This is a fragment of my novel. It's called " Light of Silver Night." I'm 12 years old. Everyone, please give me your opinions. How is it?
The online novel could give some suggestions on writing, hoping that it would be helpful for the novel 'Light of Silver Night'. Character Description Character descriptions in novels were very important. They needed to allow the readers to better understand the thoughts, emotions, and actions of the characters. In " Light of Silver Night," the readers could spend some time describing the characters 'personalities, appearances, backgrounds, and other aspects to better understand them. 2 Plot Setting A good plot setting could make a novel more attractive. In " Light of Silver Night," one could think of some interesting plot settings such as the protagonist's background and the background of the story to make the story more colorful. Plot Advancement The progression of the plot of the novel needed to be reasonable so that the readers could better follow the development of the story. In Light of Silver Night, some plot points could be set up to make the readers pay more attention to the development of the story. 4. Language Usage The use of language in a novel needed to be beautiful, concise, and vivid. In " Light of Silver Night," one could pay attention to the use of language to make the words more vivid and vivid so that the readers could understand and feel the emotions of the story more easily. Writing novels required constant practice and improvement. He hoped that 'Light of Silver Night' would continue to work hard to produce even more outstanding works.
I'm looking for fantasy novels urgently ~ Please give me your opinions, old bookworms!
Okay, what kind of fantasy novels do you like? For example, fantasy, science fiction, martial arts, and so on.
Everyone, please help me take a look at the "Lily" that I wrote and give me your opinions.
An example of his feelings after reading Lily is as follows: " Lily " was a novel that described the growth of young girls, family and love. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and the language was beautiful. I was deeply interested in this book and spent a lot of time reading it. In this book, I felt the author's deep insight into human nature and his cherishment of life. The author reveals the complexity of human nature by describing the protagonist's growth and makes people realize that everyone has their own unique character and destiny. In addition, the author also described the power of kinship and love to make readers feel the importance of kinship and love and educate readers to cherish these precious emotions. In the end, the author also painted a beautiful picture of life through beautiful language to let the readers feel the beauty of life. I think this book is a good novel worth reading. It has taught me many truths about life and made me cherish life and family more.
Excuse me, I'm writing a novel, and there's such a plot in the novel. Please help me give your opinions.
When you asked this question, I could feel your creativity and anticipation. In many novels, plots and characters had such settings. Here are my suggestions for this plot: First of all, I think this plot can bring about a strong emotional intersection, such as the love between the protagonist and his daughter, or the concern and commitment of the two people to each other. Such a plot could promote the development of the story and the character's personality. Secondly, you can consider a more in-depth description of the two main characters, such as the appearance, personality and background of the main character, or a more in-depth description of the daughter's character to make her more valuable and attractive. This way, the protagonist and his daughter would be more immersive, and the readers would be able to understand the development and plot of the story more easily. In addition, you can consider setting up different characters for the two main characters to make their performance and behavior more distinct and distinct. This would make the story more interesting and attractive. Finally, you can consider making a sudden move at the climax of the story to make the two main characters make unexpected decisions and actions. This will make the story more tense and attractive. In short, I think this plot can bring a lot of benefits. As long as you can deeply describe the two characters of the main characters and make their performance and behavior more vivid and interesting, it can make the story more attractive and moving.
I've written a draft, and I'd like to hear everyone's opinions. Please give me your valuable opinions. thanks.
I'm sad, I'm sad. The word 'kiss' carried a wide range of sounds, making people sound when they heard it. This world was a mysterious one. It was made up of many magical creatures. There is also the romantic place of the city. It is full of romantic feelings with many beautiful sceneries. It had many things that made people laugh, making people feel happy when they heard it. There were also many magical creatures that made people feel curious when they heard about it. This world was a very magical world. It had many delightful creatures. When people heard about it, they were always filled with happy emotions.
Find a novel, please give me your opinions.
Alright, I can recommend a novel for you. What type do you want? Is it fantasy, science fiction, romance, or some other type of novel?
This is my first time writing a novel, and I'm offering you a chapter. Please give me your opinions.
