebel leader, and the young master of a famous sect in the pugilistic world. You're the one I'm going to cut!" 8." Mantang Colorful Colors ":" Mantang Colorful Colors " was a fascinating novel. The author used the Tang Dynasty as the background and incorporated suspense elements, which aroused the interest of many readers. The author's description of historical facts was outstanding, making this novel extremely attractive. The plot and the characters in the story were also very impressive, and people couldn't help but want to find out. At the same time, the author's writing style was also likable. It formed a sharp contrast with his previous works, giving people different thoughts and inspiration. Whether it was from the plot or the content of the book, it gave people a lot of enjoyment and happiness. In addition, the author's other works also received high reviews, making people look forward to his new work. All in all, I highly recommend the book, Mantang Colorful Colors. I believe that readers will also be deeply attracted by it. 9." Hidden Dead Corner ": Get lost, new book. Don't say much. Put it on the bookshelf first. I'll start killing it after a while. 10." Final Divine Duty ":" Final Divine Duty " is a rather good Deep Blue genre work. The cheat of this book was the dark blue system that could add points to attributes and skills. It left a deep impression on people. The author's writing style was very skilled, and the world setting was also very good. The various concepts and forces were very rich, and the timing of the author's introduction of these elements was also very appropriate. It did not give people the feeling of changing maps rigidly. The storyline was fascinating, and the protagonist was about to change maps to enter the official faction for the first time, which made people look forward to it. He hoped that the author could maintain this level of writing in the future to avoid the main character's combat power collapsing because of his unparalleled strength. This would maintain the challenge of the story. Overall," The Final Divine Duty " was a highly recommended book, with a recommendation index of 82 points. I especially liked the part about mecha in the book. Although it was temporarily a world of high martial arts, this setting was very novel and made people look forward to what would happen next. Overall, I am very satisfied with this book. 11." Beyond Time ": Egen's new book attacks, a series of Alliance Leader's Explosions! Tired from Xianxia's time? Keep it for now! " This Game Is Too Realistic ": The fourth type of natural disaster. After the protagonist dies in real life and travels through the wasteland world for 200 years, the golden finger can summon Earthlings to work for him as players. The author's writing style and story structure were not bad. The protagonist's " planning " was not bad, and the players were also very self-conscious.🐶The group portraits were well written, and the characters were more interesting. The infrastructure looks very popular. I strongly recommend it. It's not awkward. " Red Heart Sky Patrol ": In ancient times, the demon race went extinct. In the modern era, the dragon race disappeared. The era of the Great Divine Dao was already like smoke, and the era of the peak of flying swords had finally fallen… What happened in this world? Who would listen to the truth of history buried in the river of time? Thousands of miles of mountains and rivers are painted with corpses, and hundreds of years of heaven and earth are painted with hungry tigers. Heaven and earth are fair as heartless, I have a pure heart to survey the heavens! Ring of Fate: The Secret World Part 2 In the year 1368, at the end of July, Crimson would descend from the sky. The fastest four-star Glory product. << The Great Ming State Preceptor >> Have you ever seen a transmigrator who used modern theories to change the world? The author of 'The Great Ming State Preceptor' is really amazing. There was no fighting or killing in this book. There was no trickery or trickery. What was there was only a weapon of thought that shocked the world and readers. It was hard to imagine that the political and economic content that could not be learned in school, even the philosophical content, could be turned into words like a stream of spring water by the author's pen, silently nourishing things. There was no Jiang Xing Huo who was afraid of death in this world. There was only Teacher Jiang who sacrificed himself for the truth. Perhaps this was the Ming Dynasty's version of " The Age of Awakening." 16:" Ascending on a Better Day ": Human Dao Book Review Section: Am I the only one who thinks that this book is not as good as The Emperor? [Shepherd's Book Review Section: After reading the beginning, I feel that this book is not as good as Human Dao.] Lin Yuan's book review section: I still feel that God Mu is more attractive to me. Ascension comment section: I feel like I still prefer the Legend of the Shepherd God. Lin Yuanxing,"Are you being polite?" 17:" Who's in Love After Rebirth?" I haven't seen such a fresh and refined urban rebirth posturing article in a long time. On that day, the thick fog sealed everything. On that day, he became the captain of a ghost ship. On that day, he crossed the thick fog and faced a world that had been completely overturned and shattered. The order of the past was gone, and strange visions dominated the endless sea beyond civilization. The isolated island cities and the fleets that challenged the sea had become the only lights of the civilized world, while the shadows of the past were still stirring in the deep sea, waiting to continue to devour the dying world. However, for the new captain of the Lost Home, there was only one problem he had to consider first. Who knew how to sail the boat? " Cultivation in the Chaos of Demonic Martial Arts ": His writings have always been of guaranteed quality. In the cultivation world, I was a yes-man, but in the Otherworld, I was a punching bag! He did not expect that after thousands of years, he would also become a big shot in the cultivation world! "Who told him to cultivate!" "Who told him to cultivate!" It was a delightful novel. The protagonist of the story, Lu Yang, had transmigrated to the cultivation world. His arrival brought some chaos and joy to the cultivation world. The author told Lu Yang's story in a relaxed and pleasant language, making people feel happy and happy. The character creation was also very outstanding. Every character was lifelike and left a deep impression on people. The plot was compact and fascinating. This book is not only a cultivation novel, but also a work that reflects our lives. I strongly recommend 'Who Made Him Cultivate Immortality'. Give it 5 stars! You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.

