criticism and fiction

This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.com Through this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each chapter pointing out any inconsistencies, basic spelling/grammar errors and typos, and anything that doesn't make sense. I already predict that the comment section will probably get filled with active discussion over these books. Note, if you came here for a novel, tough luck. There is no novel, this is only for editing/proofreading/revisions/critique. Though if you were looking for something to read and some of these reviews were worth it, then good for you. :D

Humanity rebuilt the Tower of Babel, and God abandoned mankind — but there is one who seeks to rewrite his destined fate.

Crime to crime is about the mc trying to find his place in this world. He has many interesting adventures in the chapters to come

Alex Nix is brutally killed, but apon returning to consciousness he is alarmed to be told by the Goddess of Love, Lucy that he has been judged unworthy of reincarnnation. The only way to earn it is to become an Apostle, someone who visits many worlds to help overcome whatever Crisis may befall them, or they are sent to kill rouge Apostles who may be causing critical issues.

There was a girl who lived well, happy and rich, but on the night of her birthday, her parents died. When she was six years old she found out someone had killed her parents, her uncle was taking care of her. He is his father’s brother, when she was eight years old she auditioned at SZCQ Grobal Entertainment Agency or known as SZE, his uncle was the owner of Entertainment Agency. SZE is an Entertainment Agency with secret missions, it is made for those in need of justice, who are unwilling or ignored by the authorities or superiors. P.S Names, characters, places, and events may be the work of the author's imagination or mere fiction. Any resemblance to actual events or local or human, living or dead, is purely coincidental. PLAGIARISM is a CRIME!

Tired of her stressful life in States, Jeacelle decided to go back to her grandparent's hometown to start anew. Little did she know, going back there will turn her world upside down upon meeting a weird guy in the cafe who happens to be a link to the missing piece of her life.

It's a story of a boy name Chris, who was the handsome prince of the Wales Castle. His father was the king of that castle and Chris was the only son who will carry on the family and castle legacy. This story revolves around the character name Chris who was cursed in his previous birth of not having any love life, and will have complications in his present life. He was cursed by someone that if he will love any girl or marry any girl, she will not survive and will die. This prediction was done by one famous reputated astrologer. And Chris challenged him that one day he will find his love and bring her in front of him to prove his prediction wrong. NOTE: This story is purely a fiction, if incase any similarities will be there with real life then it's a coincidence. Previous and current novel is my original work. Keep supporting me guys and best wishes to each and every writer from my side. Regards Shaivi

Kai era feliz en su dia a dia hasta que una ves en un viaje por su cumpleaños ocurrio la gran catastrofe.... Ese dia un terremoto a nivel mundial azoto al mundo y a su gente.

Sophie Wexler transmigrated into a novel about The Galaxy, becoming the vicious, F-rank Healer-class cannon fodder. The original owner constantly caused trouble and made things difficult for the female lead, earning her the hatred of the entire internet. Upon transmigrating and seeing that everything had been ruined by the original owner, Sophie's only thought was: "What kind of nightmare start is this?!" To escape the original owner's fate, Sophie Wexler worked diligently, conducted herself conscientiously, stayed away from the male and female leads, compensated the soldiers harmed by the original owner, and strove to be a model citizen of The Galaxy, absolutely refusing to be the cannon fodder 'offed' by the Imperial Marshal! Broke and powerless, Sophie also had to support a man who'd been innocently dragged into the original owner's mess. She had no choice but to hustle. She started live streaming, became a masked singer, and held concerts. At first, netizens were scornful: 【Tsk, how good can she possibly sound?】 Later, the netizens were forced to eat their words. 【Damn, that's so good I'm on my knees!】 【What the hell, the violent episode of my Disorder Period has actually been soothed?!】 【The toxins in my Spiritual Sea have actually been eliminated!】 Her live streams went viral, the masked singer became a huge sensation, and tickets for her concerts were snapped up across The Galaxy. Sophie was content, thinking, "This time, I must have finally escaped the original owner's fate, right?" But what do you know, the man I've been doting on and supporting is actually the Imperial Marshal?! --- One day, Yancey Forrest came home to find that the boisterous person who was always claiming to be good to him was gone. His eyes darkened. Provoke me and then think you can leave? After catching her, Yancey traced his fingertips along Sophie's neck, smiling gently. "Why run?" Sophie trembled. "You... you're the Imperial Marshal?" His identity exposed, Yancey Forrest took her hand and slowly placed it on his own neck ring. "You know I won't kill you, don't you?"

Stella Sterling, born into wealth, had always followed the rules. Jaded by the hypocrisy of high society, she suddenly had a whim one day to have an ordinary romance. Thus, a fabricated rumor that Stella Sterling had spent a fortune to hire a Matchmaker from a dating site to find her a partner quickly spread through her circles. Those on good terms with her teased and watched the fun. Those on bad terms with her waited to see her become a joke. Later, an employee from the dating website revealed, "The company was acquired with an investment from a Vicenzan tycoon, and the profile of a certain female member with the surname Sterling was hidden overnight." The public speculated wildly about the identities of the Vicenzan tycoon and the female member with the surname Sterling. - Later on, a candid street photo that was accidentally captured went viral. In the dense night of The Spire on Vesper Island— Beside a Benz, a handsome, composed, and dignified man lifted a striking beauty in a red dress with one arm, pressing her against the car door and lowering his head for a deep kiss. In the faint light and shadow, the woman's flowing hair was swept by the wind, wrapping around the man's finger, which wore a pinky ring. Like a footnote to a romance, and even more like a vintage film frame etched into the axis of time. Someone immediately dug up the man's identity based on clues from the photo. The eldest son of Vicenza's Rhodes Family—low-profile and inscrutable, cold and untamable, and also the powerful contemporary authority of The Vesper Circle. And the alluring, glamorous belle by his side was none other than Stella Sterling. When the street photo spread to the mainland, everyone excitedly exclaimed: "The case is solved, the case is solved—"