portal 2 peer review story

After her grandfather's death, Bai Hanyun was disowned by her parents and cast out of the Bai family. With nowhere else to go, she left the city and returned to the countryside. There, by a twist of fate, she discovered an antique mirror hidden in the basement of her newly purchased home. From that moment on, strange events began to unfold—until one day, she stumbled upon a prayer from a young general. Feng Xiyan, besieged by the Yuezhi Tribe and betrayed by the imperial court, had been driven into a desperate corner. With no access to water, food, or medicine, he and the citizens of Xiqiang City could do nothing but await death. But just as all hope seemed lost, Heaven intervened. From that moment on, the Feng Army and the people of Xiqiang City had enough food and water, living lives more prosperous than even the Emperor himself. Cover art by Zackbill ( @bila_art24 on X )

Setelah kematian kakeknya, Bai Hanyun dibuang oleh orang tuanya dan diusir dari keluarga Bai. Tanpa tempat lain untuk pergi, dia meninggalkan kota dan kembali ke pedesaan. Di sana, karena takdir, dia menemukan cermin antik tersembunyi di ruang bawah tanah rumah barunya. Sejak saat itu, kejadian-kejadian aneh mulai terjadi—hingga suatu hari, dia menemukan doa dari seorang jenderal muda. Feng Xiyan, yang dikepung oleh Suku Yuezhi dan dikhianati oleh istana kekaisaran, telah terpojok dalam situasi yang putus asa. Tanpa akses ke air, makanan, atau obat-obatan, dia dan penduduk Kota Xiqiang tidak bisa berbuat apa-apa selain menunggu kematian. Tetapi tepat ketika semua harapan tampak hilang, Surga turun tangan. Sejak saat itu, Pasukan Feng dan penduduk Kota Xiqiang memiliki cukup makanan dan air, hidup lebih makmur bahkan dibandingkan Kaisar sendiri.

Nach dem Tod ihres Großvaters wurde Bai Hanyun von ihren Eltern verstoßen und aus der Bai-Familie ausgestoßen. Da sie nirgendwo anders hingehen konnte, verließ sie die Stadt und kehrte aufs Land zurück. Dort entdeckte sie durch eine Schicksalswende einen antiken Spiegel, der im Keller ihres neu erworbenen Hauses versteckt war. Von diesem Moment an begannen seltsame Ereignisse sich zu entfalten – bis sie eines Tages auf das Gebet eines jungen Generals stieß. Feng Xiyan, von dem Yuezhi-Stamm belagert und vom kaiserlichen Hof verraten, war in eine verzweifelte Lage getrieben worden. Ohne Zugang zu Wasser, Nahrung oder Medizin konnten er und die Bürger der Stadt Xiqiang nichts anderes tun, als auf den Tod zu warten. Aber gerade als alle Hoffnung verloren schien, griff der Himmel ein. Von diesem Moment an hatten die Feng-Armee und die Menschen der Stadt Xiqiang genug Nahrung und Wasser und lebten ein Leben, das wohlhabender war als das des Kaisers selbst.

Tras la muerte de su abuelo, Bai Hanyun fue repudiada por sus padres y expulsada de la familia Bai. Sin ningún otro lugar adonde ir, abandonó la ciudad y regresó al campo. Allí, por un giro del destino, descubrió un espejo antiguo escondido en el sótano de su recién adquirido hogar. A partir de ese momento, comenzaron a suceder eventos extraños, hasta que un día, tropezó con la plegaria de un joven general. Feng Xiyan, asediado por la Tribu Yuezhi y traicionado por la corte imperial, había sido empujado a una situación desesperada. Sin acceso a agua, comida o medicinas, él y los ciudadanos de la Ciudad Xiqiang no podían hacer más que esperar la muerte. Pero justo cuando toda esperanza parecía perdida, el Cielo intervino. Desde ese momento, el Ejército Feng y la gente de la Ciudad Xiqiang tuvieron suficiente comida y agua, viviendo vidas más prósperas que incluso el Emperador mismo.

Após a morte de seu avô, Bai Hanyun foi deserdada por seus pais e expulsa da Família Bai. Sem ter para onde ir, ela deixou a cidade e voltou para o campo. Lá, por uma reviravolta do destino, ela descobriu um espelho antigo escondido no porão de sua casa recém-comprada. A partir daquele momento, eventos estranhos começaram a acontecer—até que um dia, ela se deparou com uma oração de um jovem general. Feng Xiyan, cercado pela Tribo Yuezhi e traído pela corte imperial, havia sido empurrado para uma situação desesperadora. Sem acesso a água, comida ou medicamentos, ele e os cidadãos da Cidade Xiqiang não podiam fazer nada além de esperar a morte. Mas quando toda esperança parecia perdida, o Céu interveio. A partir daquele momento, o Exército Feng e o povo da Cidade Xiqiang tinham comida e água suficientes, vivendo vidas mais prósperas que até mesmo o próprio Imperador.

