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I'm a person who has just learned to write novels. I've written an opening and I'd like to ask for your opinions, big brothers and sisters.

2024-09-21 09:08
Eastern Divine Realm, Godking Palace nIn the golden hall, a man was sitting on the throne with a frown as if he was thinking about something. At this moment, a middle-aged man whose body was glowing with a dark red light walked in. He looked at the man sitting on the throne. The man also stood up and looked at him. The hall fell silent. nAfter a moment of silence, the middle-aged man took the lead and said,"Ying Long, you've been sitting on the throne of the Eastern Godly King for hundreds of thousands of years, right? It's time to change someone. I know your injuries haven't recovered yet. I, the Western Godly King Zeus, won't bully the weak." After saying that, he laughed loudly. Ying Long spat out a mouthful of blood with a furious expression and cursed,"You f * cking despicable person. If you weren't in the East." You ambushed me during the Western Conference, causing me to be heavily injured. If it wasn't for you and the Devil World working together to get Tianmo Xingtian to slaughter the elites of my Divine Realm while I wasn't around, how could my Eastern Divine Realm be occupied by a puny Western Divine Realm like you? I'm truly unwilling to accept this…" The last four words were shouted out by Yinglong. It could be seen how unwilling this former Lord of the Divine Realm was now. Zeus smiled and said,"So what? In the past, it was your Eastern Divine Realm that suppressed our West for hundreds of millions of years. First, it was the heavens that caused the Eastern Divine Realm to decline in your hands. What can you do?" Yinglong said to Zeus,"You're smart all your life, but you're muddle-headed all your life. The heavens destined you to occupy my Eastern Divine Realm and be trapped in this Godly King Palace forever. Hahahahaha." After saying that, Yinglong laughed loudly. At this moment, Zeus also felt that something was wrong. He immediately released his divine sense. As a result, his divine sense could not leave the Godly King Palace no matter what. While Zeus was busy thinking of a way, Ying Long said,"You don't have to waste your effort. This divine hall was born in Chaos with Great God Pangu. Before Great God Pangu sacrificed himself to transform into heaven and earth, he changed the entire divine hall into a Chaos God-trapping Array. Anyone below Great God Pangu's cultivation base will be trapped. Unless they have the blood essence of the previous Godly Kings, they will never be able to get out. Hahahahaha..." Zeus said angrily,"Then I'll extract your blood essence." Ying Long laughed,"Unfortunately, you'll never get it." Ying Long had just finished speaking when he saw a burst of intense white light. Zeus immediately activated his full defense and cursed," Yinglong, you're a f * cking lunatic. How dare you self-destruct?" After the white light passed, everything within a hundred miles was flattened except for the Godly King Palace. Ying Long's voice drifted over from the sky," Zeus, the Eastern Divine Realm will definitely stand at the peak of the Divine Realm in the near future. You will wait in the Divine Hall for my reincarnation to ascend to the throne again, hahahaha... The voice grew softer and softer until it disappeared.
2024-09-21 12:48

Writing a novel required constant practice and improvement. A good beginning should be able to attract the reader's attention and guide the reader into the story world. Here are some suggestions for starting a novel: Prominent theme: At the beginning of the novel, you need to clarify the theme and tone of the story so that the reader knows what the story is about and what kind of emotions and conflicts the story will bring. 2. Create suspense: Create suspense at the beginning of the novel to attract the reader's attention. For example, you can use a fascinating description of the scene or an unexpected plot twist to create suspense. 3. Prominent characters: At the beginning of the novel, you need to highlight the characteristics and personalities of the main characters so that the readers can better understand the characters 'personalities and emotions. Using titles and subtitles: Using titles and subtitles can help readers better understand the theme and plot of the novel. 5. Be concise and clear: The beginning of the novel should be concise and clear, not too long or overly complicated. Here is an example you can refer to: When Emily woke up, she found herself lying in a strange place surrounded by darkness. She tried to stand up but found that her body was very weak and seemed to have lost consciousness. She looked around and found herself in a secret room. There were some strange paintings hanging on the walls and some ancient books scattered on the ground. She didn't know what had happened or where she was, but she knew that she had to find a way out as soon as possible.

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In which novels did the male lead have a prince and the female lead's name was Feng Xi?

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2025-03-24 16:18

The male leads of the two novels,"Feng Di Mou" and "Feng Qiu Huang", were both Wangye, and the female lead was called Feng Xi. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

Can you help me think of the names of some evil bosses in ancient fantasy novels?

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2025-03-24 16:18

Of course, the following are the names of some evil bosses: 1 Demon Emperor, Evil God 2 Heavenly Demon Lone Wolf 3 Evil Spirit King Lord of Darkness Ghost Lord Blood Devil God-Emperor Evil Dragon Sorcerer 8 Heavenly Fiend Demon Lord Demon Eye Demon King Heavenly Demon Lone Wolf (continued) Evil God Throne The Black Magician Ghost Emperor Evil Dragon Sorcerer (2) The Door of Darkness Demon Emperor's Eye Lone Wolf (3) Demon Monarch Evil Spirit King (2) Blood Devil God-Emperor (2) Dark Lord (2) Ghost Monarch (2) Demon Lord Tiansha (2) Demon Eye Demon King (2) Black Mage (2) Ghost Emperor (2) Evil Dragon Sorcerer (3) The Door of Darkness (2) Lone Wolf (4) Cthulhu King (3) Blood Devil God-Emperor (3) Dark Lord (3) Ghost Monarch (3) Demon Lord Tiansha (3) Demon Lord (3) Evil Spirit King (3) Blood Devil God-Emperor (4) The Door of Darkness (4) Lone Wolf (5) Cthulhu King (5) Blood Devil God-Emperor (5) Lord of Darkness (5) Ghost Lord (5) Demon Lord Tiansha (5) Demon Lord (5) Evil Spirit King (5) Blood Devil God-Emperor (6)

What were Ye Shengtao's works?