It usually matures through a combination of factors. Authors keep improving their writing skills, and readers provide feedback that helps shape the content. Also, better marketing and promotion can expand the reach and influence of the novels within the ecosystem.

It was common for someone to comment that their writing was immature, but that didn't mean that their novel was bad. Being judged as immature might only mean that he still needed to improve his writing skills. Being evaluated for being immature did not mean that he had lost his confidence in writing. On the contrary, it could be seen as an affirmation and encouragement to himself. He could take this opportunity to reflect on his writing style and shortcomings to further improve his writing style. If he wanted to improve his writing style, he could read more books and write more to continuously improve his literary attainments and writing skills. They could participate in more writing competitions or literary activities to learn their writing skills and experience. The most important thing was not to give up on writing and constantly improve your writing skills. Writing was a long-term process that required constant effort and practice in order to produce better works.

If you want an ancient romance novel, I strongly recommend "Step by Step Becoming a Phoenix, the Idiot Second Miss". This book told the story of a good-for-nothing woman who had transmigrated and was reborn, becoming a spiritual power genius, becoming a phoenix step by step, and being haunted by a beautiful man. I believe that you will be moved by the heroine's bravery, intelligence, and love, and will like this novel. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

No, not at all. Watching cartoons and loving stories is a form of entertainment that can be enjoyed by people of all ages. It doesn't mean you're immature.

Being too young doesn't necessarily mean that you're childish or immature because everyone has their own unique writing style and way of thinking. Young people may write immature or unconventional plots and characters because of their lack of experience and knowledge, but this does not mean that their writing skills or creativity are low. Writing is a process that requires long hours of practice and exploration. The important thing is that writing requires constant effort and practice. Only through constant trial and error can one gradually improve one's writing level. Writing novels required creativity and imagination, which were abilities that younger people might have more easily. Therefore, young people can show their creativity and imagination in writing, but if they can't properly handle the plot, characters, language and other aspects, it may make the work seem childish or immature.

The immature writing style was a common problem in online writing. It could be improved through the following aspects: Read more: Reading is an important way to improve your writing. Through reading excellent novels, one could learn various writing techniques and styles, and imitate and improve their own writing style. Reading different types of novels could improve the breadth of writing and also improve literary attainments. Write more and practice more: Writing requires constant practice and improvement. If you want to improve your writing style, you must write more and practice more. You can start from simple storylines and characters and gradually increase the difficulty. In the process of writing, you should constantly reflect and summarize to find your own shortcomings and constantly improve. 3 Pay attention to the standard and unity of writing style: The standard and unity of writing style in web writing is very important. Pay attention to using appropriate vocabulary and grammar to avoid using inappropriate words and grammar. At the same time, pay attention to the structure and layout of the article so that the article is organized and easy to read and understand. Learning writing skills and style: Learning writing skills and style is also an important way to improve writing. You can learn about various writing techniques and styles by reading relevant books and articles and try to apply them to your own writing. At the same time, they could also participate in writing courses and training to learn from professional writers. To improve his writing style, he needed to keep learning and practicing. Only by constantly working hard and improving could one write better novels.

