cool concept but also awful direction you choose here. i bet it wont complete anyway because you make your mc able to control other people action with magic. how do you even make proper ending if the mc have that power? is human interaction even important for mc with those godly power? imagine person playing family with controllable doll? hod does it end? boredom.
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When did I ever imply that MC will control other people? Just because the Binder Essence has the ability to induce infallible loyalty in Marked beings, doesn't mean MC will make use of it. Not to mention he can choose to set the loyalty level at slight trust at the minimum. Additionally, I have portrayed the MC as a fun-loving person with a slight tendency to be mischievous and vain until now. Though you would have known that if you read all the available chapters first before leaving a review.
i will read your fanfic but I kind of wished u did n't add that loyalty mark stuff , convincing ppl to place their own loyal in u with your own charisma badass , inducing loyal by marking just feels cheap, i saw someone try to do the same thing u did and their fanfic flopped
its not adding, essences are made by OTHER people, and their abilities are made by those same people, also, read the name of said essence for me (i dont mean to be rude)