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2025-03-24 16:18

Ye Shengtao is famous in China. His works are very rich. The following are some of his representative works: Golden Age: This is one of Ye Shengtao's most famous novels. It tells the story of a little boy growing up from the countryside to the city, reflecting some important events and characters in modern Chinese history. 2. The Hen: This is a novel full of warmth and humor. It tells the story of a hen and her children, reflecting the importance of family and kinship. " Lilliput ": This is a science fiction novel that tells the story of a Lilliput. Through this story, the relationship between humans and extraterrestrial life is explored. 4. Bonded Labourers: This is a novel about laborers. Through this story, it reveals the dark side of society and the difficult situation of workers. 5. My Early Life: This is a reminiscing novel about Ye Shengtao's early life and experiences, reflecting his growth and life trajectory. In addition, Ye Shengtao also had many other excellent novels, essays, and essays, such as "Summer Night Nostalgia" and "Ni Huanzhi", which had high literary value and educational significance.

Xiangxi is a contemporary Chinese novel set in the ancient city of Fenghuang. What's wrong with that?

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2025-03-24 16:17

Xiangxi was a contemporary Chinese novel, but it was not set in the ancient city of Fenghuang. Xiangxi tells the story of a group of Chinese explorers who went to the mysterious Xiangxi area in the 1980s. The ancient city of Fenghuang was a famous historical and cultural city in Hunan Province of China, but it was not the main setting of the novel Xiangxi.

Please recommend a novel about time travel. I want to read this kind of writing style, but I forgot the specific title.

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2025-03-24 16:17

If you like modern romance novels, Born Queen might suit your taste. The female lead was constantly reincarnating. This time, she was going to borrow the body of a little girl. If you like fantasy and romance novels,"The Demon of the Evil World: The World of Women" might interest you. The female protagonist was in a crisis of slaughter in the foreign world, surrounded by many male protagonists. If you like ancient romance and time-travel novels,"The Demon King's Crazy Concubine: The Hundred-Faced Lady" might be able to attract you. The female lead transmigrated into the body of an arrogant and despotic young master and was engaged to the current crown prince. If you are more interested in other types of novels, you can provide more information so that I can recommend them better. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah~😗

Please recommend a modern urban novel. The male protagonist has special skills such as martial arts, and the female protagonists are both beautiful and sexy. The relationship between the characters was one man and many women.

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2025-03-24 16:16

😋Well, I have a few books to recommend to you. First, he recommended "Please Come In, Your Highness!" The male and female protagonists were good brothers. The female protagonist had a sexy and mature figure, and the male protagonist knew martial arts. There was also "The Female CEO's Super Bodyguard". The male lead was a top-notch expert, and the female lead was a cold and beautiful CEO. Finally, there was "My Cold-looking Female CEO." The male lead was a super soldier king, and the female lead was also a cold-looking female CEO. It's all modern urban themed, it fits your requirements! I hope you like my recommendation, Mwah ~😗

Was there a novel where the female protagonist traveled to ancient times and picked up a bear named Jindou and a mouse?

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2025-03-24 16:16

The female protagonist of the book,"Crossing the Galaxy to Farm and Raise a Dragon God," traveled to another world and picked up a golden dragon on a deserted island. She also raised a mouse called Jindou. I'll recommend it to you. I hope you like my recommendation. Muah ~

Ancient novels with historical records

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2025-03-24 16:15

Ancient novels referred to those novels that were reflected in historical records. They were usually regarded as literary works rather than historical documents. The following are some examples of ancient novels that have been recorded in history: Dream of the Red Chamber: It was considered a classic work of ancient Chinese novels in the Qing Dynasty. 2. Water Margins: It was a long novel written by Shi Naian, a novelist of the Ming Dynasty in China. It described the resistance and struggle of a group of righteous thieves. 3. Journey to the West: It was a novel written by Wu Chengen, a novelist of the Ming Dynasty. It told the story of Sun Wukong and others helping Tang Sanzang to obtain the scriptures. Romance of the Three Kingdoms: It was a long novel written by Luo Guanzhong, a novelist of the Ming Dynasty in China. It described the struggles and wars between historical figures during the Three Kingdoms period. 5 Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio: A collection of short stories written by Pu Songling, a Chinese novelist of the Qing Dynasty. It contains many stories of ghosts and immortals. These novels had their own unique literary style and storyline, which were widely praised and influenced later literary works.

Recalling what kind of thoughts and feelings Lu Xun expressed as an author

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2025-03-24 16:15

My answer might be a little vague. Can you provide more background information or context to help me better understand your question and give a more accurate answer?

Can you recommend some 2011 time-travel romance novels?

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2025-03-24 16:15

I recommend a few novels to you. They are: [Wild Queen's Love I: The Enchanted Lady]: The story of a fierce beauty from 2011 who traveled to ancient times and got entangled with an evil prince and other characters. Completed. "Time Travel: The Emperor Entangled with the Chef": It tells the story of a fat girl who traveled through ancient times and how a chef who made candied haws became outstanding, as well as the emotional entanglement between her and the emperor and others. Completed. [Khitan Concubine: A woman transmigrated to become the Khitan King's Concubine, and the grudge between her and the King of the Southern Courtyard.] Completed. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

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