With 10 Chapters of this Fic posted, I am writing this review to better give an idea of what this Fic is about. 1. MC is a fun loving person while being somewhat mischievous and vain. He likes being the centre of attention of a crowd, but won't go out of his way to seek attention. 2. MC chose the Binder Essence because it was one of the Essence available at 500 Points that enabled him an easy way to empower his allies, friends and family. He will not use the loyalty and command function unless absolutely necessary. 3. This Fic is slow paced and I don't know when it will reach the point where Canon starts. So, read at your own risk. 4. There will be a few OCs (2 or 3) who will play major roles in this story. If you don't like this, this isn't for you. 5. By the time of Canon, MC will be OP. Like Super Devils level OP. Maybe more. Do what you will with this info. That's all I wanted to say for now. If you have any questions for me, ask them here. I will answer them to the best of my ability.

Remove this if you want, but the unwillingness to even give people a proper story to read before they get their hands on it is awful. Word count chapters are the bane of ff's, and it's always an automatic bad rating.

cool concept but also awful direction you choose here. i bet it wont complete anyway because you make your mc able to control other people action with magic. how do you even make proper ending if the mc have that power? is human interaction even important for mc with those godly power? imagine person playing family with controllable doll? hod does it end? boredom.

There are 2 kinds of dxd fics, 1st where the mc is a student at kuho,2nd where the mc is born into a rich/influential supernatural family. This story comes in the 2nd category, up until chapter 5 it has been extremely cliche nothing unique his power basically just makes him a gary stu.the whole story is predictable as this same scenario has been used in way too many stories.

Seems promising so far, but author should be careful about using such op essences. A lot of fanfics fall apart and turn into “MC grinds an anime power and then practices a different anime power and then shares this power with this waifu and then becomes god etc.” the blank and archmage just synergize too perfectly. Since you are early in the story I recommend planning ahead how powerful you want the character to be at each stage so you don’t need to nerf him later. For instance he probably doesn’t need to be super powerful to defeat riser or the nun guy, so you could lock one of the essences behind his defeat or have a quest to break a bottleneck. Maybe he was able to afford the essences for less points by locking them behind objectives instead of being manipulated by the rob. Just some friendly suggestion, best of luck with the story

what are the essences used? i am too lazy to read the chapter with the list

nice story and it's hard to find story like this.. and btw did you have account at fanfiction _net?

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Pretty good start. Keep it up author!