I wrote a short love story (prose), everyone give some opinions
To write a short love story (prose), you can refer to the following suggestions: 1. Decide on the theme and emotional elements of the story. 2. Choose an interesting plot to make the story more vivid. 3. Use vivid language and images to describe the characters and plot. 4. Make sure the story is filled with strong emotions and conflicts that resonate with the reader. The ending should be surprising and make the reader feel true happiness and satisfaction. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I hope you can write a wonderful novel!
Everyone, please help me take a look at the "Lily" that I wrote and give me your opinions.
An example of his feelings after reading Lily is as follows: " Lily " was a novel that described the growth of young girls, family and love. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and the language was beautiful. I was deeply interested in this book and spent a lot of time reading it. In this book, I felt the author's deep insight into human nature and his cherishment of life. The author reveals the complexity of human nature by describing the protagonist's growth and makes people realize that everyone has their own unique character and destiny. In addition, the author also described the power of kinship and love to make readers feel the importance of kinship and love and educate readers to cherish these precious emotions. In the end, the author also painted a beautiful picture of life through beautiful language to let the readers feel the beauty of life. I think this book is a good novel worth reading. It has taught me many truths about life and made me cherish life and family more.
Are there any nice names in novels? Everyone, please give your opinions!
The names of many novels can arouse the interest and resonance of readers, so a good novel name should be able to attract the attention of readers and leave a deep impression. Here are some of the titles that I think sound better: 1. Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens Lord of the Rings-Tolkien Dream of the Red Chamber-Cao Xueqin 4 Harry Potter-Rowling 5. One Hundred Years of Solitude by Garcia Marquez Romance of the Three Kingdoms-Luo Guanzhong 7 Water Margins-Shi Nai 'an 8 Journey to the West-Wu Chengen 9 The Scholars-Wu Jingzi Ordinary World-Lu Yao Of course, these were just some examples. In fact, there were many other novels with very nice names. The most important thing was that a good novel title should be able to accurately convey the theme and emotions of the novel and attract the interest of the readers.
I wrote a 100,000-word novel (handwritten) and hope to publish it, but I don't know which submission route to take. I hope everyone can give their opinions.
Writing novels is a very interesting thing, and I encourage everyone to write novels. If you have already written 100,000 words, you can consider submitting it to a publishing house or an online platform. The specific submission method can refer to the following suggestions: 1. Contribution from the publishing house The publishing house usually had to submit the submission materials according to their requirements, including the sample chapter, manuscript paper, word count requirements, author introduction, and so on. There were many submission channels for publishing houses, such as literary publishing houses, publishing houses, publishing companies, etc. You could search for relevant submission information on the Internet. 2. Contribution to the online platform To submit a novel on an online platform, one usually had to upload an electronic version of the novel, including the cover, introduction, and text, and then wait for the reviewers to review it. When submitting, one had to provide an introduction to the author, a detailed description of the work, word count requirements, and so on. Some well-known online platforms had Qidian, Zongheng, Yuewen, and so on, which could be used to search for relevant submission information. No matter which submission method you choose, you need to carefully prepare the submission materials to ensure the quality of the work. At the same time, he could also understand the publishing standards and requirements of the publishing house and online platform in order to better prepare his work. I hope my suggestion will be helpful.
Hello everyone, I want to write a detective novel. What is the most taboo in writing detective novels? Please give your opinions and opinions.
The biggest taboo when writing detective stories was the lack of creativity and inspiration, which would make the readers feel bored and give up reading. In addition, the lack of a compact plot and complex character relationships will also make readers feel confused and dissatisfied. When writing detective novels, you can also consider avoiding some common writing pitfalls such as too dull reasoning process, meaningless evidence display, meaningless character development, and so on. The most important thing was to maintain the cohesiveness and logic of the story to avoid contradictions and loopholes. In addition, in order to make it easier for the readers to understand and accept, you can consider using some common detective novel techniques such as setting suspense, using multiple pieces of evidence, and portraying the character and motivation of key characters. Writing detective stories required constant exploration and experimentation, as well as constant learning and improvement of writing skills.
I have the first chapter of a novel. I hope everyone can give me some opinions and see if it's attractive!
