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This is a fragment of my novel. It's called " Light of Silver Night." I'm 12 years old. Everyone, please give me your opinions. How is it?

2024-09-27 03:59
In the silent night, the enchanting red roses bloomed in the cold night. Not far away, a silver light flashed. A girl with long black hair was holding a blood-red longbow. The girl's facial features were delicate and delicate. At this moment, because she was anxious, the girl raised the longbow and aimed at the silver light. The silver light gradually became stronger, blinding the girl. Under the moonlight, the girl was surprised to find a blue-haired, silver-eyed youth in front of her. The youth sized her up coldly, his entire body emitting a dazzling silver light. The girl looked at him and suddenly raised her longbow. The blood-red arrow whistled through the air and shot straight at the youth. The youth only smiled playfully, but there was no trace of a smile in his eyes. The intense silver light instantly turned the arrow into powder. "Who are you?" The girl looked at him and realized that she might not be his match. "I'm Silvermoon Fox." The boy smiled and waved his hand. "Lonely Silvermoon Fox…" " Master Xia Anmei." The young girl softly read out the name and also pulled out a cold smile." Spirit Summoner Xia Anmei, please enlighten me." The boy did not make a move. He just looked at her quietly. The silver light grew stronger and stronger. "Spirit Summoner Xia Anmei, we will meet again." With that, the boy's figure gradually disappeared with the silver light.
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2024-09-27 04:25

The online novel could give some suggestions on writing, hoping that it would be helpful for the novel 'Light of Silver Night'. Character Description Character descriptions in novels were very important. They needed to allow the readers to better understand the thoughts, emotions, and actions of the characters. In " Light of Silver Night," the readers could spend some time describing the characters 'personalities, appearances, backgrounds, and other aspects to better understand them. 2 Plot Setting A good plot setting could make a novel more attractive. In " Light of Silver Night," one could think of some interesting plot settings such as the protagonist's background and the background of the story to make the story more colorful. Plot Advancement The progression of the plot of the novel needed to be reasonable so that the readers could better follow the development of the story. In Light of Silver Night, some plot points could be set up to make the readers pay more attention to the development of the story. 4. Language Usage The use of language in a novel needed to be beautiful, concise, and vivid. In " Light of Silver Night," one could pay attention to the use of language to make the words more vivid and vivid so that the readers could understand and feel the emotions of the story more easily. Writing novels required constant practice and improvement. He hoped that 'Light of Silver Night' would continue to work hard to produce even more outstanding works.

I'm looking for fantasy novels urgently ~ Please give me your opinions, old bookworms!

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2024-09-02 14:07

Okay, what kind of fantasy novels do you like? For example, fantasy, science fiction, martial arts, and so on.

Everyone, please help me take a look at the "Lily" that I wrote and give me your opinions.

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2024-09-25 18:13

An example of his feelings after reading Lily is as follows: " Lily " was a novel that described the growth of young girls, family and love. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and the language was beautiful. I was deeply interested in this book and spent a lot of time reading it. In this book, I felt the author's deep insight into human nature and his cherishment of life. The author reveals the complexity of human nature by describing the protagonist's growth and makes people realize that everyone has their own unique character and destiny. In addition, the author also described the power of kinship and love to make readers feel the importance of kinship and love and educate readers to cherish these precious emotions. In the end, the author also painted a beautiful picture of life through beautiful language to let the readers feel the beauty of life. I think this book is a good novel worth reading. It has taught me many truths about life and made me cherish life and family more.

Find a novel, please give me your opinions.

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2024-09-22 18:38

Alright, I can recommend a novel for you. What type do you want? Is it fantasy, science fiction, romance, or some other type of novel?

This is my first time writing a novel, and I'm offering you a chapter. Please give me your opinions.

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2024-09-13 19:48

As a fan of online novels, I can't give you the specific content of the novel. However, I can provide you with some writing suggestions and techniques that I hope will be of help to you. Before writing a novel, you need to determine the theme and plot of the story. This will help you build an attractive story world and ensure that your storyline is coherent and logical. Secondly, you need to set the basic character and background for the characters in the novel. This will help you better understand their actions and thoughts and provide meaningful motivation for their actions. In addition, you can try to use different writing techniques and styles to enrich your story. For example, you can use dialogue to show the thoughts and emotions of the characters, or you can use narrative language to describe the scene and atmosphere. Finally, you need to constantly modify and improve your novel until you are satisfied. You can ask a friend or family member to help you review and provide feedback to help you better understand your work. I hope these suggestions and techniques can help you write an excellent novel. I wish you a happy writing!

Are there any nice names in novels? Everyone, please give your opinions!

