Well, first of all, it completely distorts the relationship between Hinata and Naruto. In the official story, they have a relationship built on mutual understanding and support. Secondly, it sends a wrong message. The Naruto series is all about positive values like equality and respect among characters. This 'slave' concept violates those values. And thirdly, it may make many fans of the original series uncomfortable as it's so far from what they know and love about the Naruto world.
One problem is that it goes against the characters' established personalities. Hinata is a strong - willed character with her own values and Naruto respects others. Another issue is that it's a very unethical concept. Slavery has no place in the Naruto world which is about friendship and growth.
Chapter 287, ", Let the Grenade Launcher Roar!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Valen Zu's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from But just as they were diligently digging holes, something happened. to The former would have to face a military court, or on the frontline,.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with There was no need to wait for the enemy to come closer before firing. This was not an ambush;
Chapter 287, ", Let the grenade launcher roar!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Valen Zu's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Valen Zu'an's 9th Platoon needed to cross a 35-kilometer stretch of... and ending on The number was unknown, but a significant Mechanical Legion was under....
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