Here is one. You are walking alone in an old, abandoned mansion. The floorboards creak beneath your feet. As you enter a room, you see a figure in the corner, but when you blink, it's gone. You feel a cold breath on the back of your neck, and suddenly the door slams shut behind you, trapping you inside with the unknown presence.
Second person scary stories are effective because they put you, the reader or listener, directly into the terrifying situation. It's like you are the one experiencing the horror, not just some character. For example, when it says 'You feel a cold hand on your shoulder', it makes it personal and immediate.
The unknown is a really scary element. In person scary stories, when you don't know who or what is causing the strange events, it sends shivers down your spine. For example, in a story where a person hears unexplained noises in their house at night but can't figure out the source.
It's hard to say which is better. First person can be great for character-driven stories, while second person can be used effectively in certain experimental or interactive narratives. It all depends on how well it suits the story and how skillfully the author uses the perspective.
In first person, the story is told from the perspective of 'I'. It gives a very personal and subjective view. For example, 'I walked into the dark forest, my heart pounding.' Second person uses 'you', which is less common but can be very engaging, like 'You open the door and are shocked by what you see.' Third person is he/she/they. It's more objective, such as 'He ran towards the finish line, determined to win.'
One story could be about a haunted house. A girl entered an old, dilapidated house. As soon as she stepped in, she heard a strange whispering. In just 7 seconds, she saw a shadowy figure pass by. She tried to run but the door slammed shut. It was a terrifying experience.
The story of the abandoned asylum. In just 7 seconds, a visitor saw a patient's ghostly figure in a straitjacket running down the corridor. The asylum was known for its cruel treatments in the past and the spirits of the tortured patients still lingered.
Well, to write in the second person, start by addressing the reader directly as 'you'. Make them feel like they're the main character experiencing everything.
The first person in stories gives a sense of closeness as if the narrator is confiding in you. Second person is a bit more unusual and can make the reader feel like they are part of the action. Third person offers a more all - encompassing view. For example, in a mystery story, first person might be a suspect telling their side. Second person could be used to make the reader feel like they are the detective. Third person could show the actions of all the characters involved in the mystery, the detective, the suspects, and the witnesses.