Character development is key. For Snape, it could explore his past traumas and how they shape his interactions with Hermione. For Hermione, it might show her growing in ways beyond her academic achievements. The plot should be engaging, not just a rehash of the original story. It could involve new threats to the wizarding world or personal challenges for the characters. The dialogue has to be on point, reflecting the unique voices of Snape and Hermione. Good fanfiction also has a consistent writing style that draws you in and keeps you reading for a long time. And the pacing is important too. It can't be too slow that you get bored, nor too fast that you miss out on important character moments or plot developments.
Chapter 612, "There's been an accident on the show!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Shengrong's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, His family's residence used the mortise and tenon structure in many....
Chapter 703, "Slap Oneself", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Wu Daoshan quietly raised his head to size up Zhao Lang, and sure...
Chapter 519, "I'm Here to Participate in the Program", is the clearest early answer because it turns Younger President Jin's situation into a concrete plot event.
Chapter 287, "Saved", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with For five consecutive days, the search and rescue team had not... and closes on Failing to obtain any news after numerous attempts, Lu Xingchao had....
Chapter 431, "Su Yinwan Is Here Too?!", is the clearest early answer because it turns President Shang's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with [Holy shit, why is Su Yinwan on this show too???] [!!!
Chapter 408, "You Can't Be on the Same Team!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Flash Change's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Zheng Xun fell silent after he understood the situation.
Chapter 265, "This Time You Must Help Me", is the clearest early answer because it turns Weibo's situation into a concrete plot event.
Chapter 581, "Where is everyone? Where have they all gone?!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Are's situation into a concrete plot event.
Chapter 376, "I'm Just Afraid You Don't Need Me Anymore", is the clearest early answer because it turns Crown Prince Jin's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on The phone call fell into a long silence.
Chapter 300, "You're retaking the college entrance exam?!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with I dropped out." Jiang Li said calmly.