He might be initially shocked. Snape has this complex relationship with Harry. He may try to hide his concern behind his usual cold exterior, but his eyes might give away his surprise.
There's also a possibility that Snape feels a bit of pity. Despite their differences, seeing Harry bruised could stir some long - forgotten sense of protectiveness in Snape. He may not show it outright, but he might find himself being a bit less harsh in his words towards Harry than he usually is.
Another reason might be related to his home situation. Although it's not as prominent in the fanfiction's context perhaps, in the original story, the Dursleys were not kind to Harry. If this aspect is incorporated into the fanfiction, it could be that he got the bruises from their mistreatment before coming to Hogwarts.
He might be initially shocked. Snape has a complex relationship with Harry, and seeing those scars which are a mark of Harry's past and his connection to Voldemort could stir up a lot of mixed emotions in Snape. Maybe he would feel a pang of guilt, as he has some role in Harry's life due to his connection with Lily.
He's probably furious. Snape has high standards for student behavior, and smoking is definitely not acceptable in Hogwarts. His face might turn red with anger, and his eyes would narrow as he glares at Harry.
He might be shocked. Snape could be taken aback by the depth of Harry's emotions and experiences in his memories.
Well, Snape's reaction would likely be a complex one. He might try to hide his true feelings. Since he has always been a bit of an enigma. The scars on Harry are a visible reminder of his connection to Voldemort. Snape may feel a sense of responsibility towards Harry, whether he wants to admit it or not. His reaction could range from a momentary lapse in his usual cold facade to a more long - term change in his attitude towards Harry, as he contemplates the significance of those scars.
He could also be shocked into momentary silence. His first sight of Harry might bring back a flood of memories, both good and bad. Maybe he freezes for a second, his mind racing with thoughts of Lily, Harry's mother, and how things could have been different. Then he quickly composes himself and tries to hide his inner turmoil behind his usual stern facade.
In many fanfictions, when Snape sees Lily and James, it's a turning point for his character. He could see their relationship as a sign of his own inadequacy, which might initially make him more vengeful. However, as time passes, he might come to understand that his actions are driving Lily further away. This realization could lead to a more complex Snape. He might struggle with his feelings, trying to balance his love for Lily with his dislike for James. Eventually, he might grow to accept their relationship, but still hold a special place in his heart for Lily. This new - found acceptance could make him more empathetic towards others in the long run.
He could be stunned. Draco has probably heard about Harry's scars but seeing them in person is a whole different thing. It might make him speechless for a moment.
In a typical fanfiction scene, Snape is standing in the Great Hall during the Sorting Ceremony. The first - years are being called up one by one. When Harry's name is announced, Snape's eyes immediately dart towards him. His face hardens, and his grip on his wand tightens involuntarily. The air around him seems to grow colder as he stares at Harry with an intensity that makes some of the nearby students shift uncomfortably.
She might be shocked at first. Fleur is used to beauty and perfection, and Harry's scars are a sign of his many battles and hardships. So she could show a moment of wide - eyed surprise.