A detention fanfic with Snape and Hermione might involve Snape making Hermione write lines about the importance of following rules in potions class. However, Hermione starts to write her own thoughts about how some rules could be improved for better learning. Snape reads her lines and is both annoyed and intrigued. This could lead to a series of debates between them during detention, with Hermione standing her ground and Snape starting to re - evaluate his views on teaching methods.
One possible scenario in such a fanfic could be that during detention, Snape makes Hermione clean the potions classroom. At first, Hermione is indignant but as she cleans, she discovers some old potions notes that Snape had written as a student. This leads to an unexpected conversation between them about the complexity of potions. Snape is initially cold but gradually warms up as he realizes Hermione's genuine interest in the subject.
Maybe in the fanfic, Snape gives Hermione detention for accidentally disrupting his class. But instead of a typical punishment, he assigns her to help him organize his personal library of dark arts books. As they work together, Hermione begins to understand Snape's complex past and Snape starts to see Hermione in a new light, beyond just being a know - it - all Gryffindor.
They could start off on bad terms, with Snape being his usual strict self and Hermione being defiant. But as the detention progresses, they might find common ground. For example, Snape could notice Hermione's talent for potions and start to give her some extra knowledge or tasks related to advanced potions. This could change their relationship from one of animosity to one of a grudging teacher - student respect.
They could start by Snape giving Hermione a long lecture about her behavior that led to the detention. Hermione, being Hermione, might try to argue her case, which could lead to a tense exchange. For example, if she was late to class because she was helping a first - year student, Snape might not initially believe her.
In fanfiction, when Snape and Hermione are in detention, their relationship could transform in several ways. Snape may be used to seeing Hermione as just another Gryffindor student who challenges his authority. But in detention, if she shows an aptitude for something he values, like a deep understanding of a particular potion or a magical theory. He could start to view her as an equal in some ways. Hermione, who has always seen Snape as a mean teacher, might find out that he has his own reasons for his behavior. Maybe he was bullied as a student too. This new knowledge could soften her view of him, and they could develop a relationship based on new - found respect and a bit of empathy.
One plot idea could be that during detention, Snape discovers Hermione's hidden talent for potion-making that even he hadn't expected. He starts to see her in a new light, not just as an over - achieving Gryffindor. Another idea is that they get trapped in the detention room due to a spell gone wrong, and they have to work together to get out, which leads to a grudging respect between them. And perhaps Hermione finds an old diary in the detention room that has some secrets about Snape's past, which she uses to understand him better.
Well, in a detention with Snape in a Harry Potter fanfic, Harry might be forced to clean out the Potions storeroom. Snape could use this time to lecture Harry about his lack of respect for Potions as a subject. Maybe he would also drop some hints about Harry's father, James, which could be both infuriating and enlightening for Harry.
In detention, Hermione could face challenges that test her patience more than her academic knowledge. For example, she might have to deal with a very slow - paced task that requires her to learn the value of perseverance in a different way. This would show a new side of her character.
One great Snape Hermione fanfic is 'The Tapestry of Time'. It weaves a complex story where Snape and Hermione are forced to work together on a time - sensitive magical project. Their relationship develops gradually from mutual suspicion to a grudging respect and eventually something more. The characterizations are really well - done, staying true to their canon personalities.
A theme of friendship is also great. Hermione could be the one to break through Snape's cold exterior and they become unlikely friends. They could exchange books, discuss magical theories, and help each other grow. Also, a theme of them being part of a team in a magical competition can be interesting. They would have to rely on each other's strengths to succeed.
Snape might initially be taken aback. He's used to students being intimidated by him, so Hermione's outburst could shock him into momentary silence. Then he might retaliate with his usual sarcasm, trying to put her in her place.