There were novels similar to The Immature Ones: Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha 2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun 3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2 4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village 7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi 8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin 9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen "This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter? Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig 17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong? Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism 20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1."Book of Troubled Times": Holding a sword, drinking in Jianghu, slender waist and light palm. The young man carried a long saber on his shoulder and hung wine on his waist. He strode forward, but the Jianghu in his heart was vaguely difficult to see. Turning a page in the book of troubled times, it would rain for decades in the Jianghu. Suddenly looking back, the world has been split into pieces. 2."Spirit Realm Traveler":[144] Selling newspaper, Little Langjun,"Spirit Realm Traveler" [Total ranking of Hundred Alliances: 144] 2022 Hundred Alliances Ranking: 2 [Hundred League Badge Release Time: 2022-4-9] Title: Spirit Realm Walker Author: Paper Selling Young Langjun [Author Level: Platinum] [Alliance Leader Count: 372] [Silver Grand Alliance: 14] Golden Sect Master: 7 Fans/10,000: 830 <Category: Sci-fi Evolution> Total Words/Ten Thousand: 224 Date of publication: March 23, 2022 [Hundred League Time/Day: 16] Last updated: May 1, 2022 [First Order: 81,780] Average: Not counted [Completed: No] End date: × Writing time/day: × Date: January 18, 2023 3."Tang's Table": Although the original ingredients had the original flavor of food, Yun Chu still believed that the most delicious food still needed to be divided, cooked, and handled. The food that was finally served on the table was the food that most suited the stomach of the Tang people. Excellent, recommended. 4."King of Familiar":"King of Familiar" was a new novel that caught everyone's attention. The author, Qing Quan Liu Xiang, had successfully carried the banner of beast-taming novels with his unique style. This novel had just started, but it had already achieved good results. He believed that it would create miracles again. The author used his own unique style and wonderful storyline to lead the group of copycat novels, making people look forward to it. This novel had a new era super beast king as the main character and told an exciting story. The author used a combination of ancient style writing and web novel routines to present a fascinating world. The plot was tight, full of suspense, and it was hard to stop. Overall, King of Familiar was an unforgettable novel. The author, Clear Spring Flowing Sound, had successfully created a fascinating world of familiars with his unique style and wonderful storyline. This book was not only a novel, but also a spiritual journey that inspired people to think about the meaning of life. Therefore, I give this book a four-star recommendation! Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation: Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation is a fascinating novel. The early part of the story was more about depression and survival, with some dark humor elements, giving people a different feeling. The setting of the world was very attractive, and it made people look forward to the development of the story. His level in the later stages was also maintained well, giving people a feeling that he was gradually getting better. Not only was this book interesting, but it could also make people relax. It was a good book for leisure. I recommend everyone to read it. I don't know why, but I couldn't enter the world of novels before. Perhaps he was looking forward to reading this book, or perhaps he was not in the right state of mind when reading it. But when I started reading again, I found that I was gradually attracted by the story. The protagonist's growth and struggle, as well as the fierce battle with the enemy, made me feel the tension and excitement of the story. This book was not only a Xianxia novel, but it also expressed some deeper topics and values. The immortals and cultivation in the story were just superficial things. What was more important was the spiritual inspiration and life thinking it brought to people. 6."National Forensic Medicine":"National Forensic Medicine" is a fascinating novel. The author has integrated the professional knowledge of forensic medicine into it, allowing readers to understand the fun and subtleties of this profession. Compared to the previous novel, the protagonist's personality was more realistic, showing the communication and interaction in the police station. Moreover, the author had a deep understanding of character design and web novels. He used skills and strength to reflect the character's pretentiousness, avoiding the shortcomings of primary school dropouts. The whole story had a better rhythm. A case was considered a short story, interesting and fascinating. Although capybaras liked the water word as always, the way the water word was described was also interesting. In general, National Forensics was a positive forensic novel that gave people a deeper understanding of the profession of forensic science. 7:"Nvxia Wait": New book of the new Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2022, One Man, One Knife…One Bird (funny!) This cute pet of the new era was not simple. It directly revived the early stage… The prince is fierce, the fairy is fierce 8:"Mantang Colorful": The author's new book, historical text, the opening is very exciting 9:"Hidden Dead Corner": God's Work 4 Stars The path to eternal life. [Mechanical Ascension: Extraordinary intelligence is a true god, analyzing the structure of the universe and connecting us to it.] Psionic Ascension: Spirits exist in all things, in plants and animals, in rivers and trees, in the sky and stars. They are the source of the universe. "Final Divine Order":"Final Divine Order" is a science fiction fantasy novel. The author uses the modern world as the setting. By describing the protagonist's story of starting from learning martial arts and gradually becoming extraordinary, it shows a world full of unknown life and technological power. The story was fast paced, the leveling process was smooth and reasonable, and the character creation was naturally not exaggerated. The author's description of the world was clearly layered, and the plot development was also in line with the development logic. The style was neat and the writing was good. Although some readers thought that the plot development was unpredictable, this was also the unique part of the author's intention to hide the main plot in his daily life. In addition, the female character in the book tampered with the data and suppressed the protagonist, making some readers feel uncomfortable and need to be mentally prepared. Overall,"The Final Divine Order" was an excellent sci-fi fantasy novel. Although some readers might be disappointed, those who were interested in "Global Martial Arts" and "Heavenly King of the Foreign Body" would find this book very worth collecting. 