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fatim1111
fatim1111Lv45yr
2018-12-03 12:48

Lol if ur looking for a mary sue female lead and a cold male lead that MAGICALLY falls in love at first with the fmc then read this 😂😂 this story is so silly its killing the few brain cells i have. No offense but i feel like its written by a 15 years old ****ger for 9 year olds. Seriously who falls in love at the first paragraph of the novel 😂😂😂 at least it made me laugh at how the personlity of the SUPPOSEDLY cold male lead changed 180 degrees after the first chapter. Dropping it ! Peace ✌️

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fatim1111
fatim1111Lv4

Why is t.eenager censored? Weired??

BookKitty
BookKittyLv13

You just basically explained almost all the FL novels here xD (that's being translated)

PhatKidLovesCake
PhatKidLovesCakeLv11

Ikr. Sometimes i wonder who chooses the FL novels to be translated 😂 since the start of wn energy stones I’ve legit only voted for two FL stories: the best - it’s hard to be man...and the okay - national prince. At least the ML stories have bits of variety in character even if the stories are almost cookie cutter. But all the FL is the same. Heck, even their book covers all look the same 😂 even the og ones.

Mr_Ark
Mr_ArkLv6

This novel got lots of energy stones

AGenericName
AGenericNameLv4

quantity over quality lol

PhatKidLovesCake:Ikr. Sometimes i wonder who chooses the FL novels to be translated 😂 since the start of wn energy stones I’ve legit only voted for two FL stories: the best - it’s hard to be man...and the okay - national prince. At least the ML stories have bits of variety in character even if the stories are almost cookie cutter. But all the FL is the same. Heck, even their book covers all look the same 😂 even the og ones.
Sceer
SceerLv4

try Lady Cultivator. Although it's quite slow paced

PhatKidLovesCake:Ikr. Sometimes i wonder who chooses the FL novels to be translated 😂 since the start of wn energy stones I’ve legit only voted for two FL stories: the best - it’s hard to be man...and the okay - national prince. At least the ML stories have bits of variety in character even if the stories are almost cookie cutter. But all the FL is the same. Heck, even their book covers all look the same 😂 even the og ones.
PhatKidLovesCake
PhatKidLovesCakeLv11

Hmmm... depends. When does her ML arrive/get mentioned?

Sceer:try Lady Cultivator. Although it's quite slow paced
MarianInairaM
MarianInairaMLv5

Well I’m bored, so bored I decided to sacrifice my brain cells too. Don’t worry they grow back eventually. Let me see how long I can last, wish me luck!😊

Daoist_GodsEye
Daoist_GodsEyeLv5

welp never read a FL before and yeah all FL cover was all the same hahahha

Author_Shizu
Author_ShizuLv4

Couldn't tolerate 15 chapters.

LuTingxiaoNingXi
LuTingxiaoNingXiLv5

Hahahaha

MarianInairaM:Well I’m bored, so bored I decided to sacrifice my brain cells too. Don’t worry they grow back eventually. Let me see how long I can last, wish me luck!😊
Jinki
JinkiLv10

rip...you've been scammed, brain cells don't grow back. Abort mission when you start feeling butterflies in your stomach or europhia in your head, it's your body's way of telling you to stop, take a moment, your in too deep.

MarianInairaM:Well I’m bored, so bored I decided to sacrifice my brain cells too. Don’t worry they grow back eventually. Let me see how long I can last, wish me luck!😊
MoonPhoenix
MoonPhoenixLv12

Lol 😂😂😂

Jinki:rip...you've been scammed, brain cells don't grow back. Abort mission when you start feeling butterflies in your stomach or europhia in your head, it's your body's way of telling you to stop, take a moment, your in too deep.
ace_18
ace_18Lv5

😂😇

Maera
MaeraLv11

Thank you for saving me from waiting my time.

Maera
MaeraLv11

Thank you for saving me from wasting* my time. Damn autocorrect...

Maera:Thank you for saving me from waiting my time.
NILOFAR
NILOFARLv5

Read doomsday wonderland it’s not bad and there is no romance

PhatKidLovesCake:Ikr. Sometimes i wonder who chooses the FL novels to be translated 😂 since the start of wn energy stones I’ve legit only voted for two FL stories: the best - it’s hard to be man...and the okay - national prince. At least the ML stories have bits of variety in character even if the stories are almost cookie cutter. But all the FL is the same. Heck, even their book covers all look the same 😂 even the og ones.
PhatKidLovesCake
PhatKidLovesCakeLv11

I dropped that ages ago round when it first started 😂 cant remember why. I think i got annoyed at the mc

NILOFAR:Read doomsday wonderland it’s not bad and there is no romance
NILOFAR
NILOFARLv5

I would recommend to pick it up again but you do you

PhatKidLovesCake:I dropped that ages ago round when it first started 😂 cant remember why. I think i got annoyed at the mc
mai_twt
mai_twtLv10

Y'all made it to 10 chapters or so, but me and my braincells have already given up right after reading the synopsis and the reviews. 😂

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FAiri110
FAiri110Lv5

I've read till chapter 30 and tbh, I give up. The notion of little to no misunderstanding is interesting but the story it self is so lacking. No depth at all. Just from the first 5 chapters, we can see the events are highly illogical with no further explanation given. The plot is full of holes, I feel like reading a story from a 12-year-old. It lacks character introduction, inconsistent names / characters, rush story telling and weak world-building. Just from what I read so far, there are already a cannon fodder introduced and silenced without explanation whatsoever (ei. The girl who admired the expensive car). The romance? It was so abrupt you feel like "wait...what?". They fell for each other and get married in a few days. Instant trust, with no hint of romance at all. The only detailed description about the characters are on how they looks like (*insert a lot of desctiptive*). The MC has a weak character that suddenly turns aggressive (cat fight) just from a few insult. It's not like she's a transmigrator, reincarnator or an assassin with a mysterious background either, come on author! The only thing that's interesting is the male lead (not having a paralyzed cold face like other romance novel troupe). That's it. More than 3000+ chapters for this kind of story is not worth it. You might get dizzy from the constant plot-jumping, so be warned! I try to give this story a chance and I failed. I might be too harsh given that there are more decent Romance stories here lately, idk. I better off get to other novels here. Adieu.

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