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2024-09-25 17:26

The names of many novels can arouse the interest and resonance of readers, so a good novel name should be able to attract the attention of readers and leave a deep impression. Here are some of the titles that I think sound better: 1. Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens Lord of the Rings-Tolkien Dream of the Red Chamber-Cao Xueqin 4 Harry Potter-Rowling 5. One Hundred Years of Solitude by Garcia Marquez Romance of the Three Kingdoms-Luo Guanzhong 7 Water Margins-Shi Nai 'an 8 Journey to the West-Wu Chengen 9 The Scholars-Wu Jingzi Ordinary World-Lu Yao Of course, these were just some examples. In fact, there were many other novels with very nice names. The most important thing was that a good novel title should be able to accurately convey the theme and emotions of the novel and attract the interest of the readers.

Hello everyone, I want to write a detective novel. What is the most taboo in writing detective novels? Please give your opinions and opinions.

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2024-09-10 15:08

The biggest taboo when writing detective stories was the lack of creativity and inspiration, which would make the readers feel bored and give up reading. In addition, the lack of a compact plot and complex character relationships will also make readers feel confused and dissatisfied. When writing detective novels, you can also consider avoiding some common writing pitfalls such as too dull reasoning process, meaningless evidence display, meaningless character development, and so on. The most important thing was to maintain the cohesiveness and logic of the story to avoid contradictions and loopholes. In addition, in order to make it easier for the readers to understand and accept, you can consider using some common detective novel techniques such as setting suspense, using multiple pieces of evidence, and portraying the character and motivation of key characters. Writing detective stories required constant exploration and experimentation, as well as constant learning and improvement of writing skills.

The ending of 'Triple Door' is so well written. Everyone, give me your opinions.

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2024-09-20 17:25

The ending of Triple Door was indeed very well written. It allowed the readers to feel the infinite possibilities and also deeply feel the author's thoughts on human nature, life, and the world. Here are some suggestions that might help improve the ending of Triple Door: 1. To highlight the growth and changes of the protagonist. In the ending, the protagonist's change and growth could be more clearly shown, allowing the reader to feel that he/she had gradually grown from a weak and helpless person to a character who could think independently, face difficulties, and solve problems. 2. An open ending. At the end of the novel, it could continue to be open, allowing the readers to have more room for imagination, allowing them to think about the fate and future of the protagonist. 3. Increase the rhythm of the story. At the end of the novel, the rhythm of the story could be strengthened, allowing the readers to feel the infinite possibilities and clearly feel the development process and climax of the story. 4. Prominent the deeper meaning of the theme. At the end of the novel, the deeper meaning of the theme could be more clearly highlighted, allowing the readers to better understand the thoughts that the author wanted to express. To sum up, through the above improvements, the ending of Triple Door can be more perfect, allowing readers to feel the charm and meaning of the novel more deeply.

I'm looking for a novel, everyone. Please tell me your name

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2024-09-14 22:34

What kind of novel do you want to read?

There's a shortage of books. Please give me your opinions. The urban genre was better written.

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2024-09-15 09:47

Okay, here are some recommendations for urban novels: 1 "Alive"-Yu Hua This was a classic urban novel about the survival and struggle of an ordinary person in modern society. The plot of the novel was full of ups and downs, and the thoughts were profound. It was a good book worth reading. "The First Half of My Life"-Lingdu This was a novel about the growth of urban women. Through the protagonist's experience, it showed the hesitation, struggle and growth of modern urban women. The plot of the novel was complicated and the emotions were sincere. 3 "Why Do I Feel Silent?"-Gu Man It was a very popular urban novel about the love story between a boy and a girl. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and the language was beautiful. It was a good book worth reading. 4. To Our Lost Youth-Xinyi Dock It was an urban novel about the youth of two boys and a girl. The plot of the novel was twisted and the emotions were sincere. It was a good youth memorial novel. 5."A slight smile is very beautiful"-Gu Man This was a very popular online romance novel about the love story between two college students. The plot of the novel is light and humorous, the characters are vivid and the language is beautiful. It is a good book worth reading. I hope these recommendations will be helpful. If you need anything else, feel free to ask me anytime.

I'm going to write a novel, but I don't know what to write? Dear novel fans, please give me your opinions! On campus.

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2024-09-26 03:02

To write a novel, one needed to first determine the storyline and character settings. For example, a mysterious magician appeared in the school or students began a strange adventure. In terms of character setting, a protagonist could be created. He/she had a unique personality and experience, which was the core of the story. They could also set up some supporting characters with different backgrounds and goals to help or challenge the main character. In the process of writing, one could advance the story by describing the scene, the character's psychology, and actions. At the same time, he had to pay attention to the rationality of the character setting and plot setting to avoid unreasonable character behavior logic or chaotic plot logic. Writing is a process that requires constant practice and improvement. I hope that I can explore my creativity and imagination through writing to create a wonderful novel.

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