11."Beyond Time": The ears have finally returned to the method of seeking the devil. The main character was decisive in killing and looked like me. This was the best point. "This Game Is Too Realistic":"Sprout Trio""Game Otherworld""Female Lead Unknown"🐶 It was a very good article, with many interesting settings and leeks. Pei, the players gave everyone the experience of becoming capitalists! Transmigrated to the Doomsday Wasteland, obtained a 404 fallout shelter at the start, put on a game skin and shook people (tool), developed industries, climbed the technology tree, revived civilization, and became the light of dawn (not) -- Old author, the previous books are all quite good. "Red Heart Sky Patrol":"Red Heart Sky Patrol" is a novel that can be easily read. The story will not make people feel sad and it is very enjoyable to read. The author's writing style was excellent, and it could give the readers a particularly good reading experience. I highly recommend this book, especially for those readers who like to read light-hearted novels. This book is definitely worth reading. The story was about a young man who bore a blood feud. When he was faced with a disaster, he used a life-burning skill to save his sister. This immense sense of powerlessness made people feel extremely heavy, but it was also an emotional expression in the story, making people feel the pain and helplessness of the protagonist. The first time I heard of this book was when it was first published. I gave up after reading only one chapter. But recently, this book has been ranked first in the monthly votes, so I picked it up again. After reading the first two chapters, I felt that it was a little toxic, but then I stayed up for three consecutive nights, completely absorbed by the description of the story. The author's efforts and effort were evident. This book gave people a sense of epic, and it could be seen that the author had put a lot of effort into it. My evaluation of this book is an upgraded version of Da Feng's Watchmen. The mid-stage plot is very suitable for Buddhist reading. Reading a few chapters from time to time can bring some relaxed and happy feelings. Overall, I highly recommend Red Heart Sky Patrol. It's a novel that's worth reading. 14."Ring of Destiny": Tremble, mortals. Your King of Online Literature will finally ascend to his throne. Cheer for the King's return and praise his return, Amon. "The Great Ming State Preceptor": The Great Ming State Preceptor was a fascinating historical novel. The author used the Ming Dynasty as the background and told the story of a state preceptor. The main character was a transmigrator. He used the king who was thirsty for talent, the transmigrator who was bent on death, and the black-robed prime minister who was below him as clues to start a contest called the fate of the country. The book incorporated a lot of popular science knowledge, such as politics, economics, natural science, etc. Compared to other time-travel novels, it was unique. The author's description of history and characters was also very vivid, making people feel as if they were in the scene of the Ming Dynasty. In addition, the protagonist's stance was very impressive. He did not do it for himself, but for the people. He hoped to use his own thoughts to change the world and let the people live a better life. Overall, this book was refreshing and was a historical novel worthy of recommendation. "Ascending on a Better Day" was a book that made people's eyes light up. The opening story of the Snake Catcher was so realistic and fascinating that people couldn't help but want to read it. The logic of the entire book was rigorous, and the plot was rich, making people immersed in it. The author's thoughts and plot design were excellent, and it made people look forward to the development of the story. The writing style was smooth and natural, allowing one to deeply feel the atmosphere of the story. The author's imagination was also very big, giving people a sense of novelty. The character descriptions were also excellent, allowing people to feel the charm and emotions of the characters. The description of the environment was also very realistic, making people feel as if they were in the scene of the story. The entire book was also very rigorous, making people admire the author's writing ability and depth of thought. Overall, this was a good book that was worth reading. [17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?": I like the author's big imagination. The style of the novel was very humorous, and it was pleasant and easy to read. It was very good to read, and the short stories came one after another. "Deep Sea Ember" was a shocking sci-fi epic. The author used a grand narrative style and exquisite writing style to vividly display all kinds of characters. The hero of the story, Duncan, and his crew witnessed the vision of the sea, unveiled the long-sealed truth, and opened up a new route to the new world. The author's description makes people feel as if 19."Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World":"Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World" is a surprising novel. The author used his unique creativity and solid writing style to skillfully combine the elements of the Immortal Cultivation World and the Otherworld, bringing a new reading experience to the readers. In the story, the protagonist, Fang Xi, traveled to two different worlds. He was submissive in the cultivation world, but in the other world, he fought hard and displayed great strength. The author showed Fang Xi's courage and wisdom by describing his growth and struggle. This novel not only brought the readers exciting adventures and suspense, but also triggered thoughts about life, emotions, psychology, society, and history. The author's writing was smooth and the plot was compact, making it impossible for people to stop reading. In short,'Cultivating Immortals in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts' was a delightful and inspiring work that was worth reading. "Who told him to cultivate!" [Author: The Whitest Crow (Level 5)] Tagged: Xianxia, classical Xianxia connecting to Total Words:32.22w True number of fans: 12.27 million Total Collection:37.18w Total recommendation:10.25w [Alliance Leader:15] First Order:38000 (Added on April 1, 2023) [Author: The Whitest Crow (Level 5)] [Xianxia][Xianxia] Total Words:32.22w, True Fans:12.27w Total Favorites: 37.180,000 Total Favorites: 10.250,000 Number of Leaders:15 First Orders:38000 (Added on April 1, 2023) You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.