The first chapter is very important to attract the reader's attention and establish the foundation of the story. Here are some suggestions that might be useful: The beginning should be fascinating. Use some suspense, tension, or exciting scenes to attract the reader's interest. For example," A pair of eyes stared at him in the dark. He didn't know what it was, but he felt a chill coming from his body." 2. Introduce the protagonist. The first chapter introduced the identity, background, and personality of the protagonist so that the readers could understand the characteristics and motives of the protagonist. For example," Li Yun is a young university student from an ordinary family. He has always wanted to be an outstanding person." 3. Set the suspense. In the first chapter, some suspense could be used to attract the reader's interest. For example," He doesn't know what it is, but he feels a chill coming from his body " would make the reader want to continue reading to find out more. 4. Build the foundation of the story. In the first chapter, the reader should understand the background and theme of the story, as well as the motives and goals of the protagonist. For example," Li Yun is a young university student, he comes from an ordinary family, and he has always wanted to be an outstanding person." This information would allow the reader to understand the protagonist's background and goals. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I hope the first chapter of the novel can attract the attention of the readers!
The ending of 'Triple Door' is so well written. Everyone, give me your opinions.
The ending of Triple Door was indeed very well written. It allowed the readers to feel the infinite possibilities and also deeply feel the author's thoughts on human nature, life, and the world. Here are some suggestions that might help improve the ending of Triple Door: 1. To highlight the growth and changes of the protagonist. In the ending, the protagonist's change and growth could be more clearly shown, allowing the reader to feel that he/she had gradually grown from a weak and helpless person to a character who could think independently, face difficulties, and solve problems. 2. An open ending. At the end of the novel, it could continue to be open, allowing the readers to have more room for imagination, allowing them to think about the fate and future of the protagonist. 3. Increase the rhythm of the story. At the end of the novel, the rhythm of the story could be strengthened, allowing the readers to feel the infinite possibilities and clearly feel the development process and climax of the story. 4. Prominent the deeper meaning of the theme. At the end of the novel, the deeper meaning of the theme could be more clearly highlighted, allowing the readers to better understand the thoughts that the author wanted to express. To sum up, through the above improvements, the ending of Triple Door can be more perfect, allowing readers to feel the charm and meaning of the novel more deeply.
May I ask for everyone's analysis and opinions on the story after One Piece?
The analysis and opinions of the story after One Piece can refer to the following suggestions: The story of One Piece is over. You can refer to the readers and critics 'comments and opinions on the story to understand the advantages and disadvantages of the story. The story of One Piece was set in a fictional world. The story took place on the sea and revolved around the four emperors, admirals, pirates, and so on. Therefore, the analysis and views of the story may also be affected by the setting of the world. 3. The readers and critics have different opinions on the story of One Piece. Some people think that the story is very exciting, while others think that the plot is a little dragged or too long. Therefore, the analysis and views of the story also needed to take into account the views of different readers or critics.
The following is my analysis of iPartment 4's plot. Everyone can take a look and give some opinions. Thank you!
iPartment 4 was a TV series directed by Wang Yuan and starred by Chen He, Lou Yixiao, Sun Yizhou, Li Jinming, Zhao Ruiwen, etc. The show was aired in China on January 20, 2022. The following is my analysis of iPartment 4: First episode: The first episode was mainly about a group of young people returning to their apartment to reorganize and renovate. At the same time, some accidents happened, such as a guest suddenly passing away and a girl coming to the apartment to look for her long-lost relatives. The entire episode was packed with plot twists and turns, showing the friendship and love between young people, and at the same time letting the audience feel their attitude and pursuit towards life. Second episode: The second episode mainly talked about the experiences and challenges of a group of young people in the workplace. They had to face various interpersonal relationships and workplace rules, as well as solve some financial problems. The entire episode showed the competition and cooperation in the workplace, as well as the thoughts and actions of young people in the face of difficulties. Third episode: The third episode mainly told the story of a group of young people on their journey. They came to a mysterious island where some mysterious things happened and they had to face various dangers and challenges. The entire episode showcased the adventure and exploration of the journey, as well as the courage and tenacity of young people in the face of challenges. The fourth episode: The fourth episode was mainly about a group of young people returning to their apartment to face their past and present. The entire episode showed the young people's thoughts and choices in the face of the past and the future, as well as their tenacity and courage in the face of difficulties. I think iPartment 4's plot is compact and full of ups and downs. At the same time, it also shows the attitude and values of young people. Every character in the play had a unique personality and experience that left a deep impression on the audience. In addition, the picture and sound effects of the play were also very good, creating a strong family atmosphere and youthful atmosphere.
I wrote a poem and everyone gave me some suggestions.
Of course, I'm happy to provide you with some opinions and suggestions. Please tell me which poem you wrote and what you want to improve on.
Who wrote the short story 'Love of Life'?
Jack London wrote the short story 'Love of Life'.