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Geo7594
Geo7594Lv156yr
2018-12-04 06:23

The story is fantastic so far, but I do hope the FL will get much stronger and smarter too and not fall for scheming plots. I don’t wish for her to be saved all the time but to save herself. I will wait on the story a little more.

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lil_9ingroove
lil_9ingrooveLv4

Yes

Calithea
CalitheaLv10

yup I really hope that FL can stand on her own two feet with courage and confidence fighting her enemies.

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FAiri110
FAiri110Lv5

I've read till chapter 30 and tbh, I give up. The notion of little to no misunderstanding is interesting but the story it self is so lacking. No depth at all. Just from the first 5 chapters, we can see the events are highly illogical with no further explanation given. The plot is full of holes, I feel like reading a story from a 12-year-old. It lacks character introduction, inconsistent names / characters, rush story telling and weak world-building. Just from what I read so far, there are already a cannon fodder introduced and silenced without explanation whatsoever (ei. The girl who admired the expensive car). The romance? It was so abrupt you feel like "wait...what?". They fell for each other and get married in a few days. Instant trust, with no hint of romance at all. The only detailed description about the characters are on how they looks like (*insert a lot of desctiptive*). The MC has a weak character that suddenly turns aggressive (cat fight) just from a few insult. It's not like she's a transmigrator, reincarnator or an assassin with a mysterious background either, come on author! The only thing that's interesting is the male lead (not having a paralyzed cold face like other romance novel troupe). That's it. More than 3000+ chapters for this kind of story is not worth it. You might get dizzy from the constant plot-jumping, so be warned! I try to give this story a chance and I failed. I might be too harsh given that there are more decent Romance stories here lately, idk. I better off get to other novels here. Adieu.

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