Her family in the fanfiction could be deeply affected. They might feel like they've lost a part of her. For instance, if she has a romantic partner, that person might struggle to deal with this new Bella, feeling like they've lost the connection they once had. And it could also lead to a rift in the family as they argue about how to handle her situation.
It might make other characters feel confused at first. They are used to her having emotions, and suddenly she's cold and unresponsive. Her friends might try hard to bring back the old Bella, which could lead to a lot of tension in their relationships.
Ron, on the other hand, might feel a bit betrayed. He's always been close to Harry on an emotional level, and seeing Harry turn off his emotions could make him think that Harry doesn't care about their friendship as much anymore. But in the long run, they would probably try to find a way to bring Harry back to his normal self.
His friends might be relieved. They value Percy as he is, a demigod. If he became a god, he might change, and they could lose the Percy they know. For example, Annabeth might be happy that he stays a demigod because she loves him for who he is now.
When Bella gets hurt, Edward is often consumed with guilt and rage. He blames himself for not being able to protect her fully. His actions might become more reckless as he tries to seek revenge on whoever hurt her. The Cullens, as a family, would also be in turmoil. They would be worried about Bella's well - being and might go to great lengths to keep her safe, even if it means breaking some of their own rules.
The Volturi also keep an eye on this situation. With Bella not forgiving Edward, there is instability in the relationship between the Cullens and Bella. The Volturi are always looking for any excuse to interfere in the Cullens' affairs. This unforgiving state of Bella could potentially give them a reason to step in, which would endanger not only Bella and the Cullens but also other characters who are associated with them.
With Edward, it can strengthen their bond. They might become even more protective of each other and start making plans for their future as a family.
It could make her more self - conscious. Wearing a corset might change how she moves and behaves, making her more aware of her physical presence. For example, she may walk more gracefully or stand straighter.
If she has a powerful combat - related power like super strength, it might make other characters either fear or respect her more. They would be cautious around her, knowing that she could easily overpower them if she wanted to.
It might make other characters more curious about her. Since they can't see her full face, they may be constantly trying to figure out what she's hiding.
Perhaps she is forced to turn off her emotions in the fanfiction. For example, if there is some sort of dark magic or a powerful entity that compels her to do so. This entity might see her emotions as a weakness or a threat and manipulates her into shutting them down.
Well, Bella represents everything that Jacob has desired for a long time. Her presence constantly reminds Jacob of what he wants in a relationship. The imprint is something new and different that he doesn't want to accept as long as Bella is in his life. He may think that if he gives in to the imprint, he will lose his chance with Bella forever. And since Bella is constantly there, her influence on him is strong enough to make him reject the imprint.