A wonder falling down from heaven! A boy possessed by strange blood! Gods tremble! Demons flee! A boy from the land of Dong Zhou. A pink skull as his sworn friend until death. A story of a determined warrior struggling for power. A legend that shakes the galaxy and disturbs the worlds of god, demon and man.

Despair loomed over the globe. All resources were exhausted, and hope was all lost. When three-player chess that will decide the lives of billions of people was at its zenith, a portal appeared in the sky. Monsters, bigger than the biggest animal, harder than the hardest metal poured out of the abyss... Putting aside their differences, humanity united to fight against their common enemy. But the weapons were ineffective. The most powerful weapons of science could not do even the slightest bit of damage to monsters. While desperation reigned, science prevailed, and laser weapons were born. The first blood was spilled... The first monster was killed! However, it wasn't laser weapons that allowed humanity to win the war, but a piece of orb found in the monster's brain. When supplied with electricity, the orbs would turn into pre-determined objects. These orbs turned into weapons that could damage monsters, and the more monsters were killed, the more weapons were found. With the newly looted weapons and the determination of humanity to get rid of this disease, the monsters were pushed back. At that moment, a messenger flew from the portal in his radiant form. An Artificial Intelligence produced by the native race living in the Portal World... Called Mother AI by humans, this object used the miracles of the alien world to help humanity close the portal. With these miracles, humans awakened superpowers to fight against monsters. An unfortunate teenager, Miles Cross, was born with dormant Ancient Genes and failed to awaken his superpower. Instead, he used every means to get stronger... Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Discord: https://discord.gg/dNNYQSEuRE

Efter sin bedstefars død blev Bai Hanyun slået hånden af sine forældre og forstødt fra Bai-familien. Uden andre steder at tage hen forlod hun byen og vendte tilbage til landet. Der, ved et skæbnetilfælde, opdagede hun et antikt spejl, der var gemt i kælderen i hendes nyindkøbte hus. Fra det øjeblik begyndte mærkelige begivenheder at udspille sig – indtil hun en dag faldt over en bøn fra en ung general. Feng Xiyan, belejret af Yuezhi-stammen og forrådt af hoffet, var blevet drevet op i en desperat krog. Uden adgang til vand, mad eller medicin kunne han og borgerne i Xiqiang-byen ikke gøre andet end at vente på døden. Men netop som alt håb syntes ude, greb Himlen ind. Fra det øjeblik havde Feng-hæren og folket i Xiqiang-byen nok mad og vand og levede mere velstående end selv Kejseren selv.

William and his college class are ripped from Earth and thrown into Aethel, a world on the brink of collapse. Everyone gains incredible magical powers – except William. Mocked and underestimated, he's an outcast among heroes. But William has a secret: an SSS-ranked skill that lets him travel to Aethel's past. Learning lost magic from ancient masters, he'll surpass his classmates and become the true savior Aethel needs. But can he overcome the dangers of the past and present to forge his own destiny? While others studied about the first mage, William could go back in time and see the first mage himself! While others dreamed of seeing a dragon, William could go back in time, hatch a legendary dragon egg and turn it into his puppy. While others used common materials to craft their items, William could go back in time and mine materials that weren't find anywhere in Aethel anymore. Is it unfair? Perhaps, but William was not the type of person to not use the powers the universe gave him.

Hilangnya 50 orang secara misterius membuat semuanya panik, pemerintah mengambil langkah cepat untuk menemukan pelaku dari penculikan itu. Teo, seorang perwira pasukan khusus, menerima tugas secara rahasia untuk mencari keseluruh titik hilangnya 50 orang tersebut, satu-satunya petunjuk adalah sebuah portal. Namun sayangnya, Teo yang berhasil menemukan portal yang di buka oleh orang asing, malah ikut masuk ke dalamnya dan membuatnya terdampar di tempat yang sangat asing dan berbeda dari dunia yang ia tinggali sebelumnya. (Disclaimer: segala yang terjadi di cerita ini hanyalah fiksi semata. Nama, tempat, kejadian ataupun sebagainya tidak berkaitan dengan dunia nyata)