Well, writing isn't bad, but this story is very frustrating. The interaction isn't really noteworthy. Characters feel lifeless. The author is a huge fan of itachi and this fact will be reminded in every chapter. He'll continue to say that itachi is talented more than mc. Also,it's not clear exactly what wishes that mc made, but mc has apparently the psuedo six eye. Now, what does he mean by pseudo six eye isn't clear .He can apparently see things at an atomic level, but it's still a pseudo.He somehow has infinity, but with chakra, it's easily passable, I'm not exactly sure how infinity is passable with just chakra . Overall, if the author's a fan of itachi, I'd suggest writing an itachi fanfic. Anyway, good luck to author's future endeavours.
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LIKEWhy waste time reading untill 11chap if ppl get bored/annoyed after few? For me if I read 5chaps and it is annoying I wont try to read more even if it changes after 5-10 more chaps. First 5 chaps need to be good as presentation. Same with food if it looks shiity u wont even try it. If clothes look unappealing it doesn’t matter that they are comfy. Same with books. Good synopsis and cover makes u wanna try , few begining chaps show u if it worth at all.
itachi1010:Everything is explained at least reach chapter 11
What is annoying? The fact you don't know the wishes? the fact you want MC to be the best right off the bat but isn’t? If you can’t read the 10 chapters then drop, I don't care if your only reason to drop is something so dumb
AKARYUU:Why waste time reading untill 11chap if ppl get bored/annoyed after few? For me if I read 5chaps and it is annoying I wont try to read more even if it changes after 5-10 more chaps. First 5 chaps need to be good as presentation. Same with food if it looks shiity u wont even try it. If clothes look unappealing it doesn’t matter that they are comfy. Same with books. Good synopsis and cover makes u wanna try , few begining chaps show u if it worth at all.
Your distorted view of Itachi, is what ruins is storie
itachi1010:What is annoying? The fact you don't know the wishes? the fact you want MC to be the best right off the bat but isn’t? If you can’t read the 10 chapters then drop, I don't care if your only reason to drop is something so dumb
believe what you want, if you think a story with 3 stars has no problems and with you
itachi1010:It's not distorted when I’m getting from the novel. It's not distorted when the creator of Naruto made it himself, go ahead and prove me wrong. If you have proof and not some fan theory, I will listen
Make a psychological analysis of Itachi and you will understand that he is a narcissist, he loved Konoha is Sasuke for believing that they were the only way to realize his goal, peace
itachi1010:Go ahead, I’m willing to listen. All I hear is fan theory, when I go out of my way to do some research. This is the last time I will reply to you since it is a waste of time, I will only reply if you bring something meaningful here