As a fan of online novels, I can't give you the specific content of the novel. However, I can provide you with some writing suggestions and techniques that I hope will be of help to you. Before writing a novel, you need to determine the theme and plot of the story. This will help you build an attractive story world and ensure that your storyline is coherent and logical. Secondly, you need to set the basic character and background for the characters in the novel. This will help you better understand their actions and thoughts and provide meaningful motivation for their actions. In addition, you can try to use different writing techniques and styles to enrich your story. For example, you can use dialogue to show the thoughts and emotions of the characters, or you can use narrative language to describe the scene and atmosphere. Finally, you need to constantly modify and improve your novel until you are satisfied. You can ask a friend or family member to help you review and provide feedback to help you better understand your work. I hope these suggestions and techniques can help you write an excellent novel. I wish you a happy writing!
I'm writing the beginning of the novel. Please give me your opinions and criticism. I'm very grateful.
It was important to write the beginning of a novel to attract the attention of the readers and make them want to continue reading. If the beginning of the novel was not good enough, the reader might give up instead of wanting to continue reading. So I'm happy to help and accept criticism. A good beginning of a novel should have the following characteristics: 1. Enthralling plot: The beginning of the novel should be able to attract the interest of the readers and make them want to know more. If the plot was not attractive enough, the reader might give up instead of wanting to continue reading. 2. Clear character image: The beginning of the novel should be able to create a clear character image to let the reader have a preliminary understanding of the protagonist. If the character image was not clear enough, the reader might not know who the protagonist was and give up reading. 3. Clear and concise language: The beginning of the novel should be clear and concise so that the reader can quickly understand the theme and plot of the novel. If the language was too cumbersome, the readers might lose interest.
I want to write a novel, please give me your opinions.
Writing a novel was an interesting thing, but it was also a process that required constant trial and error. Here are some factors to consider when writing a novel: 1. Story theme: First of all, you have to determine the theme and plot of the story. This can help you better construct the story world and characters. Character Creation: Character is the soul of the story. You need to create a series of characters with depth and personality so that readers can understand their inner world. 3. Plot setting: The plot is the core of the story. You need to design a series of coherent plots so that the reader can follow the story. 4. Rhythm control: Rhythm control is the key to the development of the story. You need to guide the reader's interest through the change of rhythm. 5. Use of language: The use of language is an important part of the novel. You need to use appropriate vocabulary and sentence patterns to make the language vivid, vivid and infectious. 6. Revise and edit: After you finish writing your novel, you need to revise and edit it to check for errors in grammar, spellings, and punctuations. You also need to ensure that the story is logical and coherent. I hope these suggestions can help you write a good novel.
I want to write a novel, please give me your opinions!
Writing a novel was an interesting thing. If he could write a good work, it would be very valuable. Before writing a novel, you can first consider some basic questions such as: What kind of novel do you want to write? Is it science fiction, fantasy, romance, or some other genre of novel? What is the theme and plot of the novel? What kind of message or emotion do you want to convey through the novel? What is the structure and style of the novel? What kind of narrative technique, language style, and background setting did he want to use? Who is the audience of the novel? What kind of readers do you want to attract? These questions could help to better conceive the novel and determine its characteristics and style. In the process of writing, he could improve the quality of his novel by constantly revising and improving it. You can ask friends or family for feedback or use the editing function in the writing software to modify sentences and passages. Writing is a job that requires patience and perseverance, but if you persevere, you will eventually be able to write an excellent novel.
Are there any nice names in novels? Everyone, please give your opinions!
The names of many novels can arouse the interest and resonance of readers, so a good novel name should be able to attract the attention of readers and leave a deep impression. Here are some of the titles that I think sound better: 1. Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens Lord of the Rings-Tolkien Dream of the Red Chamber-Cao Xueqin 4 Harry Potter-Rowling 5. One Hundred Years of Solitude by Garcia Marquez Romance of the Three Kingdoms-Luo Guanzhong 7 Water Margins-Shi Nai 'an 8 Journey to the West-Wu Chengen 9 The Scholars-Wu Jingzi Ordinary World-Lu Yao Of course, these were just some examples. In fact, there were many other novels with very nice names. The most important thing was that a good novel title should be able to accurately convey the theme and emotions of the novel and attract the interest of the readers.