The older characters such as Kakashi would be cautious. They would recognize Naruto but also be worried about the implications of someone from the future being in the present. They would want to know if his presence could change the future in a negative way. For example, they might fear that his actions could lead to the earlier awakening of a powerful enemy. As for the villains, they might see future Naruto as a threat and try to eliminate him as soon as possible. Orochimaru, for instance, would be very interested in Naruto's future powers and might try to capture him to study. And the new generation of ninja in the past would look up to future Naruto, seeing him as a symbol of what they could become.
He might be really surprised. Naruto is used to his own world and the fanfiction could show things he never imagined. For example, if the fanfiction has his kids achieving great things in new ways, he'd be proud yet a bit shocked at how creative fans can be.
He might be shocked at how the village has developed. In some fanfictions, the village could have advanced technology. Naruto, being from a more traditional ninja world, would likely be both amazed and a bit confused at first.
He might be shocked at first. In fanfiction, the future could be full of unexpected changes. He could be excited to see how his friends and the village have developed. Maybe he'd be a bit sad if things didn't turn out as he hoped for his loved ones.
She might be heartbroken. Sakura could initially be in shock and then fall into a deep sadness. She may blame herself for Naruto's leaving, thinking that she could have done something differently.
She may feel angry at first. Sakura is a strong - willed character. She might think that Naruto has made this decision without considering her feelings. In the fanfic, she could go on a rant about how he should have talked to her before making such a big decision.
Sakura might be completely shocked at first. She might freeze for a moment, not believing what's happening. Then she could start crying tears of joy and say yes immediately.
Naruto might react with a sense of responsibility. If he saw a future where Konoha was in danger, he would feel it was his duty to do something about it. He could start by gathering information from the future vision, like the weaknesses of the enemy. Then, he would share this knowledge with his comrades and come up with a plan to protect the village.
Sasuke might be initially surprised. He is used to the Sakura from his past, so seeing a different, more mature future Sakura could catch him off guard.
Sakura might initially be confused. She has known Naruto for a long time and his sudden coldness would be unexpected. She may try to reach out to him to find out what's wrong.